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Published: 2015-05-03 15:09:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 129947; Favourites: 982; Downloads: 318
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Description "Welcome home, sister" - Sweetie Belle

Shipping and Descendant Warning :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)
Pinkie Pie X ??? = Super Surprise(Descendant)
(Spifire X Soarin) X (Daring Do X Ahuizotl) = Aerial Ace(Descendant)
Big Macintosh X Fluttershy = Apple Eden (Descendant)
Twilight Sparkle X -- Top Secret -- = Alternate Dawn(Son)
Applejack X ??? = Little AJ (Daughter)

Alternate Dawn Card Collection => vavacung.deviantart.com/galler…

Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.

Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times. Futa-spell or the magic that can make female pony impregnate another female pony doesn't exist.

Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy(and the crazy will be double by now). *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many Easter egg for that story here.*

Warning : This is the end of episode.

If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you => vavacung.deviantart.com/art/Cr…

English Editor : dracoblair.deviantart.com/

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#FirstCrazy Future Part 01
#Previous Crazy Future Part 97
#NextChaos Future 01 : Sweetie Belle
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Comments: 576

valgios In reply to ??? [2015-06-19 02:21:12 +0000 UTC]

I have my eyes full of tears, this was an amazing finale...

*Clap, Clap, Clap*

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Cheschire-Kaat In reply to ??? [2015-06-19 00:41:53 +0000 UTC]

I CALL A CHANGELING!

I mean, I'm sure it's a changeling. It just can't be real. It would be too cool.
I mean, she looks too young! in the first panel, yes, but after, she looks like a young mare.

And, you put changelings in all your stories!

To Love God - To Love Mortal: Yes (Moony's birthday)
When Villains win: Hem... yes? Chris is principal character?
To love Alicorns: You are kidding me, right?

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TapionVirgo In reply to Cheschire-Kaat [2015-07-19 13:30:10 +0000 UTC]

She might look young just because this is how Rarity remember her. Also, it's hard to tell how is she suppose to look only by what we see here. I hate cliffhanger >.<

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Cheschire-Kaat In reply to TapionVirgo [2015-07-19 13:34:53 +0000 UTC]

ok

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TwinBird In reply to ??? [2015-06-11 02:53:17 +0000 UTC]

That is a VERY sad ending! I cried for hours! This is like one of the Best comics EVER!
she saw her and she was already old! She wasn't there during the most time of her life!              

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Scarred-Animal In reply to ??? [2015-06-09 18:25:16 +0000 UTC]

Can't wait for the sequel!

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UnicornTwilightShine In reply to ??? [2015-06-08 07:39:33 +0000 UTC]

Noooooooo the end. It can't be the end now!!!

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ChryssiPuffRules In reply to UnicornTwilightShine [2015-06-08 11:53:03 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry, there will be a sequel :3

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Zalay02 [2015-06-07 05:47:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm excited for Chaos Future! This story was amazing! I love the art style and the dialogue was AMAZING. 
I love your OCs too! They all relate to the mane 6 in one way or another. 
The feels though...   

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Soulflutigress [2015-06-06 02:06:51 +0000 UTC]

crazy future
part: END
l ...
what a weird title

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JaySilverhood In reply to ??? [2015-06-06 00:52:01 +0000 UTC]

So much feels..... *dies*

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Mcfly98 In reply to ??? [2015-06-04 15:52:58 +0000 UTC]

I'm feeling discord gonna come back)))

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pp2700 In reply to ??? [2015-06-04 06:59:26 +0000 UTC]

Didn't Sweetie Belle make a pie at the end of sister hooves social? Oh and the comic was CRAZY! I hope Chaos Future is EXTRA CRAZY!!!
I'm expecting like Crazy Taxi levels of craziness here.  

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nightfallartsvoid In reply to ??? [2015-06-03 13:28:07 +0000 UTC]

WAITWAITWAIT WHAT

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ShugarPill In reply to ??? [2015-06-02 02:03:25 +0000 UTC]

when is Chaos Future going to approximately come out? also i love this art style, what is it called?

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GingerAutumn In reply to ??? [2015-05-31 21:19:07 +0000 UTC]

I LOVED THIS SO MUCH ;-; IT WAS AMAZING!

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MrMadness00 In reply to ??? [2015-05-31 12:28:40 +0000 UTC]

Very great Comic
We take our hats off to you
*take off the hat*

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1234bronie In reply to ??? [2015-05-31 04:33:34 +0000 UTC]

omg in love with this comic

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danikhan In reply to ??? [2015-05-27 21:26:15 +0000 UTC]

This made my cry im just so happy to se them togheter agian :_; this comic is the best 1 by far its on my top 10 best mlp comic and its number. 1 kepp the good work and i cant wait for chaos future ^_^

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Salade-cesar [2015-05-27 19:59:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh no, the show is on hiatus ! Good thing fan content is never on hia...


