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VISIONARYLEO — Optimus Primal II - 'Maximal Commander'

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Greetings, this is a new OC base on an existing character from the Beast Wars. This Transformer has many things that relate to many past Transformers TV Series, all of which to make this one, quite a uniquely special type. Once more, it’s very existence has it appearing in a Fanmake Universe of where two series CROSSOVER: from recent events showing a popular theme is with Transformers & My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic (especially after what was seen from the 4th film: Age Of Extinction). So now with a new twist to things, two representatives of Maximal & Predacon from the Beast Wars Series made in America, will play an intriguing role in a MLP: Universe from a good pal of mine: JusSonic. So get yourselves ready, you’re about to see some exciting stuff that will make one Transform (pun intended…), in what kind of crazy fun happens, especially when new representative elements occur for those here: This one has the Element Of Robotics, so kick back & enjoy the show…

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Maximal Commander: ‘Optimal’ Optimus Primal II

Voice Actor: Garry Chalk

Personality: Same as the Optimus Primal (BW) from Beast Wars TV Series.

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SKILLS: A wise and compassionate Maximal Commander, exhibiting valor and heroism during his role in the Beast Wars occurring in Equestria. When a forced circumstance occurred that called for a desperate gambit, Optimus Primal II takes the Spark of the greatest of his Autobot ancestors into his body. But an accident happens that it knocks him into some cases of Seeds while falling into a concentrated pool of bright blue liquified substance of Energon; dubbed Super Energon. While the Maximal crew & the Mane Six works feverishly to repair the destroyed circuitry of Optimus Prime & end the timestorm that threats to tear Equestria universe apart, Optimus struggles to stay alive. His body is wracked by the strain of containing two Sparks, something his bio-mechanical battle frame was never built for along with the natural combined elements of Super Energon & the materials from the Seeds that make Transformium. The pressure was becoming too extremely dangerous, that the Mane Six’s ally & friend; Harmony, used her element’s ability to balance the subjects while unknowingly doing two things: Creating the subject formal known as Rainbow Energon of magic & energy. And lastly, became the creation of a new element; the Element Of Robotics. By the time the Spark of the Autobot leader is returned to its rightful place, Optimus Primal II was now mutated by the collected powers of the Matrix Of Leadership, Transformium, Super Energon & Rainbow Energon into Optimal Optimus Primal II, a Maximal of incredible size and astounding might. Armored and equipped like an Autobot warrior from the Golden Age of Cybertron, he’ll cast a formidable shadow, and presents himself as the greatest threat Megatron II and his Predacons have ever faced. With the Element Of Robotics, Optimus has been given the power to help plant the seeds of the future of both living creatures & machines..existing together.

BATTLE DATA (1 out of 10 Measurements with the highest number being the strongest matter): Strength 10+, Intelligence 10+, Speed 10+, Endurance 10+, Rank 10+, Courage 10+, Firepower 10+, Skill 10+

TRANSFORM MODES: With the Exposure to a nebulous entity along with other sources reconfigured the Transpony into the Ultimate Four Mode Transmetal. Optimal Optimus Primal II receives smart missile cannons that are functional and all modes of operation. In hypersonic attack mode, he has an upgraded Cybertronian "air guardian" jet technology equipped with scramjet modules specialized for unmatched velocity. In armored ground-assault mode, he transgresses all terrain and overcomes all opposition. Battle-reactive blast shields supply him with an impenetrable defense, making Optimal Optimus the most potent threat ever to face-off against Megatron II and his Predacons.

BEAST MODE: A giant-size robotic ape of the same heights in Robot Mode. Seen with a gold chest body, gold large mechanical hands, blue boot feet with feather toes, on the middle of his chest & arms were blue wheels that connect his red arms with a wing attached to it, he had gray armbands, gray leg bands on his red legs it seems! On his back appear to be a red two gun set blaster with the middle thing to be a target locking devise. The head appears to look ape-like, blue face, red-pink eyes that came out after a red set of eyes for when he was scanning, his helmet looked like a golden base while his top had gray coloring to show a gold mark line crown it seems.

