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Description R E A D !!!!!!!!!

was inspired by 's ref. sheets
Yes, I decided to make new Reference Sheet.
16-years Reference sheet.

My Birthday is soon! 25 December!

I'm really tired of stupid comments about Yuki's story, that's why I wrote her short story here.
And, yes, stop calling her Mary Sue. two or three people said, that she is Mary Sueish.
I'm tired of that.
I have many reasons to give her such skills. I wanted her to be like me, as talanted as me.
I mean,drawing -it's only ONE of my hobbies, I also play piano for 9 years, singing, write songs,poems, dancing, studying in art school, I've got a white Wushu "belt" ( east single combat), etc.
Yes.If people in real life can do ma-a-a-any things, why OCs can't do many things too?
Then, you will call talanted people in real life Mary Sues too?
I'm trying not to go beyond the mark, not to be stronger or cooler that official Naruto characters.
In the same way, I'm trying to add to my OC something special...
It's not so easy. Be tolerant, please.
I think, I'll change her suit soon. I will make it easier. It's very difficult to draw many details every time.

Yuki's story isn't over yet. She didn't know about a bijuu inside her, she can't use Samukiri's power.
She knows nothing about her parrents.
she can use suiton and futon ( clan chakra types), cross them and make snow.
she knows about Samuigan but can't control it normally.
her sword skills are just amazing. but when she was training with Gaara,there was no sword. She used to fight with the help of her scythe. Adding chakra to skythe, she makes it more lighter and comfortable.

She was registered like Konoha ninja, she lived in Konoha for many years, that's why she wears Konoha head protector.
Still, I can't draw her Bijuu Samukiri xD
I'll do it later.


Waiting for your comments.
Love you all

ART AND CHARACTER (c)

DO NOT COPY
DO NOT STEAL
DO NOT RECOLOR
or I'll kill you.
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Comments: 53

Shaniqualafondalafay [2010-07-25 07:33:54 +0000 UTC]

What am I suppose to say? I don't even...This is shit, and you fail.

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VITATH In reply to Shaniqualafondalafay [2010-08-05 19:49:47 +0000 UTC]

get away, dear.

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kh34ever [2010-06-15 01:39:50 +0000 UTC]

She's awesome :+favelove:

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3animefancat3 [2010-04-08 14:51:43 +0000 UTC]

Aaawww, she is just the most adorable Sue I've ever seen! But it makes me antsy about posting my manga... people could think, even after having it since 2003, that I'm copying you, ya know? Ah, well, there's always Fakku.

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usergirl101 [2010-03-09 22:26:54 +0000 UTC]

Clan markings remind me a little of the Earth symbol from Stargate.

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WaterdragonTonx94 [2010-03-06 14:37:51 +0000 UTC]

she is dood char but you culd work in proportions

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KarameruYukika [2010-02-21 04:15:21 +0000 UTC]

Oh man, when I was younger ( and still now ) I was/am obsessed with ice, snow, and water elements. When playing our fairy game as a child, I was always someone with the ability to use ice, snow, and water, and I was always obsessed with the colors blue, black, silver, gray, and white <3 And everyone here HATES the snow, but I love it. It is so pretty that is why my best friend named me Yukika (I go by Yuki), and it stuck on me. So, your Yuki just makes my eye twitch, because it's all the things I loved crammed into a naruto OC

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ArinaFoxy [2010-01-03 12:13:05 +0000 UTC]

Klass! Mne ochen nravitsya ee stil!

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Kaschra [2009-12-22 02:52:58 +0000 UTC]

Well drawn, but... she's a mary sue, that's fr sure.

And 32 kg?! OMG, THIS is really bad...

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VITATH In reply to Kaschra [2009-12-22 09:13:14 +0000 UTC]

oh MY GOD.
about her weight -read previous comments.

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Osato-kun [2009-12-20 08:05:59 +0000 UTC]

слушай,а 32 кг это не маловато? Оо

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VITATH In reply to Osato-kun [2009-12-23 11:35:21 +0000 UTC]

ну хД
учитывая ,что у меня рост в реальной жизни 176 см, а вешу я 45 - не маловато хД
в самый раз =3

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Nightwitch-Kitten [2009-12-17 00:58:31 +0000 UTC]

She's very well drawn but a total Mary-Sue

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Effect1304 [2009-12-13 18:09:10 +0000 UTC]

виииии ><
Аня дождалась *О*
Рефка Юки!!!!!
еее, как мне нравится она в е новом костюме *О*
хотя и старый был ничего *О*
она шикарно *О*
и родинка **
кстати у нее пейринг до сих пор Гаара?

