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VolatileFortune — Introducing: DeAg
Published: 2012-04-01 16:43:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 855; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 7
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introducing a small story-project I dug up and thought might be worth working on.. working title is "Devil's Agent" (DeAg for short).this story is already quite completed, the events are planned out etc etc and it's short enough to be a oneshot.
this is not an april fools, btw >->
basically, this story is about a guy who makes a deal with the devil, but with a twist: he wishes for his soul to be redeemed and brought to heaven once he dies, and offers his mortal life on earth as an exchange, rather than wishing for something now and losing his soul later.
the devil is intrigued and accepts the offer..
the guy is somewhat cocky and believes he had tricked the devil.. what are a couple of human years compared to an eternity in heaven, right? but.. of course.. he had underestimated the king of hell's cunning.
because.. by giving him his mortal life, he basically gave him permission to do with him whatever he wants until he dies... (including sending him on pointless missions and having him fight agents of heaven) and he soon discovers that he has been made..immortal.
So, yeah.. now he is stuck at being a devil's agent, equipped with special powers and the most ridiculous weapons his 'boss' can think of, even given a 'cute' companion (which is actually a (revived) deceased pet of his).. a life he might have actually enjoyed if it wasn't for his hatred towards his 'boss' and greatest desire being to finally be, well, released.
So right now he is just pissed and hopes that one of the angels he has to fight eventually finds a way to kill him.
might draw more of this or not =|
we'll see.
comments and opinions much appreciated, as always ^^
story, character concepts etc etc etc (c) me =|
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Comments: 49
Omg, that wonderful little creature, I want one ; A;
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plus I would like to see more of this stunning characters of yours including that cute little creature, it will fit well with My evil pink bunny~ XD
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hehe, glad you like it x3
I'm sorry, art trades aren't currently open.. 8( there is so much work for me to do right now.. x-x
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darn Q~Q wenever u do u think we could?
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love it~ interesting concept and good characters.....(why didn't you have this guy earlier T.T? lol)
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thank you! ^^
this story will have a very limited cast x3
no 85739573 characters with their own backstories and characters of their backstories and so on Dx like in some of my other stories xD
(and aww.. but I have him now, right? xD)
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oh i do that too lol. i tried cutting down when i started ToaHL but i just had to complicate it >.> I wish you luck if it's a habit.
(yeah...but...hey, do you accept fanart before the story is written?) just askin'
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yah, it's hard.. so many character ideas keep popping up, but I have them on a harsh limit x3
less than 10 name-worthy characters! if I go above that I'll have to merge characters or cut people out.
and yeah, sure!
I'm always overjoyed over fanart x3
I don't know if I'll write this story out at any point soon anyway, I'm rather planning on practising graphic novel styles on it, revealing the story bits bit by bit or something..
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that is a good idea (i just keep mine in a backlog and put them in one-shot spinoffs lol) I should try that sometime.
cool. cause i'm liking him and just feel the need to draw him with that cute little bugger that is his pet :3
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haha yeah, some of my old characters have enough backstory to get their own mini-series Dx
and while I like that, it doesn't quite work if you ever want to get done with anything xD
and yay!
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i know XD i also blame my procrastination...but extreme backstory...that is the one that gets you...especially when they're interesting.
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but when are they ever not interesting? and that is what makes it the hardest...
on another note, how ya been?
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haha, true.. x3
I actually spent some time thinking about a boring backstory..
"mr Hampenshire liked standing at the water cooler in his office. He had always enjoyed listening to the soft sounds- even as a child he marveled at the gently moving water. His father had designed and built water coolers, and [...]" okay this is ridiculous.
I'm alright ^^ started college just this week (not actual 'college', but a private school.. we don't have colleges here, but I use the word as it is quite similar). you?
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oh god, i think i'd die if i had to come up with something that boring...even my librarian has something interesting to him...
meh, i'm good. almost finished with me junior year in high school. getting my HTML and IC3 certification at the end of the year, so it's all tests pretty much from here out... but wow, private school? fancy~ what are you taking?
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xD aww...
but yes, I can barely hold myself from stuffing characters with 87294728937 cool/interesting stuffs x-x
and that sounds good^^ good luck on your tests 8)
it's an art school.. I'll be learning about design (meh) some minor programming (yay!) illustration (YAY!) and animation (yaay!!) x3
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and that's why it's so fun X3
thanks~ woo! sound fun, but i don't think i could have the patience for that. (or i'd end up flunking out) I wish you the best of luck! I'll just stick with javascript and flash lol. it sounds like you're going to be pretty busy soon.