ROBOT MODE: A tall robot approximately 35 feet in height. The body shows a gold chest body, gold large mechanical hands, blue boot feet with feather toes, on the middle of his chest and arms were blue wheels that connect his red arms with a wing attached to it is placed out on his shoulder's edge, position on top of his shoulders to expose his gray elbow gear, gray leg bands on his red legs it seems. His chest even shows a glass case to be his lower waist underneath his chest, like something small could fit in there. His robotic head was something, as they say it looked like the helmet had gold lines and pointed two line marks above while a blue shade was on top and had a mark vent horn in the middle, the face looked partially gray while he had blue mouth set under his chin and across his nose, and had green eyes that stared at the situation.

LAND MODE: Transforms into a Tank-like Vehicle: The arms and hands put together in the front, his chest glass case waist out front above the two merge wheels behind his closed hands. On top of the back was the gun set, legs facing down position where in the back, as they had two wheels out on the side.

FLIGHT MODE: Transforms into a Plane-like Vehicle: The guns are located on the back, the legs and feet are where the rocket engines are located, and the glass case waist part was the prime head, kinda like for a plane in where a pilot sits in. The only difference of this plane-type model is that the arms were stretched out in front while the wings were spread, allowing easier movement of arms and hands around now.

RAINBOW ENERGON: With the addition of Transformium, it’s presence with the newest energy source can allow one with powerful enhanced capabilities, but in a new-found scale. Such means allow the Transformium to perform a different means of transforming; including Size Alteration: the reconfiguring of molecules to assume any shape of one’s structure can grant more mass. Others is possessing the Energy Output Levels as on a near cosmic scale to effect the environment depending on how the user performs their actions: Creation Or Destruction.

*GIGANTIC MODE: A new mode special to only those that received supernatural energy sources, allowing one Transform their average size, into a larger form. The first motion of action perform, is transforming the body to reach the height 95-100 feet. Once performed, all of their abilities will be heighten & increased to a larger scale of display compared to before. There is of course, one final action in where drawing on more Special Energon Substance, can change a bot to reach the height to be described as a TITAN, & from there…all abilities & weaponry function will reach a skyrocketing point to what could lead to a power of taking on the largest fleets of armies & leaving nothing standing.

*ULTIMATE FORM: When changing into a Transformer titan size form, from the powers of the element & everything else (Light Or Dark) will appear. For Optimus Primal II, his color scheme is mostly red & dark blue with the silver-white portions too: The feet, ankle to knees, hands, upper chest-plate over the cockpit glass, & partly the sides of the helmet are dark blue, the exo-structure are silver-white of the legs & inner arms, & the waist, to the body, shoulders to wrist & partly the front helmet & a mouth cover are red. 

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Techniques: After having obtain a new body function from having the Spark of his Ancestor inside, followed by a combination of large Transformium & a powerful source of Energon beyond the usual substance, & lastly from one addition: Harmony’s Rainbow Magic of Balance. These gave birth to a new Element relating to the Powers of Magic & the Science Of Technology: The Element Of Robotics. The element brings a certain special function, it can help in the future development of machines with living A.I.s & free will can co-exist with living creatures. From the Matrix Of Leadership that gave it’s existence, provides the user with wisdom by communicating with deceased leaders who held the Matrix in their lifetime(namely those that are Primes), bestow new Transformer or Transpony life, & giving the wielder the strength to ‘Light Our Darkest Hour’ when such situations reach their critical state of crisis.

-Prime Guard: Two ways of using this move to protect one’s self or small comrades since the large width, length & height can cover a large crowd. One: Popping the wings off his shoulders to transform into his PONY MODE, & then grabs them to place them in front to act like a shield protection against multitude of enemy explosive firepower. Two: Expanding the wing-bands around the wrist in ROBOT MODE as an act like strong blast proof shields. They can even spread above to keep heavy falling objects from harming those around the giant size bot.

-Prime Rush: A Rush Attack Type Move. When reaching max speed in a vehicle type mode & then transforming into ROBOT MODE to perform a melee attack capable of breaking even tough metal platting or energize shields to breach & critically injury the enemy. When having reach such max speed, the body will admit a golden glow just before landing a hit.

-Tank Charge: A Charge Rush Attack Type Move. When in TANK MODE, one becomes like an invincible super-heavy tank even super endurance & defenses. And by having charged up move energy can become a golden glowing form to charge faster then a racing car’s top speed to deliver a colossal size implosive impact on the target. If having gathered enough, one can perform this move up to double, to triple, to quadruple times while having delivered even more massive damage.