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XxYumiHimexX [2009-12-13 13:14:53 +0000 UTC]

This awesome Love the outfit ^^
She is such a cute chara x3

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mia1206 [2009-12-13 13:07:21 +0000 UTC]

She is really beautiful I like her clothe desing And don't worry some people are just jelaous on you so that's why they call her Mary Sue. I like her very much the color on her clothe is gorgeous (the blue one) Matches with the other ones really great I like girls with lots of powers and OMG! You have sooo many hobbies I'd die if I had so many xD

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Axumi [2009-12-12 00:38:28 +0000 UTC]

Kawwaii..!!

Me gusto su tarje
;D
Muy Original...

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Alicia-is-Purple [2009-12-03 17:34:08 +0000 UTC]

Less godmoddy, which is a plus, and there's indeed no harm in being talented. However, no one can do everything under the sun. Also, as others have said before me, her body proportions are all wrong, she doesn't have enough flaws, and having a bijuu has been done to death about ten million Mary Sues ago.

Still she is mainly a Romance Sue rather than a God Mode Sue. Gaara. Would. Not. Go. For. Her. If Gaara falls in love, it'll be with a girl who's warm, tender, motherly, and teaches him how to love. Not with a cool, collected badass. Also, the way they meet is WAY out of character--he would not randomly decide to train some random girl he never met.

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VITATH In reply to Alicia-is-Purple [2009-12-18 14:50:52 +0000 UTC]

My real body proportions is wrong either.
height: 176
weight: 45.

I SAID, I did her like me. without any differences.

and, I don't agree with you.
Every girl, which falls in love with somebody, IS tender, warm and motherly with BELOVED person.
because love Is LOVE.
I don't wanna be cool, I've created my character and try to show that she was wounded by life, and the bijuu inside her -it's a big defect for her, like she's damned. I like idea with demons only from that side.
I'm crazy with Idea that Yuki was lonely and cold all her life, but when she met Gaara, everything has changed.
Yeah, such a masochism, but, love it.

I need to apologize for my english.

and, really tired of negative comments, lol.

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Effect1304 In reply to VITATH [2009-12-28 00:41:18 +0000 UTC]

я считаю что такими пропорциями ты очень красивая, иногда это смотрится очень красиво

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Alicia-is-Purple In reply to VITATH [2009-12-18 18:45:00 +0000 UTC]

I can excuse your English. And I totally understand where you're coming from, and glad to see you're not pretentious. That's a lot of Sueness points docked off--with a lot of Sues their creators will be pretentious. It makes more sense with the elaboration. Nonetheless, there are more original ways to show what you want to show--everybody and their grandmother has a bijuu.

So what you're saying is, she's pretty much like Gaara. Only catch there is that exactly alike doesn't necessarily mean compatible--the whole seme-uke concept, yin-yang, balance, follower and leader. For instance, I wouldn't go well with someone who was exactly like me in every way because I'm not very social. Because I don't have much social skill or leadership, I look for leader-types--someone who could show me the way through life. Likewise, a leader-type who married another leader-type would clash with them more often than agree with them.

Also, self-insertion can be done correctly but is rather looked down on. Believe me, I know--my name's proof enough of that. As for the body proportions... a ninja or any warrior wouldn't be that small... trained fighters are always heavier than ordinary people because they fight so much. Also, those proportions couldn't support a chest that size.

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VITATH In reply to Alicia-is-Purple [2009-12-19 10:06:39 +0000 UTC]

I didn't say that she's like him in all ways.
I just said that she had no love in her past, like him, that's why she was suffering.
Yuki can be leader in group, but she will NEVER be a leader in love interrelationships. I'm such, I will be subordinate in it. I want to be controlled by beloved person.

yes, one of clans used to be a keeper of this bijuu. but I said - Yuki doesn't use this power.
keeper should protect other people from Samikiri's power, I suppose.

Okay. Just imagine.
Gaara. calm, powerful. but inside... he needs to be loved.
Resqued a strange girl. cold and icy inside.she can protect herself in other sutiations, but with him, in his hands... she can't do it anymore. she becomes more and more tender. like tender white snow. ( her name). she loves him , needs to be protected by him, needs him. and no one else.
still isn't compatible, ehm? )

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Alicia-is-Purple In reply to VITATH [2009-12-23 08:48:56 +0000 UTC]

Makes a lot more sense now...

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freethegoats [2009-11-30 16:57:39 +0000 UTC]

Sigh, your art is amazing, but she's SUCH a mary-sue!
And weighting 32 kg she should look like a stick figure.

And I don't buy it. Nobody's that perfect. People can have many talents but they can't excel at everything. You should give her some flaws to make her more believable.

