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Published: 2016-09-22 12:44:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 835; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 0
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Oh my I love this. I've dived in such a detail that I've even done her manicure LOL
But the most exciting part about this is the fact that very soon I will upload a step by step /"tutorial" if you may, of this!
Though I do not recommend using my style haha. Everyone should have an original style, from proportions to shading to concepts to everything!  But you do you~ Just thought it would be fun to finally reveal what the hell I am doing to make my pictures look the way they do. Mind me, this is not as textured and lined out as before mostly because I am working in small patches and the pattern is losing itself, but if you zoom in it's all there, lol.
Enough bla bla bla.
First appearance of Lady Spider
 
Done on January the 17th. 
Fun Fact: She isn't having implants or anything, the picture had to be upside down originally but then I decided to post it this way. 

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Art & Lady Spider (c)
 

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Comments: 19

FuKc-YeAh [2016-09-30 11:54:02 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Hi , my name is Rene.

This is my 2nd Critique and im still a beginner in Digitial Art myself. At the moment i work through a load of tutorials and Art-Books to gather as many information as i can. I will use what ive learned so far to write a 100% honest critique and i dont want you to have any bad feelings. Before we start i want to say that i personally love your dark style.

So, what is the first thing that comes to my mind when i take an analytic look at your drawing ? Proportions it is , its really helpful that you uploaded a step by step version of this piece. Your Lineart (or Step1) looks already off in proportions. One example would be her upper Leg (Google Translate says its: thigh), it usually has around the lenght of 2 times her head. Yours is around one head lenght but im not 100% sure if you wanted them to look just cut off. In that case it lacks definition with Lineart and/or value/coloration.

The next thing would be symmetry + perspective. Her Breasts and her additional Spider-eyes are not positioned correclty. This somewhat belongs into the proportions-section aswell because you can avoid running into these mistakes with a more detailed construction of your sketch before the actual lineart. Coming back to perspective topics: The Spider-Legs on her back seem to be attached very randomly on her body. If you would cut out the actual women and just look at the spiderlegs , it seems that we look at a spider from a 3 quarter top view and this perspective doesnt work together with the perspective of the character itself.

The composition itself is good but it is very noisy if you ask me. We have that blue hair that instantly catches viewers attention and this doesnt come from its color alone. The spiderlegs in the back act somewhat like hidden arrows that point to the face. following down the face we have these belts around her breast that further lead down the body with all these nice details so yeah, your composition works very well. I dont like the Background , it implies a different lightsource than we see on the body. With Noisy i mean your combination of white/greyish lineart that looks very clean and the shading that looks more sprinkled or sprayed. These just dont go very well together and it looks that youre lines are to strong on the lower third and seem to vanish around her chest so we suddenly lose definition in that area.

Final Words:
I Love your ideas , design and the whole outfit im looking at here. I also love the somewhat lovecraft-ish style of darkness. My Tip would be that you spend more time on proportions and perspective , maybe take some reference of normal models and poses and turn these into your unique style (did that with my first work aswell e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>). You also seem to like your white lineart but i would recommend to just try doing a piece without them, defining everything with your style of shading/highlighting.

And please comment or note me if you have any questions.
regards Fuk.y

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Martyna-Chan [2016-09-25 12:02:20 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful *__*

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Venithy In reply to Martyna-Chan [2016-09-26 05:35:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Martyna-Chan In reply to Venithy [2016-09-27 14:36:25 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome ^^

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Venithy In reply to Martyna-Chan [2016-09-28 07:24:36 +0000 UTC]

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Martyna-Chan In reply to Venithy [2016-09-28 12:14:18 +0000 UTC]

^__^ ~♥

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D3AD-MAD-HATT3R [2016-09-23 19:01:53 +0000 UTC]

She looks so cool. You rarely see spider ladies with this type of design. Lovin it

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Venithy In reply to D3AD-MAD-HATT3R [2016-09-24 06:52:34 +0000 UTC]

But what sort of difference is there even? xD
Thank you~

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Gmatty [2016-09-22 16:26:24 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful!   

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Venithy In reply to Gmatty [2016-09-22 16:51:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~

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Gmatty In reply to Venithy [2016-09-24 13:23:09 +0000 UTC]

Most welcome!

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Venithy In reply to Gmatty [2016-09-25 06:33:24 +0000 UTC]

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RaspberryTickle [2016-09-22 15:56:21 +0000 UTC]

Very nice! I have always admired your textures! 

~Ced

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Venithy In reply to RaspberryTickle [2016-09-22 15:59:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much 

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RaspberryTickle In reply to Venithy [2016-09-22 16:01:18 +0000 UTC]

No problem! You certainly have grown in your technique and style!

~Ced

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MassacreArts [2016-09-22 13:43:39 +0000 UTC]

Cool!

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Venithy In reply to MassacreArts [2016-09-22 14:32:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ! 

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MassacreArts In reply to Venithy [2016-09-23 10:07:58 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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Venithy In reply to MassacreArts [2016-09-23 11:45:05 +0000 UTC]

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