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Published: 2015-04-30 20:59:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 943; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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lol the blossoming relationship between me and kissmeyoufoolfanfict  . This is cuz i never surprise her with anything since she beta-reads everything I write. LOLOLOLDo you like the burushu I added?
PPPP.S. Caitlin never told me that my fic sounds like it was written by a 14 year old (actually that was Makaria  ) nor has she really ever called anything of mine shitty except for the fact that Erwin didn't die in my Levi x Reader: A Victim and a Slave series. She really wanted him to die. LOL.
okay wait, Kissu/Caitlin/idk-what-she-wants-to-be-called-anymore wants me to give her credit for being an ass, so yes, you were an ass when I had you beta the first version of RMTB (Levi x Reader: Remind Me to Breathe 1 ) and rightfully so because the first version was some strange like shit that literally came out of my ass. BUT I'm glad I didn't drop the series cuz I think you somehow ended up liking the...4th version of the first chapter? LOLOLOL
P.S.S. 14 year olds have been known to write really great fanfics. Just FYI. That totally could have been a compliment. //iamsosorrytomyyoungerfriends lol
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Comments: 43
When i have someone read my stories :
1st time : that's weird !
Noooo.. you're suppose to read it like this, blah, blah, blah
3rd time : what ?
Noooo... i told you before... you're suppose to read it like this !
5th time : i still don't get it
Noooo... try to remember what i told you
10th time : hahajajaja.. that's funny !
Noooo... the joke in this story is a broken moment, you were too alow to realise it...
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TTuTT I think I wasn't able to understand
I blame my exhaustion
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I once swapped stories with my friend and she gave me the vague: "It's good!"
In return, I was like, "Run ons; consistent spelling errors; the romance progressed way too fast; and what was going on--"
"Oh, thanks." She never wanted to do that again -.-
I wish more people were able to handle criticism... but then again, we were like freshmen in high school.
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LOLOLOL yeah i reacted badly too honestly the first time but she'll get over it eventually XD
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XP cuz you're too sweet to me and spoil me too much haha
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No I don't LOL
You know I always say what i think and I know you're a talented person
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people keep telling me i need beta readers but i dnt really think i need them. whats your take on them?
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Haha only if you want! 
Honestly for me, it's fun to bounce ideas off of someone else.
I think beta readers are good if you feel hesitant about your work. They tend to give you more confidence when posting.
Uhh between me and kissu, beta reading has just turned into a habit for fun haha.
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Oï ! i'm 14 X'D But yeah, I write like a shit X'DD my french teacher is just so nice~
Poor erwin... qwq
LMFAO
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lolololol <333 u don't write like shit!!! ur handwriting is nice X3
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LOLOLOL truth makes peeps laugh XD
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LOLOL u got some experience with one too?XDDD
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yeah, I get exactly what you mean, like it's so on point.
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Awwww~ there there smexy-chan! ^_^ don't cry! *hugs you real hard*
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awww XDD thank u rabeya-chan!! ooh btw! I'm hosting an art giveaway X33 wanan participate? XD it's in my journals!
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Sure! What's it about? Sorry po-chan but I haven't been sleeping for three days straight cuz I've got this really bad flu so I'm feeling tooloooooooo lazy right now...can you tell me what it is? I'd love to participate! I'll read the details when I feel like super man again! ^_^ just tell me the outlines
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It's just me giving away free art
And it's in my journals! The most recent one!
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HAHAHA! when i saw the 14-year old part, i was like...that's Makaria ! XD
but omg she's such a good beta-reader~ 
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wait have u heard from makaria recently?? she's been like mia with me and aka so we were wondering where she is??? lol.
and girl i feel u. makaria knows how to make stuff realistic. she has her shit down. XDD
and LOLOL seems like u know makaria pretty well already then XD it took her and i maybe 4 months to get to the "this sounds like a 14 year old" LOLOLOL
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she just replied me today. but i think she's busy?
hahaha yeah! XD
wellll i think she's not being super blunt yet but she certainly has a lot of questions about my plot and stuff which some of them i haven't thought about. 
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goddamn i have been waiting for Makaria to rise from the dead of yaoi LOLOLOl
WHERE IS SHE AT THO?!!?!? XDDD
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ehh exams? XD
*calls out to Makaria *!! think she should be sleeping now though.
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I have finally reached the level of online familiarity where people talk about me in my absence in a weird combination of both complimenting me and calling me out for my beta reading skills
hah, yeah, ever since the 14yr old incident where I felt like a total tool afterwards I promised myself I wouldn't be that blunt anymore. so now I'm trying to find polite ways of pointing out stuff I don't like instead of thinking up rude comparisons lol.
but you know I love you guys regardless of my current levels of sociability. *squeezes you and SmexyLeviLover into a bear hug*
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WindMeister8
AND WHEN U SMILEEEE
THE WHOLE WORLD STOPS AND STARES FR A WHILE
CUZ GIRLS UR AMAZING
JUST THE WAY YALL ARE
lmao smexy texan version right there. nahhh i honestly love that phrase now because it's officially ingrained in my head and turned out to be a funny comic XD
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awww *squeezes you and SmexyLeviLover back as hard as possible*
i think you're fine just the way u are~ 
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THIS FUCKING SHIT LOOKS LIKE IT WAS WRITTEN BY A FOUR YEAR OLD AND THEN SHAT ON BY YOUR GRANDMOTHER WITH THAT NASTY RANCID POODLE SHIT SHE CALLS ART.
Just the average day of reading my best friends fanfics. Nothing much.
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lol i think this is an accurate representation of what caitlin told me about rmtb? LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
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She only cried a little. Improvement I guess...
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THIS IS THE BEST FUCKING comic I HAVE EVER SEEN OMG SHJSKSKDHDNDUDUNSKDONZHSHSHHXTHANK U UUUUYYU
But man I did hate rmtb at first like the hell was that laughing shit. And then like u were like "u made me cry." And I was like "I did???" And was all surprised omg
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LOL the best description of our relationship right now hahahah XDD
AND LOLOLOLOL u were surprised i started crying? well i did throw a fit though and i was kinda childish XDDD thanks for putting up with me tho lolololol. I would have given up on me.
honestly idk what that laughing shit was either. let's just never mention it again LOL. it's forever the weird part of my writing fanfic career
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truuuu man for real tho.
i mean yea, cuz u never mentioned it when you were actually crying and then one day u said i made u cry and i was shocked!! me? make you cry? NEVER!! but yea, youre welcome. i think ur a swaggyh chick tho so its np! im surprised u put up with me tbh. evvn im sick of my shit!!
ok my lips are sealed
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haha thank u XDDD i like the ending too!!! i've hardened up my feels >D BRING IT ON.
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You are welcome dear ^^
You made the right choice by doing that ^^ NEVER GIVE UP.
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