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Published: 2015-05-03 15:09:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 129943; Favourites: 982; Downloads: 318
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Description "Welcome home, sister" - Sweetie Belle

Shipping and Descendant Warning :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)
Pinkie Pie X ??? = Super Surprise(Descendant)
(Spifire X Soarin) X (Daring Do X Ahuizotl) = Aerial Ace(Descendant)
Big Macintosh X Fluttershy = Apple Eden (Descendant)
Twilight Sparkle X -- Top Secret -- = Alternate Dawn(Son)
Applejack X ??? = Little AJ (Daughter)

Alternate Dawn Card Collection => vavacung.deviantart.com/galler…

Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.

Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times. Futa-spell or the magic that can make female pony impregnate another female pony doesn't exist.

Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy(and the crazy will be double by now). *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many Easter egg for that story here.*

Warning : This is the end of episode.

If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you => vavacung.deviantart.com/art/Cr…

English Editor : dracoblair.deviantart.com/

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#FirstCrazy Future Part 01
#Previous Crazy Future Part 97
#NextChaos Future 01 : Sweetie Belle
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Comments: 576

loweston123 In reply to ??? [2015-10-03 15:50:59 +0000 UTC]

Good point.

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EpicBronyL In reply to loweston123 [2015-10-03 23:54:37 +0000 UTC]

Of corse

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THEMYA47 In reply to ??? [2015-09-11 22:41:22 +0000 UTC]

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thehodgie42 In reply to ??? [2015-09-09 21:32:38 +0000 UTC]

Need the sequel or I will die and I'm not Nightmare.... well Nightstallion or Alicorn ....

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sinful2 In reply to ??? [2015-09-09 13:09:24 +0000 UTC]

  It's been a long time. how've you been?

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Anti-Viruse In reply to ??? [2015-09-03 14:04:31 +0000 UTC]

Ok I get how Twilight and Rarity and spike have kids that are alive but I don't get Applejack.  How did she live for 170 years after the end of season 4? 

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JWpilot In reply to Anti-Viruse [2015-09-08 01:47:35 +0000 UTC]

One hundred years ago, Applejack fell into a dimensional portal (like Twilight in "Equestria Girls" movies). When she returned decades later, I'm guessing that she was probably around the same age as when she left. So she could still be alive in the current story.
Check Part 84 of this story and the epilogue of "To Love God, To Love Mortal".

BTW. When she returned, she may have brought a (human) husband back with her. (By "Equestria Girls" rules he would have turned into a pony.)

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Anti-Viruse In reply to JWpilot [2015-09-30 19:57:22 +0000 UTC]

But wouldn't the magic in there world affect him or did she get pregnant in his world?

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Pommy1 [2015-09-03 06:22:10 +0000 UTC]

I don't even... how can something be so stupid yet so awesome at the same time? It's like a crazy anime spinoff of MLP, and I am okay with that, and I am not okay with that.

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coloursprit [2015-09-02 05:59:41 +0000 UTC]

i don't get anything  

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SailorSnowflack In reply to ??? [2015-08-31 22:41:58 +0000 UTC]

What happens next?

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Riuke-Z In reply to ??? [2015-08-31 21:58:03 +0000 UTC]

WHAT WHAT HWFWE WHAT WHER HWT AHWT WHAT WHAT WHAED AWHAT WHTA
THANK YOU, YOU'VE MADE ME LOST THE ABILITY TO TYPE 'WHAT'
NO BUT SERIOUSLY WHAT'S GOING ON I WANT TO KNOW HOW IS THAT EVEN POSSIBLE

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EpicBronyL In reply to ??? [2015-08-28 14:28:21 +0000 UTC]

Wait, what? WHAT?! That's IT?!! WHAT THE HELL?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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DatFire In reply to ??? [2015-08-27 17:06:58 +0000 UTC]

Plz more I love this

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AnimatronicMaywolf In reply to ??? [2015-08-26 23:15:42 +0000 UTC]

Please continue?

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mcnus In reply to ??? [2015-08-18 18:37:46 +0000 UTC]

OMG you left me troubled with Sweetie Belle, I want to see a sequel of this so badly now!
in any case, Great job  I love your comics so much!

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Rosewolf86 In reply to ??? [2015-08-16 21:00:10 +0000 UTC]

I just read the whole comic and I gotta say nicely done! I look foward to reading more one day c: 

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Saiavinn In reply to ??? [2015-08-14 02:14:38 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... it's hard to tell from the shadow, but that doesn't look like the outline of a elderly mare.
My guess is Sweetie Bot. Sweetie Bot alllll the way.

