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vavacung — Chapter 10 : God and Man : Noble and Peasant
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To love Princess of Sun : I am not good enough for you.
Princess....I don't want to love you...
Princess....I refuse to love you...
Princess....It is not because you are a liar or because I don't love you.
It's because I don't want to drag you down. I don't want the dirty ground to taint the sun. The sun will shines beautiful when it on the sky.
A nobles like you should not to come down and love a peasant like me....Everypony will gossip about you...They will dishonour you....
I am not good enough for you.... A Mare like me is not good enough for a God.
English Edit by : tori-rune
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I CAN TELL WHAT THIS IS INSPIRED FROM AND I LOVE THAT FACT.
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Cause you're, all I need.
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this story has... incredible emotional subtext
...truth to be told it is not terribly original (as for some low class to love someone above) but it doesn't change the fact it is very well done and very touching
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you know what Paper doesn't have a gender, "Paper" is just "Paper" because trying to figure Paper's gender is distracting to the emotional beatdown this story is delivering.
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Awesome! hehehehe I would put it as a picture in my living room. :3
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Is he a boy or a girl?! Last page it said "she" but in here it said "a man"?!
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I'm getting kinda confused. Is paper a mare or a stallion?
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Wow :'-( this part made me spill a tear, it has so many emotions!
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I am not good enough for you.... A Man like me is not good enough for a God.
But...Paper's a girl?
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Actually, she's a mare.
We're not using that definition of "man" here.
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Mare and girl are the same thing in horsey land, but w/e.
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Primarily I was being facetious, but secondarily, she's a full-grown mare, not a filly.
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I said about it since chapter 3. But nobody read the description.
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I read the desc but didn't see anything about Paper's gender....
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you know i dont really like celestia that much but this fan fiction im in love with
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*Sigh* This issue is in at least half of the Celestia romance fics I've read. It's to the point where I'm surprised I haven't found one where she finally snaps and goes Daymare Sun, Corona, Blaze, or whatever you wanna call her, to get people to STOP treating her like a perfect goddess. Plus it's attitudes like this that make ponies like Blueblood think that they're right in acting like elitist douches.
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Well, though there is no such thing as Daymare Sun, Corona, Blaze, or such evil side of Tia like how Luna does, Celestia does go into a emotional outbreak in chapter 12: "Unbearable". o3o
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Actually, Celestia has such a side. But only in fanfictions. I think it's in the "Lunaverse" fanfictions. Not sure about the universe but simply, the sides are switched. Everypony is still the same besides Luna and Celestia. And instead of Nightmare Moon you get, I think, Corona Blaze is her name in most of them.
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Man = human...or it's mean Mortal in here..
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but hearing her call herself "man" kind of makes it hard to remember she is a mare. And "Woman" can be used for the same effect.
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In latin languages we have words for male and female. So for somebody that is from a latin race like me and "probably" the artist of the comic, it is realy hard to get used to it i mean, to one word per sex. At least this is my opinion.
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also, it is almost a rule to replace every "man" or "one" with the word "pony" or "stallion" and so xD
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te refiere a una lengua como el español? aun así, podría usarse "men" en lugar d eman.
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Me refiro principalmente ao Português... Que na minha opinião é um das línguas derivadas do latim que mais engloba termos e gramática de todas as línguas derivadas do latim.
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How tragic. He asked Celestia, in his previous life, to come back for him when he was reincarnated and make him love her again so she wouldn't have to be alone as an immortal. So he could keep coming back again and again to love her forever in any form he took so she could always be with him and find joy in having someone to love.
But in doing so, because he didn't remember his (or, rather her) previous life, he didn't know about the desire he once had to do everything he could to make Celestia happy and because there was no other way to make him love her again other than the traditional stipulations of growing up together, slowly becoming closer and eventually letting love take its natural course, she was willing to abdicate her throne and masquerade as a regular pony to be able to do that. And she did it because she wanted him to be happy, thinking he'd be happy being able to be with his goddess eternally and ensured he would always be loved by her so he would never have to be alone, even if in a new body every time.
But the path to anguish is paved with good intentions. The only way they could be together would be for Celestia to do what she did, but in doing so, she made him feel guilty because she had to abdicate her throne and vanish from the public eye for a number of years. He thought someone had stolen her away from the world and wanted to become a guard in order to bring that individual to justice and hopefully find Celestia, but because it was he that she was with, he thought of himself as the thief and realized he'd been chasing phantoms. He felt hatred in himself for his naivety and betrayal from Celestia that she would do such a thing to him and to Equestria and that he, as a mortal and feeling that he was a monster after realizing it was he that had kept Celestia from the world, felt that he was simply not worth her love.
They feel they are both at fault and they think the other no longer loves them when they both still love each other.
This picture and its reference to Adam and God fit surprisingly well with the story and the concept as a whole that mortals are simply too fallible and finite copared to the perfect, eternal nature of gods and thus simply cannot coexist in such a deep manner. Unlike Adam and God though, Paper is withdrawing from Celestia who is desperately trying to reach out to her. Instead of the mortal seeking god, it is god seeking the mortal, but the mortal knows better that they should never touch god because then the world will suffer.
Held back by their very natures, a thing they cannot control. Heartbreaking.
Even if the story had a few kinks due to the broken english, it doesn't detract from the concept as a whole and your art, of course, which is very nice to look at on its own. Such a fantastically, tragically deep and compelling concept.
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Faust Almighty that was beautiful you have writing talent! I checked your DA and it says you dont write anymore if you ever start writing again let me know cause i will definitely be taking a look at it
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This comment...was worth reading.
Thank you so much!
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Oh...My....This is so long comment than any comment I ever have in my life! You complete understand what I want to tell even my English really broke!
I made my story by myself and I think I understand all of my story. But when I read your comment...It's so touching! You re-write my story and made it more touching. More romance and more feeling! I'm so happy to have a reader like you! TTwTT
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I realy have to day that your comic is one of the most creative ones that a i have red so far. Keep up the good work.
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Perfect Cistene Chapel reference. God and mortal can't and wre not meant to touch, only to come close.
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that is correct (we meat again)
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Did you change your picture? I usually remember people by their avatars (which is as good idea as remembering people by their haircuts, but it's something I end up doing because usernames can get very long and weird, or similar to others).
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no i didn't (same here)
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Crap, I guess I just forgot. I'm so sorry! T^T
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What were we talking about, that might jog my memory.
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Was it about Scootaloo and her disability?
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THOUGHT SO! So, after that episode, they didn't really say anything significant about Scootaloo, and their moral was okay, but didn't really directly relate to a crippled Scootaloo.
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