-Energon Disruption: A Type Of Ultimate Attack Move: When having a full gauge of energy, this move can do heavy damage to multiple foes. For Optimus Primal II, he’ll focus a collected amount of energy into his right fist, & punch it into the ground. Thereby unleashing a powerful energy surge burst of a center sphere with energy bolt waves striking all enemy targets in the area.

-Prime Jets - Maximum Burn: When in FLIGHT MODE, this motion will grant one the fastest amount of speed to be shooting off faster then a Jet-plane. This speed motion of flight travel will more then double to triple the travel time it usually takes to reach a destination.

-Prime Guns - Fire: When in FLIGHT MODE, the top guns fire off energy sphere rapid shots to make multiple impacts on the target(s) that leave explosive results on what they hit. But when more fully charged, can create a more powerful explosive force to destroy an area or large number targets.

-Prime Missiles - Fire: When in TANK MODE, the top guns fire off super-charged missiles to the target(s) locked-on which results in even bigger explosions to leave craters & decimate structures.

-Prime Torpedoes - Fire: Even when in FLIGHT MODE, one can pilot through ocean waters & even fire off water missile torpedoes to cause a seismic explosion battles in the water on targets.

-Fist Of Primus: When in ROBOT MODE, charging a force of Energon around the fist area will grant one the power to smash through any defenses & deliver on some occasions; Instant KO!

-The Matrix Cure: Applying from the Matrix Of Leadership, grants the wielder a special ability to help cure & heal those that are under an influence; such as becoming feral or been corrupted by Dark Energon. From a calm light-blue energy from the Spark to go straight towards the hand, a PURE form of ENERGON will travel to help cure the victim of what has taken hold of them. Noted Fact: Think of Cheetor from Beast Wars when he obtain his Transmittal 2 form, & Optimus Primal helped to cure & heal the feral effects.

-Wisdom Of The Ages: A unique ability applied from the Matrix Of Leadership, allows the wielder to seek the wisdom of pass Primes. This ability is what can help mold the wielder into a leader to lead others into battle & provide salvation against things unknown to them.

-Spark Of Life: A unique ability from which having a direct course with the Matrix Of Leadership, allows one the chance to use the power of….the All Spark. With such an ability, one can channel it’s force into any mechanical subject, giving it new life by creating that which would become Transformers or a Transpony from the Energon Radiation to become ‘living’ machines. It’s an ability only ever used so often to help be the course in helping to give a new Spark of life, to continue the Transpony race to exist. This technique is an ability to help in the course of continuing life, & falls around those to help guide the new life…on the right path as much as they can.

-Spark Current: The Maximal Commander gathers up a force into his hands, then wields it upwards. Then he throws his charges fists outward before shouting his attack. Which then he releases a powerful discharge which hits not just the focus target, but other enemy targets nearby. A lot of surge voltage will happen around those that took the attack. NOTED FACT: This move was first seen in Beast Machines when Megatron had Optimal Optimus’ body.

-Energon Storm: A Focus Type Move. Unveiling the top chest hidden guns to prepare an attack, by gathering energy into themselves in the form of red energy force. When unleashed, the attack will be a charge red beam fired from the gun-sets. This is considered Optimus’ Strongest Move, the blast will swallow enemies whole & destroy a large section of the area before finally exploding into a cloud of smoke. NOTED: This move is base on the move Optimus Prime used in Transformers Energon TV Series.

-Energon Storm - MAXIMUM FIRE: An Enhanced Focus Type Move Version Of Energon Storm. A sudden force of the body exhibiting large amounts of red energy gathering around the focus of the chest-point guns. Was fully ready after a mighty battle cry roar, a giant size red beam will shot forth. The blast is even more massively greater & the destructive force on impact can decimate an entire city-wide zone area. This technique is so powerful that the body exhibits steam from such overheating force.

-Light Our Darkest Hour: The Final Ultimate Move given by the Matrix to it’s new wielder of the element. By opening the compartment to show the Spark that holds the specially made version of an ancient relic, will grant the wielder a powerful force to perform anything they seek (a wish from their version soul to be brought forth).

