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vavacung — To Love Alicorn Part 04
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Published: 2015-06-04 16:32:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 78904; Favourites: 680; Downloads: 317
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"You look darker than yourself in previous life...From white to black"----------------------------------------------
Warning : This comic is direct sequel of "To Love God - To Love Mortal" vavacung.deviantart.com/galler…
And sharing universe and timeline with Crazy Future and Chaos Future vavacung.deviantart.com/galler…
English Editor : dracoblair.deviantart.com/
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Now i get it, the changeling scout story is about that one changeling.
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Chrysalis expression is hilarious^^
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OMG! I just got up from my computer and danced around!!
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she is connected with love. how else would she found paper? she just feels that this is liberty wing a.k.a paper
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how can you be connected with love?
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Its like a strong bond. Such as blood or family.
In one way or another you are connected with those you lofe and care for.
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well i dont really have what you call a strong bond with my family and i that changeling is competely mindless and has no memorys of his rearcarnation so i think it was more like magic
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Yup. I had a feeling this was a Changeling.
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if the changelings in your world can live for ever with a contant love when it is revealed the history fom him he realy dont have to be feared if leaving her a real timeless love and maybe it will be good to Queen Chrysalis and the rest of the changelings
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You know, here's a rather silly question and in a way I wanna ask the readers this, but why should anyone care between Celestias and Papers romance? I re-read the previous comic, and I still haven't grasped any indication or reason to care, it was just bland and boring.
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Let me give you my reason why I love it. In the show we don't know much about Celestia's past. In Vavacung's comic we see the idea that she had found love before but since she's immortal she had to loose him. It makes me want to see if she will find her love again. Which she did in the last comic but things went bad. 
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Yeah, however there's a problem with this argument of yours. We, as a reader want the love to be actually fulfilling to feel the same emotions as Tia does when she gets back with her lover. Well, sadly it's not happening because said love interest is about as bland as her namesake. At no point, I ever saw the reason these two are in love or why should I as a reader care about their love.
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We'll dude that's your opinion. Not to be rude, but if you think it's bland and can't feel the emotions than you should just stop reading it. Vavacung is doing a fantastic job with this comic and if you think it's not good enough then you should just stop reading it. It's as simple as that.
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You know, I really dislike this whole "don't like it, don't read/watch/listen argument" this comic has been put up online, which means it's fair game for criticism and not just praising. So, in what sense is this comic "fantastic", yeah the art work is nice in some places, but the writing isn't and so far nobody has given me a coherent enough answer why this romance works and doesn't fall apart at the first hurtle.
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Criticism is not always a good thing. There's a fine line between healthy criticism and unhealthy criticism. As for a coherent answer well I can't say, I'm not that much into romance and never will be. I read, and follow a fanfiction/fancomic if I like the story and if I don't like it I don't follow it. Which is why I don't understand why people keep reading/looking at something they don't like. It just doesn't make sense to me.
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Imagine yourself a powerful and immortal being, finding your true love for the very first time. Sadly that love is mortal and fades away with time, leaving you heartbroken and alone. Then one day, you find your true love again but in a new and different form. And sadly he/she has no memory of you. How would you rekindle that love and how far would you go?
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What ever happened to respecting your love? Which sometimes means learning when to let go and move on. I wouldn't rekindle jack, I'd eventually move on with my life and not turn into some obsessed freak like Celestia is shown here.
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At least she's not being dull about it! xD
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No, instead she's being creepy to the point she needs to be locked up in Arkham Asylum.
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The Joker wouldn't like that. Creeping people out is HIS job.
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Because that is just your opinion and people likes different things
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Yeah, sadly that's not an answer, amigo. A reason would be like "I think these characters have really good chemistry and play off each other well", but this is just an example.
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I simply like it; don´t see the need of explaining it.
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Simply saying "I liked this" is not a good defense, it is a subjective opinion. I can say I like something, but I pressed for why I can give an explanation for it.
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Of course is a subjetive opinion; we are talking about tastes, not science.
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Sometime I'm still wonder while someone keep reading something they don't like...Human's mind is hard to understand.....
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This is internet, where people loves to argue about things they don´t care for...
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not every pony get re=encanted everytime they die
and not every pony can win the princess's heart! :3 -hope i made sense- xD
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So why should THIS one win the Princess's heart?
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oh, i dunno. why does racing and challenging wins rainbow dash's heart? why do books win twilight's heart? to everyone their own reason. maybe their is something celestia sees in her lover she cant see in anypony else! :3
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Rainbow Dash likes competitions and taking risks plus proving she's the best around, Twilight is pretty much a book worm who grew up without friends and books being her only companions. So, with that in mind what does Celestia see in Paper? Show, don't tell. This is pretty much the same romance as Bella Swan and Edward had, we as a reader never given a good reason why these should be together or why in the seven circles of hell we should care.
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there might be other things celestia sees in paper other than show. maybe even personality, and how paper cares about her and loves her with all her heart, and how paper tried to make herself immortal just to satisfy her? there are so many things celestia sees in paper. now i just gave you a reason why they should be together, celestia love paper, in any form, in any gender, in any kind, so is paper willing to give up anything for her.
and as to why in seven circle in hell should you care? simple, if you don't care then stop reading it. that's all :/
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Yes, she "see's" things but we are never shown these things. Just because you say she see's something, doesn't make it legit. Also, what personality are we talking about? I haven't seen any personality aside from Paper being blander than..well..paper. Also, there wasn't any talk of Paper wanting to become immortal, she just thought bringing an item from Sombras kingdom would make a perfect wedding gift, so that's out the window. An again, the whole "oh she loves Paper in any shape or form" isn't a good enough explanation, it's a lazy hand wave. Do they have good chemistry? Doesn't seem like it. Do they have shared interest maybe? Nope, don't see anything. We don't even see any bloody interaction between 'em, aside from the "I'm SO in love with you" . An again, as I said this comic is put for public view, which means it's fair game for criticism.