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Iwachanmaya In reply to freethegoats [2009-12-12 17:43:00 +0000 UTC]

my mistake
You know .........my friend
and she is 163 cm tall and she has about 39 kg but yet she doesn't look like a stick figure......I didnt look at the message when I sent it to you and my English is bad

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freethegoats In reply to Iwachanmaya [2009-12-12 18:32:29 +0000 UTC]

It means she's underweight (go and count the BMI - body mass index.) The normal weight for a healthy, 163cm tall person is between 49 - 66,5 kg. I'm afraid 39 is still too little. And 32 is ridiculous. It's extreme undernourishment.

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Iwachanmaya In reply to freethegoats [2009-12-13 05:45:36 +0000 UTC]

........well I allways thought that she was skiny XD lol well wuess chur rite about that :S

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Iwachanmaya In reply to freethegoats [2009-12-12 17:41:43 +0000 UTC]

You know .........my friend 163 cm tall and I have 39 kg but yet she doesn't look like a stick figure

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LizaTheHedgehog [2009-11-29 11:40:40 +0000 UTC]

круть!у тя очень классній перс!

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Tomoko-Tottori [2009-11-28 12:29:40 +0000 UTC]

yuki looks very pretty here and you've drawn her so well! ;W;
I like her design and the interesting information you gave her ^^ well done!

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asuka001 [2009-11-28 00:43:53 +0000 UTC]

Krasavitsa. _

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ota-chan [2009-11-27 19:13:47 +0000 UTC]

Amazing outfit

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mintwinter [2009-11-26 11:56:37 +0000 UTC]

Vito!!!! eto potryasno!!!
DA!!!! Ya znal chto tebe ponravitsya style of my refsheets!!!

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Loup-De-Chocolat [2009-11-26 03:30:51 +0000 UTC]

Really, I don't mean for this to sound like I'm flaming you but... after studying in an honors anatomy class... it's not physically possible for her to have those breasts and still be alive at 70 pounds and 5'4"

How's she still breathin'?

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Kobayashi-dono In reply to Loup-De-Chocolat [2009-11-26 09:03:44 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad that I am not the only one who noticed it

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Mariette-Tonzou [2009-11-25 21:15:13 +0000 UTC]

Yuki means snow, doesn't it? Or happiness! it's such a cute name!

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Bleeeker [2009-11-25 17:43:23 +0000 UTC]

aw the story was cute :3
her and gaara

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Tehna [2009-11-25 15:26:45 +0000 UTC]

*____* ваууу вы потрясны =З

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Altainia [2009-11-25 14:29:44 +0000 UTC]

This is really cool! And Happy early birthday if I forget to tell you on X-mas ^^.

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WhiteGamma [2009-11-25 13:07:58 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! Her new outfit is really cool and has so much detail it must take a lot of time drawing it But the colors are really great! I love the blue and the way you did the metal, it looks so shiny!

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Flaffychu [2009-11-25 12:28:02 +0000 UTC]

снег?оо круто *_*

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Kobayashi-dono [2009-11-25 10:01:24 +0000 UTC]

Well,there's one big mistake that you have to correct...
She can't be 163 tall and be ONLY 32kg heavy...that's too strange.Plus if she's ninja she has for sure some muscles and muscles are havier than fat and for this height 32kg is way too anorexic like.

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BluedragonINK [2009-11-25 03:56:13 +0000 UTC]

damn when did she get so cute.. I would like challenge her in a demonstration dual

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RachelUchiha [2009-11-25 00:51:38 +0000 UTC]

is really awesome

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Caledonianrevelation [2009-11-24 20:04:52 +0000 UTC]

Щитаю,над пропорциями работать необходимо. Как и надо симметрией. Да и вобще...попробуй сделать стиль поинтереснее. а то он у тебя за несколько лет не спрогрессил ни разу, что нехорошо. Скорее всего.

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VITATH In reply to Caledonianrevelation [2009-11-24 21:29:15 +0000 UTC]

на компе мышью он не спрогрессит никогда. или я прежде убьюсь, чем он спрогрессит хД
аниме у меня застряло на этом уровне и дальше не двигается. и чилавеки тоже.
а вот с рисованием остального благодаря художке дела обстоят получше =3
как в аське буду -покажу.
спасибо, да ))

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Caledonianrevelation In reply to VITATH [2009-11-24 21:42:43 +0000 UTC]

Не,ну почему же? Можно делать пэнсил скетч а потом просто супераккуратно обводить?
Ходишь да?
давай+)

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Iwachanmaya [2009-11-24 19:44:32 +0000 UTC]

btw I just read the comments .........that is tottaly true,I myself allsow wanted to make an OC that is like me*btw we do common things XD*My main things in life are music and drawing ...so that's why my OC is from Sound*and Orochimari XD*....I support ur thinking

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Cee--Dee [2009-11-24 19:42:30 +0000 UTC]

She looks awesome!

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Hanerz [2009-11-24 19:38:11 +0000 UTC]

~awesome!D:
love this sheet

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