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Jcats007 In reply to ??? [2015-08-13 17:43:48 +0000 UTC]

So Awesome got to read more of it

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xXvinylscratchXx1987 [2015-08-12 23:37:18 +0000 UTC]

NOOOOOOOOO I need more

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ASadSadEmoChic In reply to ??? [2015-08-11 16:15:17 +0000 UTC]

Aw, that ending was so sweet!

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PrinceCres In reply to ASadSadEmoChic [2015-08-13 05:26:43 +0000 UTC]

Yes it was it also made me cry a little when I saw that last part.

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ASadSadEmoChic In reply to PrinceCres [2015-08-13 16:09:39 +0000 UTC]

I don't ever cry, but this made me a little sad. xD

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PrinceCres In reply to ASadSadEmoChic [2015-08-13 22:48:42 +0000 UTC]

well i do cry inside i just don't show it when a friend or family is dead or when i watch a sad movie or read a sad comic  like this one lol

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ASadSadEmoChic In reply to PrinceCres [2015-08-14 00:15:33 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I guess I cry on the inside, too. Like Apple Jack. xD

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PrinceCres In reply to ASadSadEmoChic [2015-08-14 03:52:20 +0000 UTC]

Lol, very true indeed

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0theneutral [2015-08-06 19:20:14 +0000 UTC]

Are the side plots gonna continue on another comics?
Because it will be disapointing to end there.

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vavacung In reply to 0theneutral [2015-08-06 20:24:38 +0000 UTC]

It's share universe with To Love Alicorn (Happened on the same time in future) while To Love Alicorn is direct sequel of To Love God. But the direct sequel of Crazy Future is Chaos Future. I will start write it after To Love Alicorn end.

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Operatoer In reply to vavacung [2015-08-07 16:50:23 +0000 UTC]

But when To Love Alicorn will end?
 

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vavacung In reply to Operatoer [2015-08-07 18:18:37 +0000 UTC]

From the rough scrip of this comic at the moment. It will still not end at page 43....

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Operatoer In reply to vavacung [2015-08-07 19:01:02 +0000 UTC]

 
but Chaos Future will be red toned or coloured?

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vavacung In reply to Operatoer [2015-08-08 01:44:43 +0000 UTC]

Red like always.

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Operatoer In reply to vavacung [2015-08-08 09:51:32 +0000 UTC]

im waiting

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gamer246 [2015-08-03 07:21:06 +0000 UTC]

holy cow i read 98 part in about hour & half
don't want this to sound mean, but sweetie belle looks a little creepy without details, 

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Fierce-Dities-Link [2015-08-02 03:30:50 +0000 UTC]

How do you burn apple juice?! XD

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Terik23 In reply to ??? [2015-07-31 14:55:41 +0000 UTC]

OMG! How much ponies live in this universe? It's like they semi immortal... This is only thing that i found crazy in this comics 

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Cheschire-Kaat [2015-07-29 13:29:36 +0000 UTC]


Changeling. Changeling all the way

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Crysta19 [2015-07-24 19:48:59 +0000 UTC]

Amazing!!! I hope you will be doing the next chapter soon

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WickedLeWicked In reply to ??? [2015-07-24 07:06:32 +0000 UTC]

Unbelievable ending

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TheAnimeChannelxX [2015-07-17 21:11:11 +0000 UTC]

this was THE best fan comic i've ever read... 

can't wait for the sequel~~~

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Spitestar In reply to ??? [2015-07-08 17:47:58 +0000 UTC]

Some weird things just happened in this story. But I like it! I think..........

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artiermis In reply to ??? [2015-07-07 16:45:33 +0000 UTC]

Wait..


This is it?


IT'S THE END?





NOOOOOO   

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ashbluebear In reply to artiermis [2015-08-16 16:51:28 +0000 UTC]

There's a sequel coming silly

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artiermis In reply to ashbluebear [2015-08-16 17:00:29 +0000 UTC]

SEQUELS ARE NOT ENOUGH.

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ashbluebear In reply to artiermis [2015-08-16 18:28:06 +0000 UTC]

Ok ok ok, don't hate me!

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Wixi2000 In reply to artiermis [2015-08-06 17:16:17 +0000 UTC]

Same here... same here.

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woodybg In reply to ??? [2015-07-03 04:12:29 +0000 UTC]

wait is this it its all over plz no i rly liked this 

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TheThunder-Clash In reply to ??? [2015-06-30 06:17:15 +0000 UTC]

Isn't the sequel so-pose to be out already?

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vavacung In reply to TheThunder-Clash [2015-06-30 13:44:53 +0000 UTC]

Not yet.

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Westfallen In reply to ??? [2015-06-26 06:50:42 +0000 UTC]

Wooo, this is actually a very enjoyable series! I usually have a hard time with post-FIM stories; but this is a fun mix of ridiculous, slice of life, and action with a hint of drama to spice things up. Oh, and I cannot wait to see more of the other characters as well.  Lots of intrigue!

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