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Description "I might be a villain but I'm not a tyrant..." Chrysalis

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Warning : This comic is direct sequel of "To Love God - To Love Mortal" vavacung.deviantart.com/galler…
And sharing universe and timeline with Crazy Future and Chaos Future vavacung.deviantart.com/galler…

English Editor : dracoblair.deviantart.com/

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Comments: 608

TheLondonJamJar In reply to ??? [2015-06-30 14:59:59 +0000 UTC]

Go away :I

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woodybg In reply to TheLondonJamJar [2015-06-30 19:35:43 +0000 UTC]

ok sry just mad because my dog just died but i am ok now 

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TheLondonJamJar In reply to woodybg [2015-06-30 19:36:49 +0000 UTC]

Oh alright then

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woodybg In reply to TheLondonJamJar [2015-07-01 06:46:03 +0000 UTC]

ok i am going to try stop thinking about him to stop me from crying 

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AppleGloom1928 In reply to woodybg [2015-07-13 02:35:44 +0000 UTC]

I understand.  

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woodybg In reply to AppleGloom1928 [2015-07-19 20:11:41 +0000 UTC]

thx 

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CelestialRainicorn [2015-06-26 15:46:02 +0000 UTC]

Maybe you should ask next time hmm yes? 

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nioniosbbbb In reply to CelestialRainicorn [2015-06-30 07:58:48 +0000 UTC]

I agree. But here's an interesting thought... could she?

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Scoot11 [2015-06-25 18:31:13 +0000 UTC]

I feel like this is true..

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nocara [2015-06-25 09:59:10 +0000 UTC]

Nice plot twist
Tyrant and villains are very subjective terms

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TheLondonJamJar In reply to ??? [2015-06-25 06:42:14 +0000 UTC]

While I feel bad and all, it's partly Chrysalis's fault. Neither are in the right, here, if you ask me. Mostly Chrysalis. She should have explained her situation in the first place and EVERYONE could have been spared of all of the torture. I do feel bad for the changelings though, especially those parents and the unborn foal.

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imperialdraco In reply to TheLondonJamJar [2015-06-29 04:25:53 +0000 UTC]

Maybe that wasn't a opinion for her. Maybe in the past changings tried to ask but , when the royal guards saw them they view them as monsters and attack. So the changings had to steal love for the ponies.

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TheLondonJamJar In reply to imperialdraco [2015-06-29 04:31:16 +0000 UTC]

I doubt that Celestia being a harmonic goddess and all could give them a chance, she reformed Discord for crying out loud.

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imperialdraco In reply to TheLondonJamJar [2015-06-29 04:55:16 +0000 UTC]

true but Princess Celestia can't see everything.not ever equestrian society is perfect.maybe some pony long time ago start telling boogeyman thought about the changeling and everypony has been afraid of them ever since you did see how some of the foals reacted when they saw that changing at the wedding on the 100th episode?

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nioniosbbbb In reply to imperialdraco [2015-06-30 07:59:31 +0000 UTC]

What if this was BEFORE the Princesses?

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TheLondonJamJar In reply to imperialdraco [2015-06-29 05:01:31 +0000 UTC]

Those were foals, though. Not an over-a-thoudand-year-old-alicorn
Still, I understand where you're coming from

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nioniosbbbb In reply to TheLondonJamJar [2015-06-30 07:59:36 +0000 UTC]

What if this was BEFORE the Princesses?

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TheLondonJamJar In reply to nioniosbbbb [2015-06-30 19:17:20 +0000 UTC]

Good point

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nioniosbbbb In reply to TheLondonJamJar [2015-07-01 00:50:15 +0000 UTC]

Is interesting. To be sure.

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DemonicClone [2015-06-22 05:00:58 +0000 UTC]

we got our speculation all wrong
so changlings do have personalities
now the only question is, how unique is the personality
when they're compared to other changlings, and the Hive mind?

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nioniosbbbb In reply to DemonicClone [2015-06-30 08:00:03 +0000 UTC]

Assuming they even have hive minds. Never has it been stated that they do.

