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"FUTURA" Multipurpose web template - 26.11.2013A web template i found really appealing to add on deviantart, hope you will love it guy's.
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P.S I would really respect some critic !
Design status: Available for sale
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Comments: 17
DreamON-Mpak [2013-11-26 15:30:55 +0000 UTC]
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The main function of a company website is its usability and accessible navigation. Users are like little children - metaphorically should always keep them in hand and guide them. This is the main error that I see in your design - too many navigation elements that confuse the average consumer, disordered arrangement and lack of personal style. Nowadays it is a modern clean design but it is not forgiveness for lack of personal input element in the works.
My advice is :
Do not combine too many background elements in one page. ( in this templete I see 4)
Remove repeated elements from the content. ( elements like "about us" and all "blog" content)
Less navigational elements ! ( This design is cluttered with buttons)
Always express your personal style in your work. This makes it distinctive and memorable. ( This design carries associations of a hospital or a business card to a dermatologist - Clean, sharp and without feeling and idea )
Never try to fulfill the wishes of the client - If you make a design with a sense customers will be pleased with what you've done.
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vertus-design In reply to DreamON-Mpak [2013-11-27 02:49:09 +0000 UTC]
Hi, DreamON-Mpak !
Thank you very much for your detailed, and well written critique, and the time it took you to do it, really !
But when i started to read it, there were some points, where i didn't see things in my work, that apparently you saw...
I agree with you with this "The main function of a company website is its usability and accessible navigation. Users are like little children - metaphorically should always keep them in hand and guide them."
You mentioned that i'am having too much navigation items in my design, to which i must disagree.
Web-page sections must always be accessible in instant, that's one of the reasons i put navigation items, till it still is appealing for an average user.
Could you please explain me by what u meant disordered arrangement ?
I didn't try to combine too much of backgrounds elements, it's more of my personal style why i put each section in different color background.
Yeah with repeated elements, i must agree, i could probably put there something else, but it was for preview use more like, that's why I didn't pay too much attention to that, tough.
I don't know how you see in this design, "hospital or business card design to dermatologist" style, because, i quite always strive for unique and dynamic design, that's being driven by my views and imagination. And i try no to copy anyone, or try to come close to anyone.
This design was pretty much influenced to me, by 00's urban city's architecture.
And Helsinki metro stations.
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vertus-design In reply to dudeksmartins [2013-12-07 12:01:06 +0000 UTC]
Grūti pateikt vai par daudz, bet kaut ko jau var palabot, varbūt tuvākajās dienās augšuplādēšu nedaudz palabotu versiju.
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AzRaIL922 [2013-12-02 23:23:25 +0000 UTC]
Hey, really nice Design! Wanted to tell you I made a Design too, inspired by yours.
You can find it in my gallery.
Keep up the good work
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vertus-design In reply to AzRaIL922 [2013-12-05 09:17:10 +0000 UTC]
Thank's !
Just checked, great work, keep it up !
Don't forget to follow me for more inspiration !
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RealVect0r [2013-11-26 13:02:14 +0000 UTC]
round corners around "Our clients" are unexpected
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vertus-design In reply to RealVect0r [2013-11-26 14:10:09 +0000 UTC]
I guess in a good way ?
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RealVect0r In reply to vertus-design [2013-11-27 05:44:12 +0000 UTC]
hmmm... ummm... aaaa... not sure about that...
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vertus-design In reply to RealVect0r [2013-11-27 07:05:20 +0000 UTC]
Okay, i see what you mean, did some edit.
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RealVect0r In reply to vertus-design [2013-11-28 05:02:38 +0000 UTC]
Oh, that's perfect 4 me now.
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