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Published: 2005-12-18 13:51:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 3400; Favourites: 105; Downloads: 1111
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my empty bottle - name has nothing to do with it loljust cant get it right (especialy composition)
critique is very very welcome
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I like those colors. Great atmosphere, as well.
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waah doet me denke aan een sprinkhaan ._.
verstopt onder dekens*
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Actually, I like the composition and the color scheme. The textures are also well done.
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Very interesting. Can't see what it is, if it's supposed to anything tho, but it's still interesting^^
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Holllyy ghosts this is so unique and amazing. How did you find this form? I want thison my wall.
I think the name makes sense. When i drink and finish a bottle of whiskey my stomach looks just like this.
Dali has a saying "The fact that i dont know the meanings of my paintings doesnt mean that they dont have a meaning.
Great work.
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This is very interesting! It has a sense of mm.. anticipation? I am not sure what it is, but the detail is lovely and I'm drawn.
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Wow, great work
I'm sure I'm not the first one to point this out, but it looks like a dragon.
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I think what it might be needing, is a bit soft lighting to the left, subtle. Oh and the forms are stunning.
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i like it, if you really wanna change it to get it better you might wanna try changing colours or adding some more background but at the moment its already pretty good. Only bad thing about it is that it looks a bit like the piece in your featured deviation.
I really like it though
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wow vire that looks like an engine parts that fall apart....the shape is awesome..you do kick ass render....i like how blurr out a little at the bottom part...great job !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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great job focusing the subject, and the bg, its...its awesome
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woooooooooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aahHhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
I love it man....excellent concept and textures...good composition
love it bro
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really beautiful work here man.. your abstracts have continuously gotten better and better!
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thank you 
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definitely man.. keep it up
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That's pretty nice, I like it, the colors are good, though I'm not normally a big fan of such similiar colors in the scheme, but you managed to do a pretty good job of it. =]
The render itself looks really nice, it seems so real, almost like a photo of some kind of abstract sculpture of some sort.
the only thing I would change, is move the render in the bottom right, behind the other render, and make it blend in some more, it'll probably help the composition, seeing as all the weight seems to be at the bottom right.
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ah i see thanks for the feed back deff. gona try it
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great piece^^ again a new step forward
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haha if you want me to touch it youll have to make a sculpture or somthing -P that would be a cool id though...if you could sculp..maybe with rusty metal or somthing..to get te right colours
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wow fantastic, this looks like a highly magnified photo of some bizzare insect. excellent
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could be but i think it works
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I think your compisition is definetly improving m8... nice job
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I really like it! The material on the render is awesome and the sense of depth is great!
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looks like a praying mantis.
Render looks good, but it definitely lacks some detail. Great texture tho. Overall its a good start, but not "finished"
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yeah ive seen it to,.. ill keep uploading improvements thought
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It looks good bro, I think you are on the right track. The only thing that you need is a render behind the main render. Like a blurred render behind this main attraction. Because you have the blurred render in the front, main render in the middle, now you just need another blurred one in the back.
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Yeah i agree. It doesn't fit with the laws of design.
I
You are driving past a sign advertising your favorite show.
You drive past it from 150 ft away, it is going to be more blurry than clear and detailed.
however when you pull up to the sidewalk to look at the sign... you can seee text and details.
Nice attempt though.
you're very close
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yeah ive also thought about that but i had probs with the atmospheric perspective like how furter away something is how lighter the couler beceause the render looks best on a dark render i coudnt really brighten the render on the back or it would look strange o_O
tnx for the qritueqe thought ^^
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yea I understand what you mean, sometimes it just doesn't work. Well this is not a bad attempt at all. Perhaps something, anything, in the background would just make this piece come together. Since the background seems foggy/misty, you might create something to come out of the mist/fog. Just seems like it makes sense
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