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DemonicClone In reply to nioniosbbbb [2015-06-30 17:58:02 +0000 UTC]

they don't need to say it when it is clearly implied.
Canterlot wedding part 2
upon breaking the shield the changelings quickly attack the mane 6
while having recieved no verbal orders from the queen.
upon defeating the first battalion, a second battalion quickly gives chase
and a third battalion is already waiting at the Royal Vaults for when they arrive.
also seen among the First battalion is a Changeling General wearing blue armour.
given that even a magical Hive mind would have a limited distance of operation,
Queens and Generals are the few free minds of the Hive, and relay orders to the rest of the Drones.
the Generals taking the position of queen when out of range from the rest of the hive.

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nioniosbbbb In reply to DemonicClone [2015-07-01 00:49:23 +0000 UTC]

And what stops the generals of the army of actually being smart? Do they really need step by step baby guidance to do that? Why? Why would this not be lart of the plan? Why wouldn't they go after the mane 6 if they were so dangerous and famous? They are not that dumb not to take initiative.

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DemonicClone In reply to nioniosbbbb [2015-07-01 15:07:42 +0000 UTC]

I never said they weren't smart, nor that they needed step by step instructions.
Each drone is an individual that adds to the whole of the hive mind.
individually they are autonomous, but they share an extra sense of being in the hive mind.
But while composed of individuals, the hive mind does have a hierarchy.
the Queen is the main leader, the Generals are all second in command to the Queen.
and the Drones follow instructions when given, but otherwise act on their own.
at the same time the hive is alive with both the thoughts and senses of each member.
the Generals and the Queen having the loudest thoughts among the chatter.

Authority in the Hive is likely bestowed similar to other hives
the queen and males being required for reproduction.
the rest of the Hive being female workers.

as for when the orders to attack the main six were given,
think about it, not everyone in canterlot was at the wedding,
imagine a panicked populace running around, as the City Guard try to fight the changeling army.
a group of six isn't going to stand out, unless the Army is actually looking for them.

Chrysalis when she first met Twilight was confused by the interaction
she didn't know who twilight was, meaning she didn't research before attaking Canterlot.
she didn't know Twilight, and by extension didn't know about the Elements,
until Celestia said Twilight must get them, nor did she know of her friends
until they met during the wedding preparations.
Had she known who the Elements of harmony were, Twilight would have been
the only one invited to the wedding, and professional staff would have seen to the preparations.

Also Chrysalis should have actually acted friendly towards Twilight
keeping up the ruse would have ensured that Twilight wouldn't have tried to stop the wedding.
when twilight did try and stop the wedding, she lost the trust of her closest friends, brother, and Celestia.
Had Chrysalis forgiven Twilight, Twilight would have allowed the wedding to continue
as she believed she had been in the wrong. If forgiven Twilight never would have found the real Cadance
and the changelings would have won the war for Canterlot.

I hate the mistakes of TV villains.

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MoonSpaghetti In reply to DemonicClone [2015-07-01 20:42:06 +0000 UTC]

Yeah Chrysalis was acting idiotically but the show needs to make some dough with simple plot lines for kids to understand and bronys to flow with

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nioniosbbbb In reply to DemonicClone [2015-07-01 15:27:33 +0000 UTC]

1)Just because you say it, doesn't make it true. Lack of evidence against your theory doesn't make your theory true. This is the only thing you are basing this upon. Remember that the original myth of the changelings in Scottish mythology depicts them as fey creatures, and not as insects. There is also the succubus thing.

And besides if they had hive-mind they wouldn't have confused Fluttershy and RD for one of their own. That would be stupid.

2)You mean to tell me that 6 heroes that stopped Discord, and Nightmare Moon((eternal chaos and night respectively)) weren't known by the changelings, and had to be informed through hive-mind links and mumbo jumbo to get informed about them? Yea right... Not to mention one of the performed a Sonic Rainboom, the other is Celestia's most faithful student, and another is very famous among the circles of Canterlot? Reeeeeally? And the changeling army didn't know them right?

