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ViewerDiscretion — Mistaking Time
Published: 2012-11-08 09:56:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 129; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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~Redundancy shrouds my reflection,
I have become blind.
How long ago..
Did Disease cradle my mind.
Maybe time and i never got along
it never bothered me so.
Until recent silence rung against my heart.
To be greeted with heavy emptiness.
Time; set my mind at ease,
before it is consumed by thoughts
like these.
Comments: 2
I understand perfectly well, and I wouldn't without the vivid descriptions you have provided in this poem. Even so, you appear to leave some details in the dark (or perhaps I'm oblivious after all). It works: the poem paints a clear picture of a certain condition, yet it has something mysterious all the while. I like it, that's for sure.
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Hahaha thanks man, appreciate the feedback heaps. And yeah the missing a few details are semi intentional, semi laziness (however i liked it as is) i hope for the reader to be able to somewhat relate, i think the mystery lies within ones own perception
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