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Published: 2010-07-17 15:53:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 5150; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 32
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[link] <- previous |page 4| next -> [link]Polish:
Flame: Co ja robię? Powinienem zawrócić, pomóc Spyro'wi i temu małemu kotu...
Straszny Głos: Nieee... Oni cię nie potrzebują...
F: Oni... Oni....
SG: Powiedz to!
F: Oni mnie...
SG: Hsss... No dalej!
F *taki jakby opanowany przez tego demona ktory do niego mowi* Oni mnie nie porzebują! Nigdy mnie nie potrzebowali!
SG: Taaak....
-||-: Hahahahahahahahaaaa
Tymczasem...
Spyro: Dobra, spytam cię jeszcze raz...
S: *krzyczy* KTO JEST TWOIM PANEM!?
Orc: Pan potęzny! Pan wspaniały! Pan cię zabije! Ty jest zły smok!! Pan potrzebować czerwony. My nie zabijać czerwony. My zabijać inne. Pan zapanuje nad świat! Wtedy my mieć nasze ziemie! Nie zatrzymacie go! My wypełnić misja. Czerwony z pan. Teraz orki mieć ich ziemie!
Cometdust: Flame jest czerwonym smokiem!
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Yep, finally official page!
I guess I won't do PARODIES anymore. BUT I've heard awesome idea -> do completly other comic, what will be funny
Now, like you see, this demon corrupted Flame -_-; Poor dragon
He want to go back to Spyro and Cometdust. Even if he wasn't helping them XDD
This page is a little more detailized BUT STILL not as much as I wanted it to be <.<; Lazy BG at 8th panel is lazy
AND Spyro isn't cruel!
He's just mad after these orcs attack them. Also, I gues he noticed that Flame is gone. And perhaps he blames orcs Oo; This orc is talking random weird and odd because in my comic this race is stupid and can't talk normal
I hope ya like it!
Comments are very appreciated 
***
Done with tablet and CS3
Time taken: Few days of work 
Spyro, Flame (c) Insomniac/Sierra
Cometdust (c) *suppari
Orcs and Art (c) *Fire-Flame-Fan / me
PLEASE very much, respect my hard work and do not use/edit/copy without permission
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Umm... there are a few corrections I could tell you on here. Want to hear them?
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Sure!
Any critique can help me gets better 
But sure, go on
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Well in the first panel it says 'this little cat' but that's the wrong tense. it should be 'that little cat'.
In panel 4 it should be 'They don't need me! They never neededme!' if you cut it off before the 'me' at the end the phrase sounds awquard in someone's head (sorry. I'm from a story writing website and always say stuff like that.)
And I'm supposing the orc's meant to speak like that.
Should I tell if i spot anyything in themore reent pages?
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Och, okay o3o Thanks a lot! <3 If I'll find Photoshop file of this one, I'll make sure to fix them all!
And yeah, orcs in my comic are takling like that |D
Sure! x3
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Ok (It'll take a while though. I'll be away for a bit as I was the last few days.)
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(Yeah I know the feeling, I've just came back from 2-weeks-journey
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hahah I've never noticed that but yea a bit XDD;
Thank you ^^
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Great page your style is awesome!!
:iconcatdancingplz:
Epic page win!!
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Wszystko juz naszkicowane, 4/9 paneli zrobione
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Ow. Could it be?
But Red could be, or?
Or........Ignitus!?
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Och well, it's not Red!
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Yeahss... Demon (if we are talking about who is calling Flame)
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xD
Anyway have you seen my new Comic?
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Yep, I've just commented it while ago
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great..now i'm hooked XD
meaning its great ^^ must know more ^^
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I'll ask you one more time.....
WHERE'S MY COOKIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol
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Oh my-
I eat it .__. sorry
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That's what Voltar was yelling: a MASSIVE storm just passed by us last night and all I could think was that someone had taken his cookie
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Haha
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So... what, is Spyro like a cop now or something?
Great page!
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Yeah now he feel like a cop X'DD
Thank you!
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OMG WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO FLAME NOWS
THIS PAGE IS WONDERFUL 8D YOU ADDED AWESOME DETAILS ;D LOOKS AWESOMENESS IN AWESOMENESS STYLE OF AWESOMENESS
YOU DREW COMETDUST AGAIN SO FREAKKING WELL AOSIVNAOSVJNSOEIRNVGOIESDNGVIO
JUST EPIC WORK I CANT WAIT TO SEE NEXT AGAINNNN 8DDDDDD
WOOHOOO
GREAT SHADING AND LIGHT EFFECTS AND THIS IS JUST PURE AWESOMENESSSS
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AWWRHSFNRIGSOOOOOODLFSLKSSAAAVIOO!!!
Another epic comment from youu!??
Gah thank you!
And thank you once again!
And agaaiiin!
And OMFG THANK YAAA!
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YUP X'DD
YOU'RE
WELCOME
83
AND
NO PROBLEMS
AND IT WAS MY PLEASURE
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°w°
That... thing... green thing... a goblin... seems like Nasty Norc O_O IS CUUUUUUUUTEEEE!!! XD
OH NOES!! FLAME! DON'T GO!!! DAMNIT DOOOOOOOOOON'T!!!
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It's orc
GAH FLAME MUST GOO!
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Orc... sorry...
I'LL SAVE YA!!
*go to save flame, but that scary voice scare me... and run away...*
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OH NOO! I tryed too ;A;
Noone can save him? That sucks
Flame is thanking you for trying
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I CAN'T DO ANYTHING FOR HIM!!! (depressed)
I'm glad to help
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NOONE CAN! (everyone in tha world are depressed)
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YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ZERRO PARODI!!!!
WIĘCEJ AKCJI!!!!!!!!
CZADOWA STRONKA!!!!!!!
TE ORK GADA O S***E**E????
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TAAK! POSTANOWILAM nie robic wiecej parodii -_-'' Znalazla sie jakasosoba ktora stwierdzila na ankiecie, ze zepsulam historie komiksu!
WEE!
WEE!
Taak on gada o SA***S**
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Nie, ale stwierdzilam, żebyś nie robiła już wiecej takich stron....
YAY
YAY
Hmmm.....MYSTERY
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x3
Widziałaś mój nowy bazgroł...BŁAGAM TYLKO BĄDŹ SZCZERA!!!!! S*Z*C*Z*E*R*A*!*!*!*!
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Tak widzialam. Moj komentarz j*e*s*t szczery. To co mysle o twojej nowej pracy to to, ze jest wspaniala i naprawde ci sie udala. Gdybym widziala jakies bledy w pozie expresii, kolorowaniu albo cieniowaniu to by cie poinformowala
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