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WEAPONS:

Star Saber: A strangely forge sword of advance cybernetics & metal alloy, made to appear like an ‘x’ style straighten shape with a gold metal frame around the base connected to a gray-silver handle. This is a sword unlike any other weapon. It can unleash a bright light-blue energy aura around the metal blade, empowering it’s force against the mightiest of foes; such power can even SLICE mountain in two. Even to unleash a Sword Beam strike ten times it’s width, height & length, could finish off a large size army & even bring down a mighty warship. It’s very power is a massive force of Energon in it’s purest form, capable of unleashing beams & lightning forces. Note: Think of the Star Saber seen in Transformers Prime TV Series.

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Background Bio: Nearly 2000 years ago within Equestrian Prime’s very universe, an unknown ship crashed onto the planet’s surface. In a location far to the South, it crashed into a volcano to remain buried while those aboard had gone into a Deep Stasis-Lock to preserve their life until they would receive repair treatment; for they were actually aliens called: Transformers. And within their cargo was a mountain load of Energon Crystals to power up an entire army of Transformers. But when the ship crashed, the contents of such crystals were scatter through a hole, including a collection of Seeds use to turn an organic planet into a metal frame of Transformium. But the land it’s self was a place where magic existed, when the Energon Crystals & the Seeds fell into the points of lava, it caused a Volcanic Chain-Reaction of dormant streams of lava all around to effect the entire land. The energy flow of Energon that exploded with the mixture of the Seed created a strange chemical force, to slowly morph the land that was only a canny size place, into a new metallic surface of metal. In another sight, the land began to pulse with energy, causing the Transformium to spread out to change more parts of organic to metal. But when centering around the volcano, it’s route lead inside in sensing…familiar forms of Transformium, namely of Transformers born from it. When it came in contact with the ship’s Transformers, it absorbed data of about how beings of metal structure, use Energon for a power source, plus…became created from Transformium. This caused a strange phenomenon in where the attached pixel forms of Transformium remain, but also effected the lava of the volcano to produce a liquid substance of what would be an Energon Pool, & depending on how special the Transformer was, while others became routed across the land in developing Energon Crystals, only within the volcano did it create two hidden lava pools: a pure source of energy so clean, yet so powerful, it became referred to as Super Energon while the later, was tainted with a familiar dark sense, craving for power that corrupts others, this dangerous subject became known as Dark Energon to which unfortunately, had secret routes out to help create Dark Energon Crystals. But then afterwards, something else was absorb into the land by the Transformium, the skeleton fractures of many decease animals, & even a species that seem to thrive most of intellect, they were Ponies: Unicorns, Pegasus, & lastly Earth Ponies & even on the rarest motions, the fallen remains of Alicorns. The Transformium that was alive with the land felt a tingle from the Transformers that were connected; before allowing samples of Transformium to replicate the DNA of other living creatures, & soon allowed them to undertake the energy of the many Energy Pools, & soon coming out from them, became what was the first…Transpony Species. A creature of metal, but inside was a special core to act like the heart & soul that was also from the Transformers: A Spark.

Development Bio: With the creation of Transponies, came the dawn of where Equestria Prime had without ever knowing it, it’s first born species of those that were not organic & fleshly creatures, but a species of intelligence. Knowing their land was made from Transformium, the Transponies used much of their scientific minds to help create technology, which allowed them to slowly collect samples & help to form their first ever village. Over the years, they have grown more & more to become a future evolved breed & spread forth in making colonies, & to even create a central future tech-dome with cybernetic city skylines on top of the dome, as it was placed on top of a far off mountain 1000s of miles away from where the original Transpony species came to existence. The citizens were all pony model robots, the future evolve form of all living ponies, plus they come with a transforming capability to appear almost like humanoids; this function is known as a Robot Form. But from only a few out of the civilians, can perform a special design feature of appearing with Animal base designs, thus giving them something called; A Beast Mode. With the Beast Mode addition, grants the Robot Modes a near-similar theme. Those with a Beast Mode to go with their Robot Modes, are often said to be more powerful, the stronger the beast, the stronger the Transpony, even with advance weaponry. Sadly, such means of peace did not last, for from those that seem against peace, were born from the small leaked samples of Dark Energon, allowing them with a new function the peaceful Transponies never knew about; the existence of evil. Those that plan to conquer Axelon City along with the rest of the land, & then the planet, were an evil breed of predators, hence label as Predacons. To combat this force, those of a mighty maximum amount of courage to stand for what’s right, this group became known as the Maximals. And soon the Beast Wars was born, & has been going on for years, neither side getting an advantage over the other while the land known as: The Metal Lands, became an Off-Limits to the living inhabitants of Equestria, & so the two sides of living-machines & living organics never came to known of what was right before them…

Until the day, something from the outside corners of the Metal Lands, reach out to the Predacons, thus did a change of power cause even the Maximals, to send out to seek help of their own.

