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Published: 2003-08-25 23:53:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 86; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 15
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those wasted,tainted fingertips.
these pain-felt,
numb-bled
stereotypes...
and all we can do is watch it all
watch it all
pass us by.
but i cant be here for
forever
with you.
because the last
time i tried,
you threw up
your hands and
walked...
walked away.
you whispered
in my ear that you'd
give me a call,
but did you lose your
nerve...
when you punched in my
number was it like
punching yourself?
because i never recieved
never recieved
that call.
and i tried.
oh god...did i try.
i wanted to feel you
when you werent around,
and i wanted to scream your
name when you'd turn me in
circles.
but i guess they werent circles,
i was walking in squares.
and i kept ending up
ending up
at step one.
i ended up
ended up
at step one.
and you werent there
this time.
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Comments: 17
prozacsaves [2003-09-13 23:09:49 +0000 UTC]
ahhhh I know exactly how you feel with this one. it describes a relationship I was in not too long ago. beautiful.
-Cait.
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vampiretr In reply to prozacsaves [2003-09-14 01:25:49 +0000 UTC]
danke. relationships are...interesting.
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WitchMithras [2003-09-05 16:09:58 +0000 UTC]
so thats how girls feel....... wow i mess up lots of times.... "and i thought she liked the circles, err squares"
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hellboundangel [2003-08-29 08:55:49 +0000 UTC]
it's not a hard piece to compliment. nice work
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vampiretr In reply to kara [2003-08-26 19:57:14 +0000 UTC]
i dont think you could intrude without me liking it
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themaxx2001 [2003-08-26 00:23:55 +0000 UTC]
beautiful work as always babe. Keep it up. *Dumps more complements or her head*
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vampiretr In reply to themaxx2001 [2003-08-26 19:58:10 +0000 UTC]
aaaaaaaaaah! the compliments make me blush like crazy! damn you people
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rudhira [2003-08-25 23:59:27 +0000 UTC]
Oh, Vampi. Its beautiful.
I love the repetition.
Its got this unique feel.
A mixture of melancholy, angsts, anger and indignation.
Its wonderful.
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vampiretr In reply to rudhira [2003-08-26 00:00:42 +0000 UTC]
*puts a garbage bag over her body and hides from the compliments*
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rudhira In reply to vampiretr [2003-08-26 00:01:21 +0000 UTC]
*finds her and forces them along her flesh*
compliment wash.
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vampiretr In reply to rudhira [2003-08-26 00:02:39 +0000 UTC]
*screams and rubs body with an Anti-Compliment loofah*
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rudhira In reply to vampiretr [2003-08-26 00:15:13 +0000 UTC]
nooo!!! dont do that.
*Licks her with the tongue of praise*
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