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Cassie was treading quietly to the Throne Room. As she peered into the endless halls, she realized her hooves were hitting the crystal floor louder than she would've liked.

She'd always hated Twilight's surprise visits to the Crystal Empire, but this time, she had a plan. She'd greet her aunt swiftly, then rush outside back to Twilight, where Shining Armor would probably be waiting. As long as Cadence didn't hold too long of a conversation, she'd be fine. Safe from the clutches of her wretched cousin Flurry-

"Hey, cous." 

Cassie's breathing was cut abruptly short. Of course. She turned around slowly to the source of the voice, then forced a massive grin. "Flurry Heart! What a surprise." Her jaw was tight. 

Flurry stood there for a moment, tall and calm, before giving her cousin a small nod. Her tail flicked lightly. "What are you doing here?" 

"Twilight wanted to visit, I guess." Her body was tense. She opened her mouth to offer another statement, then closed it again awkwardly. Flurry gave her a small smile. How... sarcastic. Cas could feel her blood boiling.

"Calm down," Flurry's smile widened. She could feel the tension. "What, do you feel threatened? I haven't done anything to you Cassie." She chuckled. 

Cassie's expression dropped. Was she really making it that obvious? "I'm fine." She snorted softly. "I'm just... tired. The train ride was long." 

Flurry smiled again. "Sure, Cas. You know which room you usually stay in. You have my permission to retire for the night if you really want." She smirked. It took every molecule of magic in Cassie's body to keep her from strangling Flurry right then and there. 

"Your... permission?" 

"Come on, Cas, I'm joking. Lighten up." Flurry had been relaxed the whole time- a perfect composure. It was infuriating. "What's new since I last saw you?"

"Nothing, really." Her face was flat, and she felt the urge to yawn. "Well, actually-"

"Mhm," Flurry interrupted. "Cool. I'll go find Love for you. Getting a little bored just standing here." She stretched her wings, shook them out, then folded them neatly on her back. 

"I- are you trying to start something? That's kinda low, even for you. You can pretend, you know. It's not that hard." 

"I pretend every time you come here, Cassie." 

The fur on Cassie's neck began to rise. It's like Flurry knew the exact buttons to press. She took in a deep breath, then exhaled slowly. "I'll never know why you hate me so much. I've never done anything to you, or Cadence. Not Love either."

Flurry's eyes rolled slightly. "I don't hate you, Cas. It's like ants- I don't hate ants. They're just... there, and they're annoying. Do I wish death on the ant species, though? No." 

Cassie blinked. "That's what I am to you? A bug?"

Flurry looked at her momentarily before smiling again. "You know, this is a waste of my time. I'll probably see you at dinner, Cassie." She began to walk away, but Cassie stood rudely in her path. Their chests bumped. 

Flurry scoffed, looking down at the shorter alicorn. "You know how easy it'd be to call my guards right now?"

"Of course you'd need a guard to save you. Why don't you-"

"Princesses have guards. Real princesses," she interrupted. "Of course, you wouldn't know." 

Cassie took a step back. "I am a real princess. I just don't need guards to put their lives on the line to save mine."

Flurry Heart let out a short, genuine laugh. "That's because your life has never been on the line. I'm the one everyone's always after. Notice how you've never really been in imminent danger? It's because I'm the princess everyone wants- Did Sombra take you as a baby? Did you have to repair the crystal heart before the city you lived in turned to ash?"

Cassie stood there, listening. "Well, no, but-"

"I'm not finished. Have you been the target of calculated assassin attacks? A hostage to anarchists? I didn't think so. I need the guards to protect me, because I'm the valuable one." She was standing straight, her expression unbothered.

"You... You know that's not true. We're both princesses, whether you like it or not."

"Sure, okay. We were both born into the title- I'll give you that, at least. But I actually did something with it. What do you do? Sit around with the commoners of Equestria? Tell me you're not still running around with Discord's spawn." 

Cassie's lips curled back into a snarl. She was finding it hard to hold her tongue. "Damon's a good guy. You don't even know him."

"I know that you're wasting your time, dear cousin. Do something with your life." 

How was Flurry just... standing there? So calm and collected, as if she hadn't just insulted Cassie's entire existence. Meanwhile, Cassie's wings were flared up defensively, her fangs exposed. "Shut up, Flurry. Just shut up! It doesn't mean anything to be a princess if you act like this. You-"

"Oh, spare me from your boring friendship lecture. I really couldn't care less." 

"Stop interrupting me. I've earned my spot just as equally as you have. I've done my royal duties, I've done the charity work, I've loved the people and I've been nice. That's more than you'll ever be."

Flurry scoffed. "You're pathetic, you know that? Come on, Cassie. Look at you, and then look at me. You don't even look like a princess. If Equestria was facing a threat, who do you think ponies would turn to first?" 