Current Bio: The Beast Wars soon gain some new players, Ender of the Grimmore Army’s Elite Warlord & Twilight’s group of the Mane Six & those from the Rainbow Kingdom. It all happen so fast, that during a plot, under a false sense of truce, did Optimus plan to destroy something called: the Oblivion Ring that was gonna destroy their world in a Transwarp Explosion with a Stasis Pod. But sabotage by Megatron’s side, he was destroyed, & the destruction caused a Quantum Surge to occur, & mutated the Maximals & Predacons into Transmetals. But thanks to Rhinox’s effort, using a blank Protoform, he found Optimus’ drifting Spark through Space & Time, & he was brought back as a Transmetal. But the battle for the good guys was far from over, when they undiscovered that within the Sacred Mountain, was the Transformers out of their timeline needed to start the Great War: the Autobots & Decepticons. From Megatron’s goal, he was going to destroy Optimus Prime, causing a Time Storm to effect the Maximals & the Equestrian Gang since if the Transformers they have yet to encounter perish in their world, then history will be alter to change with drastic consequences of…ceasing to exist. Taking drastic measure, Optimus Primal took the Spark of his Ancestor into his own body, but was knock into a pool of Super Energon which a few Seeds fell in the mix, & was slowly effecting his body, & would not have survive such pain tolerance…if not for a pony named Harmony using her power of Balance to keep Optimus alive to become…Optimal Optimus. Not to mention, the combination of what took place even made him become an Element Wielder to a new element: Robotics. Even with the return of Prime’s Spark after fixing the Autobot Leader’s body, the Maximals & the Mane Six Gang had to protect the Ark, & went through some troubling occurrences. But soon the final battle came down against Optimal Optimus & Megatron when they became titans, & from using the forces of the Matrix & the Dark Spark, caused a dimensional rift to open, sucking the Ark & returning the Autobots & Decepticons from whence they came. But even if one war was settle & Optimus wishes to bring balance of Technorganics across the Metal Lands, the Maximal Commander knows their enemy will not stop until all of  Equestria is under their control, & so Optimus offered to aid the ponies in the future…should they ever need him or the Maximals.


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Hope many of you enjoyed this, this is a drawn form of Optimal Optimus, but he really looks like Primal Prime, but in a new Up-Beat motion of looking AWESOME! Till then, there maybe some future updates, so till then, hope to see some positive comments & nice reviews for those that are big heart Transformer/Beast Wars fans. So until then, check this out in my story; MLP: Beast Wars, enjoy…

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Comments: 8

DCDGojira71 [2021-11-26 17:21:28 +0000 UTC]

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Greenrob [2016-08-26 19:58:11 +0000 UTC]

really great job with the two pictures also letting you know you might of seen me and Nigel Chatted about matters am I am waiting for his consulting but I might plan to keep my ocs the way they are but only when I hear what he has to say and I will think about what he said and such wish me Luck and hope that things go well with me

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VISIONARYLEO In reply to Greenrob [2016-08-26 22:03:26 +0000 UTC]

Alright...

And glad you enjoyed what you see here.

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Greenrob In reply to VISIONARYLEO [2016-08-26 22:49:49 +0000 UTC]

ok

and indeed I have

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WOLFBLADE111 [2016-08-25 12:18:18 +0000 UTC]

Awesome.

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FeatherWings78 [2016-08-23 23:47:25 +0000 UTC]

Nice

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VISIONARYLEO In reply to FeatherWings78 [2016-08-24 00:10:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you...

Now if you've seen the Sketch Version, then you'll know what will be next to be posted. Till then, look forward to it.

Chow for now...

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FeatherWings78 In reply to VISIONARYLEO [2016-08-24 00:15:52 +0000 UTC]

Alright

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