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perhaps more of her personality will be shown in this sequel? the previous one was pretty rushed up.so we must be seeing her personality this sequel. also she did want to become immortal to be with celestia. using dark magic makes you, just an FYI. so she was willing to use dark magic and stay with tia forever. don't believe me? dark magic made King sombra immortal. also this series isn't done yet. so don't go judging quickly. we will be seeing more of her personality this sequel
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Yeah, that's however is a problem, when you're gonna throw something like "OMG THEY ARE IN LOVE!" in your first comic, you must give some sort of personality or character to this person rushed or not, so we as the audience can care. Giving us the characters personality in the 2nd comic just is one large miss step. Also, Dark Magic didn't make Sombra immortal, he was already a user of dark magic to begin with and infact isn't really a pony but part of some dark race, so your whole argument of "Paper wanted to use dark magic to become immortal" falls apart.
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hmm,that actually is a very nice point. i do agree vava should've shown more of her personality in the first comic. if not, lets hope we find out more in the second! :3
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I wouldn't hold my breath for that. Looking at somethin' like Crazy Future, we barely got any character for anyone (an when we got someone like AJ 2.0 she's just a walking Sasuke cliche). I'd say the author mostly relies on references to turn away everyones attention from the weak writing.
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Now i dun think that part was true. crazy future was very well-written. and what are you talking about?they all have characters! for example, sparity's character: she is honest and frank and sticks to her words
Surprise's character: you could say she is a copy paste of pinkie pie, happy and cheerful and like making parties
as for Eden: she is physically strong and good with animals, but when it comes to her emotional state, she is almost always frightened and shy about anything.
Ariel Ace: she is generous and is willing to help her friends when in trouble, for instance like how she helped little AJ fight off that beast and gave her a healing potion so she would continue fighting.
as for little AJ: she is strong and loyal and never gave up hope to revenge her father.
lastly to Alternat dawn: well, he is smart and is willing to do anything for science (just like his mother! xD) and he's also a kinda a pervert but he also uses the cards to help out his other friends.
i don't know what you are thinking, but honestly though, crazy future was very well written,very well written that is got featured in Equestria daily: www.equestriadaily.com/2014/11…
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No, no it's not well written it relies too much on references of both anime and video games, some references aren't even that well made. Infact, some stuff isn't a reference but blatantly copying stuff from a popular anime without being clever in any shape or form.
Yes, guess what, the characters you just described? I can easily pin point 'em to the characters of the main six, so no they don't have real characters they just have archetypes which aren't their own. Surprise, Ede, Ace, Dawn and Sparity are pretty much copy versions of the mane six, using their personalities. They don't show anything that makes 'em unique in their own way, instead you can just point at them and say "You're a recolored version of this and this character"
AJ 2,0 is a walking Sasuke cliche, infact that's her entire definition of her character and nothing above that, she isn't loyal nor is she strong. I'd say she even showed some stuff you'd find in a typical Mary Sue, not that she was one, but some stuff made her lean towards one.
So? Who cares that it got featured on EQD, they once featured a comic that had Sunset falling in love Adagio for no bloody reason, and that comic was equally crappy written. Just because it gets featured, doesn't automatically mean its good.
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There were references, yes, but not because there are some means its bad. not the whole show was about references though. just the part of little aj fighting that beast had some.
and yes, some of the characters are like the mane six cuz they are their freaking decendants, surely you have a trait from you parents? also the mane six do have some personalities that are not like their parents. well, except for surprise,i have to say, a copy paste of pinkie pie. the characters are unique, and they have impressive background stories.i am not saying all their background stories has been revealed, but Ajs background story us unique, a half mare-half human who is trying to habe revenge for her father xD. and she isnt that strong, cuz as vava explained in the comic, that she is a half magical creature, since her mother married someone who is not magical, which caused her to weaken at a physical level. which explains why little Aj is only strong when she is with her friends.
and i am not saying that just because its in equestria daily means its perfect, i am saying it was perfect enough to be featured. that's all!
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The entire comic was always throwing one pointless anime/game reference after another, some didn't make sense others were just for the sole reason of someone going "Hey! I know what that is! Hahahah!" If you are gonna make a reference, it needs to be either clever or something in the background that your readers can pick up, not throw it in their face and go "RECOGNIZE THIS?!"
That doesn't make a lick of sense, just because they are descendant from the mane six, doesn't mean they should have the same personalities as them, they should stand out in their own way. None of 'em do that, instead they just copies of the mane six, so no they aren't unique they are just copies, unique would be that Apple Eden was sarcastic and had a dry sense of humor, unique would be if Ace didn't care about showing off and instead was humble and soft spoken, THAT would been unique about them. An again, they don't have impressive background stories.
Lil' AJ's story is just one tired anime cliche after another: A lone warrior being the only one of her kind set up to find the killer of her father and have revenge, all the while being a lone emo douche who doesn't need anyone because they are super bad ass. So, no that isn't a unique backstory it's something you can find in a lot of bad animes. AN yeah, friends that she herself say's she doesn't need, again another cliche.
Again, just because it's been featured doesn't make it good material to be featured, EQD featured some rather badly written comics before.
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Chrysalis: Please, unhand my child.
Celestia: Nope, it's mine. Erm... I mean: My lover.
Changeling: I need an adult...
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