Cassie didn't even notice the hot, wet tears streaming down her face until Flurry lifted her hoof to wipe one away. Cassie backed away from her touch. 

"Wow. I really do get to you, huh? At least you know the truth now. How everyone truly views you, for the fraud you really are." Flurry smiled down at her, almost... lovingly. "Stop crying." 

Cassie opened her mouth to make another remark, but her voice cracked and she could barely even make a sound. 

"Like I said before. See you at dinner." Flurry strolled away, leaving Cassie broken and alone on the hard, cold ground. Her tears had begun to land on the floor, her hooves soaking them up. What had she done to deserve that? 



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- This isn't their last interaction. Twilight loves visiting her big brother in the Crystal Empire and usually takes Cassie and Tempest along with her. They turn it into a road trip sort of thing, and it's supposed to be fun. As Cassie's relationship with Flurry evolves over time, things become much more bitter and, in some cases… even violent

- They have a sort of... "alicorn rivalry." It's biological and hasn't been observed in many years, but a pretty good example from history is the competition between Luna and Celestia pre-Nightmare Moon era. They shared this same alicorn rivalry out of an unconscious need to become the best, most superior member of their rare species (alicorns)

- Flurry is taller than Cassie because Cadence was a more developed alicorn than Twilight was when she gave birth. This gave Flurry purer alicorn traits. Both of them are still considered False Alicorns, but Flurry is... "less false" than Cas, and she doesn't let Cassie forget this fact

- Flurry has had royal training, so her overall composure is very picture perfect. She’s had language training so that her speech will flow nicely and so she’ll avoid stuttering, and she’s been taught to stand upright whenever she can. 

- Flurry's not usually like this. In her normal home situation, she feels threatened by her little sister Love Letter, who never had to undergo any of the royal training that Flurry did because Love was just… born perfect. It wasn’t fair. Love naturally outdoes her without even trying, so Flurry clings onto the fact that she’s the alicorn, the "chosen one," to convince herself she’s superior

- It’s probably noticeable but Flurry's very insecure. She’s trying to prove something to people who never doubted her in the first place. It's why she picks on Cassie so much. Cassie falls for it basically every time so she’s honestly just an essay target 

- All four parents (Twilight, Tempest, Cadence, Shining Armor) are aware that the two don’t exactly get along, but they’re not aware to what extent. Cassie's closer in age to Love Letter, who’s actually really nice to be around in comparison to Flurry. Sure, Love is a lil dry and kinda weird, but she’d prefer Love over Flurry on any day. When they do visit the Empire, Cassie tries her best to stick with Love and avoid Flurry as much as possible

- It's a little hard to tell but Cassie is fluffing up her wings here to make herself look bigger. It's her attempt to show dominance, but it’s really just a defense mechanism that’s evolved over a few millennia. She doesn’t really feel dominant in any way, she’s just trying to convince Flurry that she’s not bothered, but it has the opposite effect in this case

- Flurry's acting all formal with Cassie as a sign of disrespect. Family members speak freely to each other. Flurry's being all proper to annoy Cassie as much as she can 

- Cassie thinks about this interaction for basically the rest of her life. Flurry did bring up a good point. What was she the princess of? In the Crystal Empire, Cadence is the queen of love, while Flurry is the protector of the crystal heart. She even has a special connection to that crystal. Cassie is just… the daughter of the friendship princess. She realizes she doesn’t really have a claim on anything individual, she’s just going to inherit her mother’s title one day…

- Cas is like 16 or 17 here, Flurry's maybe in her early 20s


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Comments: 18

Sanluris [2020-07-25 06:27:23 +0000 UTC]

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Venommocity In reply to Sanluris [2020-08-27 01:37:09 +0000 UTC]

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Sanluris In reply to Venommocity [2020-08-27 01:59:39 +0000 UTC]

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Scolipede-Central [2020-06-23 23:57:18 +0000 UTC]

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Venommocity In reply to Scolipede-Central [2020-06-24 17:49:27 +0000 UTC]

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ElaineSketch [2020-05-16 05:25:45 +0000 UTC]

"no shading or cutie marks cuz i'm lazy" I felt that entirely on a different level-

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Venommocity In reply to ElaineSketch [2020-05-21 02:51:41 +0000 UTC]

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unoriginaI [2020-05-09 09:40:53 +0000 UTC]

Wow I wanna hit a pink pony, fuck flurry >

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Venommocity In reply to unoriginaI [2020-05-15 23:41:13 +0000 UTC]

Yea Flurry ain't cool
She always gave me an "easy to handle baby, horrific teenager" vibe except her phase from teen-hood was not a phase and it's just who she is forever 

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unoriginaI In reply to Venommocity [2020-05-16 00:06:14 +0000 UTC]

