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Published: 2016-07-30 16:22:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 2556; Favourites: 136; Downloads: 194
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Description Pegasi can skydive whenever they want.
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CosmicDrawingCat [2016-08-07 17:55:03 +0000 UTC]

I imagine RD Skydiving and landing on Scootaloo. XD

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cajobif [2016-08-07 16:49:32 +0000 UTC]

"Come on Dash, you can do it. I just need to brake my record of twelve feet. I shouldn't be too far from the ground. *deep breath* In ten... nine.... eight... seven..."

Later.

Twilight: Dash! DASH!!!!
RD: Uh? W-wha...
T: Are you okay?
RD: Uh... Yeah?
T: Can you move?
RD: I.... I guess so...
T: Phew! Of my Celestia I'm so relieved. You scared the heck out of me!
RD: W-what happened?
T: That's my line! What were you thinking?
RD: Huh? Oh! You mean...
T: Yes. Did you... attempted to... k-kill your-
RD: WHAT?! NO!!!
T: Then, for the love of Celestia what were you thinking?
RD: I was attempting to break my record.
T: Huh? What record?
RD: To... recover the closest to the ground without looking. I tried to break my old one of twelve feet.
T: T-that's insane! That's... totally you.
RD: Yeah, I know. But... W-what happened?
T: You don't remember at all?
RD: I... do remember I was counting...
T: Counting?
RD: For when I recover.
T: Oh. I see now.
RD: Care to explain?
T: Seems you were off by five seconds then.
RD: Huh? It can't be...
T: Thankfully that pile of hay cushioned your... fall.
RD: Dang it! I got to... OW!!!
T: Oh no you don't. Not until a week.
RD: A WEEK?!
T: You hurt yourself pretty badly. The girls are on their way.
RD: Uh... Twi? C-can you... tell them that I just.... fell?
T: Nope. That's your lie, not mine.
RD: *sigh* Five seconds? Are you sure? Wait! Why you didn't attempt to catch me?
T: Because I know you usually make it. Seems that I was wrong this time.
RD: Don't feel bad. It was my fault. Just glad you brought me here.
T: That's what friends are for.
RD: And thanks to you input, I won't fail next time.
T: What? Are you crazy?
RD: Nah. I live for trying anything crazy. And awesome. You know me.
T: Yeah. But don't go "I'll-be-remembered-for-dying-in-a-awesome-way" crazy. Okay?
RD: Uh... Yeah. I won't.

BEautiful work

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icecrystal123 In reply to cajobif [2020-03-10 04:33:00 +0000 UTC]

good story

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cajobif In reply to icecrystal123 [2020-03-10 22:20:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Glad that you liked it.  So far she didn't kill herself doing one.

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zsocreed In reply to cajobif [2016-12-05 06:08:52 +0000 UTC]

That was pretty funny. Have you considered writing?

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cajobif In reply to zsocreed [2016-12-06 01:24:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Well, I've been doing it for months now. I put an weekly update of my stories in my DA Journal.

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Wireball In reply to cajobif [2016-12-21 08:42:08 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I concur with zsocreed.  I particularly like the "T: T-that's insane! That's... totally you."

Another theory that comes to mind: She's thinking, "What is this weird falling thing I'm looking at?"

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cajobif In reply to Wireball [2016-12-22 03:05:33 +0000 UTC]

It could have been totally Pinkie on another level. And she could be that thing who is falling too.

Why her? Go ask her. Good luck for a "plausible" explanation.

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VanillaGhosties In reply to cajobif [2016-08-07 18:04:58 +0000 UTC]

Haha thanks!
And that's probably how Twi and Dash would react in that kind of a situation.

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cajobif In reply to VanillaGhosties [2016-08-08 00:56:37 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure. Good. I had doubts.

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Mordecailovesrigby [2016-08-06 03:03:47 +0000 UTC]

Someone sent me this on Twitter

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boardgamebrony [2016-08-06 02:57:17 +0000 UTC]

WHOA intense!

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PeriodicBrony [2016-07-31 12:59:13 +0000 UTC]

Well, those wings are really good. It really showed that you improved your drawing once again! Everything looks great and I couldn't be more happier to see this amazing piece! Keep it up man!

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VanillaGhosties In reply to PeriodicBrony [2016-07-31 13:59:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I still have trouble with shading them, but I'm sort of figuring them out I hope.
I'm trying my best, and thank you for the support!

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AplReach [2016-07-31 01:30:27 +0000 UTC]

Um...should I catch you, Dashie?

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catluvr2 [2016-07-31 01:19:31 +0000 UTC]

Uh, Dash... you do know that up is the other way, right?

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Neonhuo [2016-07-30 20:21:31 +0000 UTC]

Here I am posting really crappy old sketches, while you're over here posting things like this. 
Your art is phenomenal man. Seriously. Great job

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VanillaGhosties In reply to Neonhuo [2016-07-31 01:18:05 +0000 UTC]

Aw shucks, don't be too hard on yourself, I like your art xP I guess it's all just a matter of consistent practice.
I'm grateful for your kind words though, thanks a lot!

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ElusiveAutumn [2016-07-30 19:22:28 +0000 UTC]

Huh, Neat picture. Liking the threads of the hear and tail.

Though, as Much as I like it..I can't get a read on Dash's face. Can't tell if she's supposed to be excited to go skydiving or something's troubling her.

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VanillaGhosties In reply to ElusiveAutumn [2016-07-31 01:31:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I was going for a sort of troubled expression when I did this. The description of skydiving was just something I thought I'd put in the description, because it sounds like fun. I like the idea of pegasi being able to fly (or fall in this case) and just be able to think about things. It seems peaceful to me, not entirely sure why it's of much interest, but oh well.

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ElusiveAutumn In reply to VanillaGhosties [2016-07-31 02:01:44 +0000 UTC]

Just realized I've misspelt Hair, Feel like a fool

Heh, anyway..No worries. I get the Idea, 'ts a nice one. I've thought of doing that with my own, but Couldn't get the pose right..so I put the idea on the side 'till I got better.

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