*start depressing*

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MidnightDarkness1 In reply to ??? [2015-05-22 21:42:26 +0000 UTC]

Wait. I just relalized that she said "my apple juce burnt again." HOW DO YOY BURN APPLE JUICE!?

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inflationdoom In reply to MidnightDarkness1 [2015-05-23 20:36:29 +0000 UTC]

technique  that how

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Flameswirl In reply to ??? [2015-05-18 10:44:05 +0000 UTC]

please pist the next story soon! i so want to see what sweetie looks like now, and how she can still be alive at this point. i also want to know more about Lil AJ, Alternate dawn, and the rest of the crew.

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archangelgundam In reply to ??? [2015-05-18 06:02:12 +0000 UTC]

That was fun.  Looking forward to more.
Keep up the great work.  Deus tecum.

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tsukimichandesu In reply to ??? [2015-05-17 05:33:40 +0000 UTC]

O.M.G.  

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XxSnow-FlakexX In reply to ??? [2015-05-16 08:14:55 +0000 UTC]

WAIT SWEETIE BELLE HAD A GRAVE ON THE 6TH PAGE O_O
How is that possible? D8

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sonicthebone In reply to XxSnow-FlakexX [2015-05-21 12:34:28 +0000 UTC]

Didn't you see the ghost a few pages ago?

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pp2700 In reply to sonicthebone [2015-06-04 07:02:36 +0000 UTC]

If she's dead how is she holding/making the apple juice? oh yeah... magic!

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superlink1425 In reply to XxSnow-FlakexX [2015-05-18 05:52:21 +0000 UTC]

the grave is a lie!!

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XxSnow-FlakexX In reply to superlink1425 [2015-05-18 16:47:35 +0000 UTC]

Like the cake? D:

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superlink1425 In reply to XxSnow-FlakexX [2015-06-14 22:21:46 +0000 UTC]

.......maybe....

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Ghanzza In reply to ??? [2015-05-15 16:47:31 +0000 UTC]

I bet its sweetie bot

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RedClover17 In reply to ??? [2015-05-13 01:33:25 +0000 UTC]

............ u troll........... *dies inside*

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RaveYard [2015-05-12 11:50:38 +0000 UTC]

It's really.. done? What will happen?

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lordmep [2015-05-11 03:05:41 +0000 UTC]

There better being a freaking sequel. You set up far too much for there not to be.

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Kaze-Blue In reply to lordmep [2015-05-13 13:47:12 +0000 UTC]

it says at the bottom there is going to be a sequel

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lordmep In reply to Kaze-Blue [2015-05-13 13:59:39 +0000 UTC]

I saw that, but I still stand by my point that this first part had far too much set up to be a stand alone story.

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LoneLostPony [2015-05-10 13:14:02 +0000 UTC]

But...what?! Sweetie Belle had grave on 6th page, why she is alive?

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Deviant-Peneumbra In reply to LoneLostPony [2015-05-14 20:36:46 +0000 UTC]

oh  just realized that 

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alexwarlorn [2015-05-09 20:07:31 +0000 UTC]

Rarity, you're immortal, get your wings already. 

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TheLovingGypsy In reply to ??? [2015-05-09 16:15:23 +0000 UTC]

nyyyyeerrRRAAAAA- oh there'll be a sequel. nevermind!

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TheShadow65 In reply to ??? [2015-05-09 07:02:16 +0000 UTC]

This hit me right in the black hole i call my heart.

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colour-mix In reply to ??? [2015-05-09 00:00:43 +0000 UTC]

   WAIT WHAT? my favourite comic finished this is it??
NUUUUUUUUUU!    

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InfiniteHeartStudios In reply to colour-mix [2015-05-10 01:02:37 +0000 UTC]

Theres a sequel... 

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Dragon-wolf-490 In reply to ??? [2015-05-08 15:40:53 +0000 UTC]

you left us on a cliff hanger... freaking hells!

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Flameswirl In reply to ??? [2015-05-08 12:43:07 +0000 UTC]

please bring out the next one soon!!!! i can;t wait to see what happens

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mirtar34 In reply to ??? [2015-05-08 10:09:01 +0000 UTC]

When do you plan to continue this? 

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vavacung In reply to mirtar34 [2015-05-08 10:52:29 +0000 UTC]

After "To Love Alicorn"

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animefan217 In reply to vavacung [2015-07-03 03:06:37 +0000 UTC]

even though theres gonna be sequel this comic had few questions unanswered 

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mirtar34 In reply to vavacung [2015-05-11 10:48:52 +0000 UTC]

Which comic is that? 

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