Super mega bitch... She probably turns into a Karen when she's older

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Venomlion3 [2020-05-09 07:22:11 +0000 UTC]

YIKES FLURRY,,,,,[swats her with a rolled-up newspaper] Go To Therapy

[me to Cassie] I'M GONN GET YOU OUTTA THERE

GOSH Ven I've probably already said it before but I love how you write dialogue??? You just make it so natural and your characterization of your characters through how they talk is just So Good!!!!!! Their conversation felt so Real and I was truly uncomfortable with how harsh Flurry was being

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Venommocity In reply to Venomlion3 [2020-05-15 23:40:17 +0000 UTC]

Flurry's so dramatic, and for what :') Cas deserves better she did literally nothing to Flurry, ever 

Thank you so much!!! ;-; Aw man that's so so sweet you've got me smiling at my screen right now :')) I'm super glad the emotions came through. I had a really hard time writing this because I couldn't get it to Flow lol, so I'm glad all my deleting and rewriting was worth it!! Thank you so much it really means a lot to me <333

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Venomlion3 In reply to Venommocity [2020-05-16 00:12:14 +0000 UTC]

RIGHT??? Flurry, hon, we've all got issues but tearing your cousin apart is Not how you deal with those issues,,,,again, Go To Therapy

Of course!!! I know what you mean; writing scenes like this can be hard because it's tough to know when it starts to become out of character I guess? Cause every character reacts differently to situations like this, so it's hard to find a perfect balance between the two u-u But again, you wrote this scene so well!! It was A Lot to take in because it truly felt like two cousins doing what they could to hurt one another through (mostly) words alone and it just. YEOUCH. Y'know the writing's good if it can truly make you feel the same emotions the character is going through. Again, awesome job <33

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ZomberryTea [2020-05-08 20:07:02 +0000 UTC]

Hoooly smokes reading that made my blood Boil! As much as I want to empathize with flurry that was too dang far and I give Cassie props for not punching her in the face. Both of them bring insecure adds a sort of depth to the harshness of these interactions, Its really just one trying to get some sort of security by using the other's self esteem as a stepping stool, super well written!! Do these two ever find some sort of recollection or does it end in a sort of cold blood between the two? I wouldn't be surprised if things got a bit more that physical

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Venommocity In reply to ZomberryTea [2020-05-15 23:38:18 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad I got the emotions across, at least!! Yep, Flurry definitely wins here. She's pretty natural and subtle with her insults and Cassie doesn't really have a chance at all. They're just climbing on each other, though, and Flurry finds it rewarding to prove she's better than her "lesser" cousin. It makes her feel like she's actually worth something and that she was born an alicorn (not to mention, the first alicorn) for a super special reason or somethin 

Thanks again though!! ;-; They have to force a smile a lot for the sake of blood being blood despite it all, but they've never liked each other. If Love ever goes down with her plan to overthrow her family, Cassie and Twilight would be the first ones they'd call, buuuut it'll be a tricky decision for Cassie because maybe she doesn't even want to help. The verbal abuse from Flurry that she had to deal with throughout childhood might prompt her to just look the other way. I'm planning on fleshing out more of their relationship as cousins and as the next generations of princesses!! And yes, their interactions start shifting away from just verbal once they get older. Harming a princess in any way is a serious crime, no matter who you are, so let's just say they're headed into some real deep waters in the future 

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Bluebell-Sky1211 [2020-05-08 15:39:11 +0000 UTC]

Wow this story was very deep, but I LOVED IT!!!

God, I never thought Flurry would be so...not mean but just kind of a B. Haha sorry had to say it. I can see why Cassie has a hard time being a Princess with the shadows of Flurry rude comments and how she treats her. It’s sad really but this story was very beautiful and I loved every inch of it!

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Venommocity In reply to Bluebell-Sky1211 [2020-05-15 23:29:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed the read ;-; 

lol it's true tho. She definitely kinda just looms under Flurry's shadow, especially because she's the "other" alicorn princess. Flurry was the first princess to be born an alicorn (at least, the first in thousands n thousands of years), and that in itself was an incredible phenomenon. Sure, it's pretty interesting that it happened again with Cassie, and that all of this is occurring in one generation, but the ponies have been there, seen that. With the birth of a second alicorn it's not as special anymore. It's like alicorns are becoming a species of their own, and that their population is slowly rising. They're not special anymore. So yeah, what I'm getting at is Cassie just feels like the second alicorn. It doesn't help that Flurry shoves that in her face, either. And thanks again!! Happy you liked it <33

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Bluebell-Sky1211 In reply to Venommocity [2020-05-16 00:08:33 +0000 UTC]

You’re very welcome!!! And I really did!


Awww that’s so sad! I mean I get why ponies are like that but those things don’t really happen all of the time so I feel bad for Cassie

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