3)No actually I just think she didn't want to shake her flank at the age of 20+ and make a ridiculous greeting move. Tbh I think she simply assumed Cadance would have matured enough to grow out of it. As for the rest, she only was unkind when Twilight was around, meaning she was intentionally egging her on knowing the mistakes she eventually did would result to a similar Lesson Zero situation as they did. She took out Twilight, the only one that actually had a chance of threatening her. She was sloppy at times with her acting but that might also have been through her frustration at having to feed an entire nation, and another case might have been the power she was gathering was getting through her head.

4)Actually no had she killed Twilight on the spot things would have been better.

She did far less mistakesn than you think... www.youtube.com/watch?v=0Y6CYH…

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DemonicClone In reply to nioniosbbbb [2015-07-01 19:49:13 +0000 UTC]

1.  it's fiction. All I'm doing is coming up with decent theories that would work in a magical world
also heat of battle, you aren't going to have time to check every vantage
and maybe the hive mind is deactivated when disguised. we don't know.

changeling myths are from more than just scotland, many places in Europe and Africa hold such myths
folklore makes no mention of eating love
and the character design is clearly insect, meaning any similarity in name alone, means nothing.

2. canterlot nobles didn't even recognize them after a medal ceremony and saving equestria twice,
and hosting a birthday at the castle.
and you expect a foreign army to have better intel on 6 ponies that live in a small hamlet when the target is the capital city?

3. unicorn more of a threat than 2 alicorn princesses? she already took out and replaced the third Alicorn.
why not attack luna while she slept? or celestia for that matter? Chysalis was sleeping in the castle over night.
or why not kill cadance? why keep Cadance alive?
if you aren't even going to stay in character there is no reason to disguise yourself.
also why not just have shining drop the shield and attack during the dead of night?
why wait for the wedding at all? why not replace the royal guard with changelings while they slept?

4. well obviously, but you'll never see the villain kill the main character in any work of fiction
it isn't real life after all.

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nioniosbbbb In reply to DemonicClone [2015-07-01 23:29:31 +0000 UTC]

1)No offense buddy but your theory isn't as "original" as you think, and though I don't blame you for it, and neither think this is what you are looking for ((originality)) I simply have been bored from listening to the sample staple theories about changeling OCs, Chrysalis, and changelings in general. That is all.

2)I think it's more about nobles caring more about the important "in their opinion" ponies. Which means a trader will care more about trade figures, a warrior about samurais and blacksmiths, and a noble about celebrities and stuff. The elements being one of the few figures that belong "to the people" wouldn't be as important to know for them. It's possible but still... they don't need to know them. They know the elements of harmony exist, they know where they are stored, so they simply stop anyone who goes for them.

3)Two things, Kids show, Hasbro selling toys.

4)Oh trust me real life sometimes is even stupider. I guess...

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Sturmlion1 [2015-06-22 04:17:59 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, there a parasitic species. And they deserve what they get especially for invading at one point.

Now if they surrendered...

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Hellshooter In reply to Sturmlion1 [2015-06-25 04:43:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh... well f*ck you too.

They may be bugs, but they have emotions and thoughts too, its just they can't be born with it as often anymore because people give them so much shit for simply existing.

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Sturmlion1 In reply to Hellshooter [2015-06-25 19:47:34 +0000 UTC]

Hey, there is a state of war on. The job done during war is to eradicate the enemy. They consider other species to be a food source! And possible a slave species to be corralled and fed on if by Chrysi actually attacking and taking Canterlot is a point of evidence.  If they had surrendered the Pony's would have probably actually made an attempt to accommodate them.

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nioniosbbbb In reply to Sturmlion1 [2015-06-30 08:01:34 +0000 UTC]

Actually you guys are both wrong. Just because they feed off ponies doesn't mean they are their slaves.

If you want to see how occupation by changelings and feeding from them would look like then look out for "Chrysalis Wins" in fimfiction.net

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Sturmlion1 In reply to nioniosbbbb [2015-06-30 20:01:29 +0000 UTC]

Heh, I'm reading that. Think Chrysalis had too much luck in the beginning but Sombra is really up now. And the countdown to Celestia escaping her cocoon continues. They do have a monthly expiration date.

