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Viper9000 — Chapter 4 of Rose: Final
Published: 2008-04-30 20:52:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 10055; Favourites: 50; Downloads: 50
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Description She stood slowly and looked down at me bending down some. I stood and placed a hand on her belly feeling it press against me as it grew to four months. "I understand now...though this is odd, I'll stay with you. I'll be a father to your children here, if that is what you want." I said blishing some as her belly began to pin me down pressing on the five months.

She began to cry happy tears and plopped back into my lap kissing my cheek. She then smiled softly gazing down at the life within her and knowing that she had someone that wouldn't leave her. Soon after she hit seven months she fell asleep snuggling up to me as if to welcome me home..as if to say I belong there.

Well she hit nine months and winced once again. It seemes that in just one day she had gone though the whole pregnancy trimester. And now..now it was time to see the children within her.

But, they way she gave birth was not something you need to know mother, so I won't tell that part. But she had six children, three boys and three girls with my DNA within them. She was her thin self once again and pulled me into a hug as I held a couple of them.

This was all so amazing little did I know that...that her appartment was also her spaceship and was on coarse for her planet. She told me this right after the children were in bed and she smiled. Telling me that I would be the king of her planet and she the birthing queen seemed to shock me some. She had lied a bit.

Every ten years the princesses of that planet set out searching for a mate to bring back and make them king, over a certain part of their world they were given, and marry them blessing them with many children. I am still surprised mother..I was no king yet, her planet..her planet was so interesting, and the air was just like our air.

Soon I was married to her, and our children were growing some..and now mother I-..I hope you are well. May my letter grace you and calm your ease..that your son is fine and loves you and would like you to visit this planet one day to see your grandchildren.

She continues to get pregnant almost every day, in fact today she told me that she was going to give bith to eight children. It was truly odd yet happy that I met her..my Rose among the weeds. So now mother, she beacons me to be by her side so I must go..so I have to end this letter..I hope one day you will come to visit.

Love your son,
Chris Florence

P.S. Your grand children are cute why just the other day little Jessie came up to me and asked why my ears were round. And I laughed, her ears, like her mothers, were pointed. But one day you'll see them..and to those who do happen upon this letter..your true love is out there. Weather she's from another planet or not.

Before he knew it Rose walked in and pulled him into a hug. She kissed her cheek and let his head rest on her belly some, as if to say that she needed him. He looked up into her eyes and smiled letting the carrier alien whisk his letter away before pulling his wife into another kiss, making her belly surge out faster.

His twenty kids all gazed upon him happily ready to tackle their beloved father. Chris was so happy, and to this day he still is. People on Earth miss him somewhat, with faded memories but they know he's alright..he's where he belongs.
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Comments: 39

jacobguy [2012-04-10 10:37:01 +0000 UTC]

very Very VERY well written story, IT'S GLORIOUS!




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Demopan?

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Viper9000 In reply to jacobguy [2012-04-10 15:40:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I'll be sure to pass your complements onto

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jacobguy In reply to Viper9000 [2012-04-10 15:48:48 +0000 UTC]

Alright

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Preg-fur [2010-07-09 05:51:10 +0000 UTC]

Replace her with a good furry and that would be a dream come true for me

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Viper9000 In reply to Preg-fur [2010-07-09 06:23:09 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, not much of the furry writter. Besides the credit for this story goes to my buddy

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TokoGT [2008-07-15 04:46:02 +0000 UTC]

Excelent! Ill be shure to complement him ^^
Im glad you were to share this

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Viper9000 In reply to TokoGT [2008-07-15 05:56:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I'm sure he will love it. ^^

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trh7323 [2008-07-04 01:22:54 +0000 UTC]

Incredible story. I like it alot.

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Viper9000 In reply to trh7323 [2008-07-04 02:00:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you but don't tell me, tell Twilightdrifter...

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megarob15 [2008-06-17 22:48:30 +0000 UTC]

Hello, Viper. Can i ask you a question?

