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This is an attempt at realism that I did, cut off a bit. I think it needs more shadow detail... tell me what you think.~Vetch
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Ren-tard [2007-12-28 02:58:44 +0000 UTC]
It's good that you're practicing realism, but the girl needs some lips unless they're painfully thin like an elder.
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Lumenox [2007-04-09 17:47:08 +0000 UTC]
Not bad I think! I guess like you said, more shadows, but also more "something" with the hair, will make this pic look better...
By "something" I mean it looks a bit too flat, but it is my humble point of view
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Vetch In reply to Lumenox [2007-04-09 18:53:31 +0000 UTC]
Hm... I think you're right about the hair. I'll work on that. Thanks.
~Vetch
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Lumenox In reply to Vetch [2007-04-11 18:19:01 +0000 UTC]
you are welcome! I'm glad my comment deserve to something ^^"
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Elielie [2007-04-09 14:22:02 +0000 UTC]
nice! you got the contstruction lines very well & the expression on the subject really comes out; i think that's the strenght of this piece..as for suggestions, i think you should do more variations w/ the shading. shadows or lighting in general will do wonders in making an art work look realistic
Still, great job!
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Vetch In reply to Elielie [2007-04-09 18:53:09 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, you really are right about the shading. I did another piece, which I may post here, and it looks really great with shading.
Thanks so much.
~Vetch
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Yakarin [2007-04-08 21:09:52 +0000 UTC]
Very nice, as you say, perhaps adding a bit of more shadow marks would make it more realistic, it look great though.
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Vetch In reply to Yakarin [2007-04-08 22:13:56 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. Yeah, I think it would help. I have a better one to show, perhaps...
~Vetch
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