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nioniosbbbb In reply to Sturmlion1 [2015-07-01 00:42:52 +0000 UTC]

I think Sombra's way was... Eh. Really? I was expecting him to die or to change reform or stuff.

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Sturmlion1 In reply to nioniosbbbb [2015-07-01 16:59:29 +0000 UTC]

From what I'm thinking the change might be semi-permanent. If he gets the Alicorn Amulet it may purge all those good feelings out, or it may allow him to just take more offensive actions he can't do now but still not be able to hurt Chrysalis or others. So reform is still on the table.

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nioniosbbbb In reply to Sturmlion1 [2015-07-01 17:39:02 +0000 UTC]

Who knows? Let's just wait and see.

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Sturmlion1 In reply to nioniosbbbb [2015-07-01 20:54:44 +0000 UTC]

Yes, its a good story and I think its going to end when it finally does end on a interesting note. Only issues I really have is that we have very little on the thought process of what the bulk of the Mane Six are thinking. It would be interesting to see how there coping with what is going on and being separated from each other in the cocoons and the trauma they went through and then beg separated from Twilight when Trixie came to town.

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nioniosbbbb In reply to Sturmlion1 [2015-07-01 21:19:41 +0000 UTC]

I want to see Luna experience some guilt about mentally hurting Vivi.

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Sturmlion1 In reply to nioniosbbbb [2015-07-01 22:35:02 +0000 UTC]

No, Luna is the old fashion sort. Challenge made, challenge accepted and Vivi fought Luna while she was handicapped. Luna will feel no pity for that fight. She will feel anger that Chrysalis beat her though for defeating Vivi while she was all gooped up.

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nioniosbbbb In reply to Sturmlion1 [2015-07-01 23:21:19 +0000 UTC]

Nonono what I meant is she jumbled the brains out of that changeling. That's bad. I mean injuries are one thing but THIS??? Not cool.

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Sturmlion1 In reply to nioniosbbbb [2015-07-02 00:13:13 +0000 UTC]

It was a fight, of the old sort. Luna was going for a kill. Breaking Vivi's brain is just par for the course.

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nioniosbbbb In reply to Sturmlion1 [2015-07-02 11:30:48 +0000 UTC]

Sigh... Then she was sloppy at that and now manages to torture someone.

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Sturmlion1 In reply to nioniosbbbb [2015-07-02 14:06:42 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, but it was a fight against someone trying to imprison her and a conqueror of her nation. She was going for a kill and failed on that front. Then Chrysalis beat a helpless prisoner. Luna shouldn't be sorry for what she did. She did what she had to do. I'm just hoping Luna has a chance to do the same to Chrysalis.

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nioniosbbbb In reply to Sturmlion1 [2015-07-02 15:02:52 +0000 UTC]

I am sorry but when someone conquers your nation he/she is the law and the one you are subjected to. It's perfectly fine to resist but legally speaking Luna has lost all rights.

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Sturmlion1 In reply to nioniosbbbb [2015-07-02 16:48:58 +0000 UTC]

Seriously? When ones nation is conquered it is the duty of the conquered to rise and fight! A law imposed by a boot on the back of ones head isn't a law. Its Tyranny. To be fought until one is victorious or dead. Luna has more right to resist then most because she was part of the ruling caste of the Equestrian Government. She is sworn to fight for her nation. Just as Celestia is, Cadance, and Twilight. And every able bodied individual in Equestria. In many ways I see pony's that have accommodated  themselves to the change of rulers as traitors. Quislings.

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nioniosbbbb In reply to Sturmlion1 [2015-07-02 18:23:28 +0000 UTC]

Oh she has right alright. But that right legally speaking is invalid right now. Chrysalis e.g. in the show cant be judged because she is the sovereign ruler of another nation. Unless conquered she wouldn't have to account for anything.

