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Published: 2011-03-17 16:38:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 3707; Favourites: 153; Downloads: 504
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Description I still don't know if this is a proper picture, but hnnng. I don't feel like this is critique-worthy, but if I always think like that, I'll just never end up asking for critique.

Chargestone cave is one of my favourite places in Black/White, and I love Joltiks and Galvantulas a lot.
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Comments: 28

TheJunkShoppe [2011-03-17 16:53:36 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


I personally respond very strongly to this piece.
However I do have just a few pointers that I feel could improve it e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> One thing I feel that is lacking is a bit of contrast. I like the colors a lot however it all seems to be about the same tone, mostly in the grey area. I feel like bumping up the contrast in the foreground and darkening the background would give the drawing far more depth.
Also, if you darkened the area on the cave wall you could play more with the light from the outside.
Overall I really enjoy the composition and it wouldn't take much to make this drawing truly outstanding e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

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Version-L In reply to TheJunkShoppe [2011-03-17 16:57:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot for critiquing! I'm sure to focus more on the parts you mentioned next time, I thought this looked a bit dull anyways.
Thanks!

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TheJunkShoppe In reply to Version-L [2011-03-17 16:58:15 +0000 UTC]

not a problem

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Flyffel [2011-09-16 22:19:23 +0000 UTC]

Älä nyt viitti, täähän on todella hieno!

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taly4 [2011-07-30 02:05:16 +0000 UTC]

very nice! but I just found out that the backround was stolen!!! any idea on who it is?

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Version-L In reply to taly4 [2011-07-30 13:49:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! It was used as a background of a meme in 4chan if I get it right. I honestly don't mind it.

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taly4 In reply to Version-L [2011-07-30 17:29:35 +0000 UTC]

o, ok

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Coli-Chibi [2011-04-04 19:03:48 +0000 UTC]

If I ever get that game, I am so going there.

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littlelollypop [2011-03-27 08:02:55 +0000 UTC]

varjot *-*
aivanihanatausta

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suppari [2011-03-19 21:15:52 +0000 UTC]

HIENO TAUSTA! 8D NOI KRISTALLIT NÄYTTÄÄ UPEILLE *W* IHANAN VÄRISET 83
JA PIKKASEN UPEE VARJOSTUS! D8 JA VÄRIT
TÄÄ ON TOSI HIENO

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onibusha [2011-03-19 01:19:17 +0000 UTC]

dis drawing is berri good and colos

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vanillaa [2011-03-18 20:53:06 +0000 UTC]

Minäkin tykästyin näihin kahteen otukseen kun näin ne >w< Ne ovat suloisia 8D
Mahtavat varjostukset tuossa Galvantulassa Ja taustakin on hieno :0

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Version-L In reply to vanillaa [2011-03-19 05:56:38 +0000 UTC]

Sjkdldjk karvasia hämähäkkejä totta kai. >:'D
Kiitos paljon!

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vanillaa In reply to Version-L [2011-03-19 08:06:44 +0000 UTC]

*reps* Niin no, sitähän ne ovat... XD

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Lily-Lyn-Rain [2011-03-18 14:49:58 +0000 UTC]

The it a beautiful picture! And I'm glad to know I'm not the only one in love with these two.

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Version-L In reply to Lily-Lyn-Rain [2011-03-18 16:03:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I see there's a lot of love for Joltik, but poor Galvantula's getting a bit neglected!

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Lily-Lyn-Rain In reply to Version-L [2011-03-21 14:14:25 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!
And I know what you mean!

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V1KA [2011-03-18 11:27:14 +0000 UTC]

Gaah, toi tausta. *_____* Kunpa itsekkin keksisin/osaisin/jaksaisin jotain samanlaista XD
Aww.. ja molemmat on niin sulosiakin. 8D Kuinka pitkällä oot muuten Whitessä/Blackissa? Et onko menty läpi, vai puoles välis vai vai! :'D

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Version-L In reply to V1KA [2011-03-18 11:41:47 +0000 UTC]

Näääh kiitos. :--D
On on tietysti! C: Olen mennyt varsinaisen juonen jo läpi, mut näitä kaupunkejahan on käytävänä vielä kolme ja sit kaikkea pientä kivaa sontaa, joten enhämmää oo kunnolla vielä alottanukkaan 8D

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Daianta [2011-03-17 20:25:53 +0000 UTC]

<33 I love this image a lot

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Version-L In reply to Daianta [2011-03-18 11:42:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! C:>

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Caletheflyer [2011-03-17 18:04:57 +0000 UTC]

Aika magee! Laittaisin taustakuvaks jos ois vähän isompi!

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Version-L In reply to Caletheflyer [2011-03-18 11:42:52 +0000 UTC]

Thänks! xD Kylhän mä voin sulle ottaa tästä isomman resoluutionkin jos tiiät minkä kokonen näyttö sulla on :'D

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Caletheflyer In reply to Version-L [2011-03-18 13:20:51 +0000 UTC]

En mä tiedä muuta kuin että on 19 tuumanen Oiskohan joku 900 x 1440.

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JohnSegway [2011-03-17 17:21:22 +0000 UTC]

Awww that's great c:

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Version-L In reply to JohnSegway [2011-03-17 17:25:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! cx

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Mrhappysadas [2011-03-17 16:39:24 +0000 UTC]

This is awsome! You deserve a watch!

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Version-L In reply to Mrhappysadas [2011-03-17 16:44:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! C:

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