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vampyra142001 — Werewolves
Published: 2005-01-06 17:08:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 8698; Favourites: 151; Downloads: 26
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WEREWOLVESA bitter bite
Of pale moonlight
A shiver of pain
Beast overcomes brain
Fickle and furry
Through the trees they hurry
Air full of cries
Moon reflecting eyes
Silver and white
Howls in the night
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Comments: 42
Hi vampire!
Your poetry is very cool. Well done))
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Very good, everything flows and follows into the next line.
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Thank you. Pity I haven't been able to get anymore poetry to flow in a long time.
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That's easy to do, you just have to follow what your emotions say. That's what poetry is, emotions in words.
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Wow, that is really cool! You just totally explained what a werewolf is!
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I try. Pity I can't get the second stanza to come together. Oh, well. And thank you for the fav.
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Your welcome vampyra142001, keep up the good work!
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Sooo cool! ^_^ I wish that could be me...I loves werewolves! ^_^
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Thanks. I'd prefer meeting a werewolf over being one, though.
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hell ya add a second stanza!!!!!!!
i really like it
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I'm working on it. The other day I was cleaning my room I found an OLD pink(gag) diary with pieces of the second stanza, and I just need to put it together how it would sound well.
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sweet keep me posted pls!!
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Glad you like it and thanks for the fav.
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I love this one.. 
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Thanks for the fav and I'm glad you like it.
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Thanks. I'm glad you enjoy it.
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werewolves are so cool, too bad they ain't real and if they were i would like to be one that was sane! ^_^
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I agree. Glad you liked the poem and thank you for the fav.
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No problem, keep up the good work! ^_^
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wow! short but to the point, very good rhyming sceme and poetic tone. again wow. liked it a lot.
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Thanks. Glad you like it.
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You believe yourself to be a werewolf?
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no i liked the poem. the comment ish more of an inside joke with my friends.
sry if i offended you.
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Oh, I'm not offended - simply curious. And I'm glad you like it.
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A very well rounded poem, (and I'm very picky about my poems 
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Thanks, I'm glad you like it. Have you looked at any of my other poems?
And thank you for the fav.
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Nice job, I wish I had a talent for poetry now.. T_T Keep it up ^_^
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Much thanks, for the fav and the comment.
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Wow..This is great and the imagery is amazing..Beautiful.
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