Traitors really? Just because their priorities are to their families rather yhan country? Listen pal you are talking to a greek guy whos nation was under foreign rulership for 400 years. But all that time it wasn't as bad as the overdramatization says. We had the freedom to have our houses our religion and we weren't forced into servitude. For a long time while the Ottoman empire prospered we prospered as well. Its only when corruption started to settle in that people actually started rebellions.

And dont think we haven't experienced the opposite either. When Alexander the great conquered Persia he respected those who surrendered or fought valiantly and killed traitors. He coupled Greeks with Persians and kept the regime the same just as Chrysalis does. In the end at his death Persians even they mourned his death. Though conqueror his figure is one full of glory because of how he treated his enemies.

Yes you have a duty to oppose Tyranny. But can we really say this is some sort of discriminatory Tyranny? The only problem I see is with the elements and Princesses being imprisoned but until that problem is solved she needs them out of the way to solidify her rule. I don't like it but right now there isn't any other solution.

In any case I wouldn't call her oppressive to the people. Her motives might not be tottaly noble but she's in the right direction of being a decent ruler.

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Sturmlion1 In reply to nioniosbbbb [2015-07-02 19:45:28 +0000 UTC]

And I come from a nation that fought Tyranny, overtaxation, and seizure of property. And we won against the most powerful nation at the time in the world. And many of us still fight the good fight. Many of us have sworn our lives and sacred honor to that most sacred of concepts. Freedom. Neither here nor there in a childrens cartoon though.
Chrysalis is a foreign invader, the aggressor in this war. The only places she really holds is Canterlot and the Crystal Empire. City's like Las Pegasus, Baltimare, Fillydelphia and others have not fallen to her. And Manehatten is teetering, but not surrendered. Holding the Capitol doesn't mean you have won. Not in this day and age. Some might become quislings, but history shows that generally that things do not work out for them. And I doubt Chrysalis will get Luna or Celestia or Cadance (which begs the question, where the hell did she end up?) back. And once there free they can rally a lot of support in the rest of the nation. And I doubt Chrysalis ever intended to release the Alicorns or the Elements no matter how secure her hold was on Equestria. They would have been cocooned for life I think. And from comments after Vivi was beaten, they were quite willing to kill Luna for it. So they had less interest in keeping them alive as in keeping them as a food source. One to be drained at there leisure.

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nioniosbbbb In reply to Sturmlion1 [2015-07-02 20:04:21 +0000 UTC]

Right I guess I said all this with the assumption that Equestria has fallen. Well Ponyville has.

I dont know what a quisling is.

You are from America?

Well not all changelings are "good" as it is shown. Doesn't mean Chryssie isn't a sensible leader.

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Sturmlion1 In reply to nioniosbbbb [2015-07-02 20:31:40 +0000 UTC]

Canterlot has fallen, the Crystal Empire has fallen. There are no real troops in Ponyville but for two spies. I kind of think this is why Chrysalis want's to increase her numbers now that they have a steady food source in Canterlot and the Crystal Empire. So she has troops for taking the other city's and town if they don't submit. She will invade them. I have a feeling that by that point though the Pony's across Equestria will have armed enough to put up more of a fight then a surprised Royal Guard in Canterlot. And yes, I'm a American. And proud of it.

Chrysalis is doing this for her hive, tired of her bugs from starving in the Wasteland. Problem is, she considers the Pony's a food source and all of this is a effort to secure a full time food source. And she would have succeeded without Sombra and now the clock is ticking on the his hold on the Princess's. Luna will eventually do something to escape his magic stopping influence. Cadance and Celestia will eventually escape there cocoons and they won't be affected by Sombra right off. Chrysalis might be sensible, but she has bitten off more than she can chew I think A lot more.

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nioniosbbbb In reply to Sturmlion1 [2015-07-02 22:21:07 +0000 UTC]

Meh... Equestrian Guard couldn't stop NmM I doubt they could stop Chrysalis. And the lack of official Equestrian military says something. Besides that Equestria not being at War with anyone so long as I remember must be quite unequiped. Besides that they have no knowledge of how to counter changeling disguises. A simple sabotage from within, two three victims cocooned... A leaderless revolution later Equestria has fallen.

She has, but she can overcome it.

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