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Viper9000 In reply to megarob15 [2008-06-18 01:57:12 +0000 UTC]

Depends, whats the question?

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megarob15 In reply to Viper9000 [2008-06-18 01:58:42 +0000 UTC]

Since we are friends you want me to stay alive right?

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Viper9000 In reply to megarob15 [2008-06-18 01:59:41 +0000 UTC]

Well thats a stupid question, of course. Why do you ask?

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megarob15 In reply to Viper9000 [2008-06-18 02:17:04 +0000 UTC]

Nothing. Hey you went to my DA page where my art gallery is at?

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Viper9000 In reply to megarob15 [2008-06-18 02:22:18 +0000 UTC]

Yeah...

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megarob15 In reply to Viper9000 [2008-06-18 02:22:58 +0000 UTC]

One more deviation and it will make 300th deviation! I draw my OCs like Ninja Rat.

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Viper9000 In reply to megarob15 [2008-06-18 02:25:24 +0000 UTC]

Nice.

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megarob15 In reply to Viper9000 [2008-06-18 02:26:26 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. I took pictures of my drawings using my mom's camera. What is your fave WB, Disney and Digimon character?

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Viper9000 In reply to megarob15 [2008-06-18 15:01:32 +0000 UTC]

I don't really remember any disney characters that I really liked but as for digimon I always liked augumon.

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megarob15 In reply to Viper9000 [2008-06-18 15:43:26 +0000 UTC]

Me too.

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Madderance [2008-05-15 17:31:33 +0000 UTC]

This was intersting..I like the concept of the story,

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Viper9000 In reply to Madderance [2008-05-15 17:57:40 +0000 UTC]

Glad to hear you like it, tell Twilightdrifter what you think.

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yorkiejokiegg [2008-04-30 22:57:36 +0000 UTC]

I love that!

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Viper9000 In reply to yorkiejokiegg [2008-05-01 02:24:10 +0000 UTC]

Pass on the complements to Twilightdrifter...

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Twilightdrifter [2008-04-30 21:12:15 +0000 UTC]

lol xD so you finally put it up! ^^

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Viper9000 In reply to Twilightdrifter [2008-05-01 02:26:13 +0000 UTC]

Yeah... Sorry it took so long. XD

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Viper9000 In reply to Viper9000 [2008-05-01 02:49:25 +0000 UTC]

And I choose to post it, so I may help you get more views. ^^

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Twilightdrifter In reply to Viper9000 [2008-05-01 02:35:14 +0000 UTC]

lol xD well I didn't mind if you did it or not. It was your choice after all.

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animefan232 In reply to Twilightdrifter [2008-07-06 04:33:01 +0000 UTC]

Very nice story, Twilightdrifter.

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Twilightdrifter In reply to animefan232 [2008-07-09 05:23:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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animefan232 In reply to Twilightdrifter [2008-07-09 13:19:10 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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Twilightdrifter In reply to animefan232 [2008-07-10 14:18:59 +0000 UTC]

So you enjoying your summer so far?

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animefan232 In reply to Twilightdrifter [2008-07-10 14:20:51 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I am. You?

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Twilightdrifter In reply to animefan232 [2008-07-11 02:22:20 +0000 UTC]

yeah ^^ just got back from a trip.

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animefan232 In reply to Twilightdrifter [2008-07-11 13:48:40 +0000 UTC]

Cool.

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Twilightdrifter In reply to animefan232 [2008-07-11 15:46:58 +0000 UTC]

^^

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megarob15 [2008-04-30 20:59:36 +0000 UTC]

i love it! =3 :3

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Viper9000 In reply to megarob15 [2008-04-30 21:04:22 +0000 UTC]

Well don't tell me, tell Twilightdrifter; he wrote it...

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megarob15 In reply to Viper9000 [2008-04-30 21:04:52 +0000 UTC]

okay.

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