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Starry-Shizen [2013-09-14 10:28:38 +0000 UTC]

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Hello! This is one of the very few critiques I ever give~!
Anyway, let's get started!

First off, I'd like to say that I really love your compositions!
They're really great! Very detailed, precise, and often times I wonder what kind of things a character would do in a place like that, or other times, what the story behind the location is.
I honestly love the concentration of light in one major part of the drawing, since it gives direction to the artwork itself. Or like in the one on the bottom left, the lit up areas lead you from left to right, giving attention to all parts of the artwork.

I see a lot of great techniques being used to make the area look much more realistic. And with perspective applied with those techniques, it looks less flat than it would without the techniques!

Wonderful application of 2 point perspective in most of these. (I will be studying these for learning purposes, I hope you don't mind!)

But I'm a little concerned about the similar colors being used in each scene. Was that on purpose because of theme or the project leader (if it is another person besides you) requested for that?
I would have loved to see other colors being used. Orange seems to work well since it does contrast the cool and neutral colors used, but I'm sure there are other colors that would stick out too!
I get the same feeling from each of them because of color composition, even if they're of different scenes.


But overall I really love these scenes! They're great for telling almost any kind of story~ I wish you luck on completing the project!

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aliciafuentes [2013-09-25 14:12:45 +0000 UTC]

I would definitely buy that!!

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EFBailey [2013-09-14 16:20:10 +0000 UTC]

I'm most impressed by the use of light and shadow here, though your minimalistic-yet-complex style and color choices are also highly striking.  Excellent work all around.

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templar127 [2013-09-14 14:33:02 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

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BroBrotherRother [2013-09-14 13:33:12 +0000 UTC]

The one at the bottom right kinda reminds me of Dead Space. Very scifi-ish, I approve C:

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