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Published: 2003-09-03 02:31:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 143; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 45
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Description spread upon the sheets
like magnolias in
bloom,
the sickly sweet of
nectar as it flows
on my pillow.
i can practically smell
your honey
from miles away and
i can sense when your
in town by
the petals on the
ground.
i watch as your stelletos
click away...
i can sense your
body shake
because this magnolia
underground has
spawned itself some
treason...
and we've got a ransom
on the seedy
underbelly
of your crowned
prince charming.
once again, i've been
watching you
from the edge of my
seat...
the coffee shop
passes around your
thighs
as you order your
daily high.
and every time you sit
close
i can feel the metal
right up at my throat.
the slash has always been deep,
cutting into my throat;
and as the blood bubbles up,
i whisper a
hello.
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Comments: 17

prozacsaves [2003-09-13 23:07:36 +0000 UTC]

kayla you never cease to make me love your work more and more!

-Cait.

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vampiretr In reply to prozacsaves [2003-09-14 01:27:53 +0000 UTC]

thank you, dearly.

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stalkerstock [2003-09-10 00:48:46 +0000 UTC]

so dramatic. . .and stunning, i really enjoy reading your stuff

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vampiretr In reply to stalkerstock [2003-09-10 04:48:43 +0000 UTC]

oh psh...my stuff is shit.

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rudhira [2003-09-04 20:15:17 +0000 UTC]

gorgeus

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vampiretr In reply to rudhira [2003-09-05 03:21:40 +0000 UTC]

danke

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hellboundangel [2003-09-04 06:25:58 +0000 UTC]

wow, another awesome piece. i love the way you write

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vampiretr In reply to hellboundangel [2003-09-05 03:22:20 +0000 UTC]

ooooh, thank you

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slowcheezhead [2003-09-03 03:21:49 +0000 UTC]

i like it

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vampiretr In reply to slowcheezhead [2003-09-03 03:50:28 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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kara [2003-09-03 03:09:40 +0000 UTC]

and every time you sit
close
i can feel the metal
right up at my throat.
the slash has always been deep,
cutting into my throat;
and as the blood bubbles up,
i whisper a
hello.

*nods*

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vampiretr In reply to kara [2003-09-03 03:51:10 +0000 UTC]

i love to love your compliments

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xcrestfallenx [2003-09-03 02:40:07 +0000 UTC]

i like coffe

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vampiretr In reply to xcrestfallenx [2003-09-03 02:41:01 +0000 UTC]

hmm...so do i.

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themaxx2001 [2003-09-03 02:32:50 +0000 UTC]

wow, beautiful writing hun. Lots of feeling. Keep it up

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vampiretr In reply to themaxx2001 [2003-09-03 02:33:41 +0000 UTC]

woot! thanks

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themaxx2001 In reply to vampiretr [2003-09-03 02:34:04 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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