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you're welcome and thanks as well =3
I'll see if I upload any of my stuff I'll be making here too..
well, they'll probably end up on my tumblr..
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what is tumblr? i never actually got one...
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it's a blog.
it's not very complicated and easy to get used to ^^
[link] here's mine for example ^^
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ooooooooohhhhhhh..... I get it now. i think i'll make one (i guess?)
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cool ^^
you should x3 it's free and... doesn't hurt having one~
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it's not letting me sign up >.< but i'm working on it...
*and since now i have everything (literally) there is no limit to contacting me MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA i feel evil*
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hahahahaha x3
good luck with that ^^
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oh yay...thanks. it's getting to be a pain in the ass. i'll just do it later.
oh, have you ever rick-rolled an entire building of people?
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I rickrolled a lot of people but.. no, not an entire building xD
I'm sure there's a story behind that question..?
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yes, yesterday we have this news thing the entire building watches in the morning right? well, my friend helps do it, and we decided that a good late april fools joke was to rickroll everybody in the building. and we did. and we got praised for our creativity and sense of humor lol. then we had to do the next week's program by ourselves lol. fun times. i felt i had to share.
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haha that's quite epic xD
kudos to you guys!
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i recommend you try it. it's fun. or a flashmob in the lunchroom. did that too once earlier in the year. just get a bunch of friends and boom, fun times. but we got in trouble for that one, so make it epic lol
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hahaha xD that sounds like fun x3
I doubt I have the resources to do something like that.. 8(
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just get a bunch of people together, make up an easy dance you can all remember, and do it! you could make it all professional and junk, but i think the point is to have fun doing it. it doesn't cost anything really. also, the bigger group of dancers, the less people that look at you like you're crazy. lol
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oooooh so cool! Definitely intriguing and I think you should write more! And omg. That cat-creature thing is SO. CUTE.
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glad you're interested 8D
and really?
I have so much to say about this, so many details, but I'm always scared that noone reads it if it gets any longer xD
I always try to come up with stuff I haven't seen like this before... so sometimes it gets a bit..complex. or complicated x-x
and haha thanks!
I have a knack for cute/creepy things and I'm glad that this 'mascot' seems to be recieved well x3
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I want a plushie. That's about my main reponse xD It'd be cool even just to read a novel on this, not just a comic. So yeah, definitely go for it!
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yay! 83
and thanks 8D
it's encouragement like that that gives me real motivation x3
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I saw more fluffy monster things in my notifications xD I LOVE IT!!! I love it, and I wants a stuffffffyyyy.....
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aww yayyy hehehe x3
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OHMYGOD THAT CAT CREATURE IS ADRABLE I WANT ONE DB!!!!!!!
i lubbs him cB
"no you creepy shit" aww that is cruel LOL
i forgot wha you said his name was 8C
but mr angry pants is HAWT LOL
and those gun/blades LOL
BULLETS BWAAHAAAAAA you are lacking 'em
eeee i hope you draw more xD
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hahahaha xD
the devil revived his dead pet and..made it "cuter".
which is why he hates it xD "you're not mr. Fluffles D8<" (no that's not the actual name xD)
his bullet rounds float around like holograms 8D totally useless!! and also.. laser blades for the win lol. LAZORS ARE KEWL RITE?
his name in progress was 'Justin', but that really is just for taking notes without having to call him 'guy' xD
hehe glad you like him and his..not-companion. he locks it up in a closet so that he is left alone.
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Heheh he is the cutest thing everr x3
floating holographic bullets... Who even invents that LOL
LASERSSSS PEW PEW PEW lasers make everthing cooler no matter what it is
and old granny????? No
BUT A LASER GRANNY?!?!?!
wait what where am i going with this...
and LOL AWW THATS CRUEL XD
mr angry pants is a meaner xD
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hahahaha x3 I DO like him.. but I didn't expect him to be that well-recieved at all x3
which is pretty epic, I think 83
and I don't know.. the devil saw it on a cheap anime?
and...exactly. point proven xD
like..SCIENCE.
and hahaha, well, he really doesn't want any of the things that are given to him.. all the fancy schmancy powers and weapons.. he could even have an awesome female demon partner if he wanted to, but he doesn't xD he really doesn't xD
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Hheeee xD
LOL
Or eBay lmao
ikr, science maes things cooler as well
esecially if its laser science!!!!
omg xD
ahah what if the devil MADE him have a demon parter o3o
and she hit on him 24/7 LOL
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hehe well he would eventually try to buy him over by hooking him up with some sexy beast who is actually a succubbus, but Justin 'breaks up' with her as soon as he finds out who she's working for, incredibly angered by the fact that it has all been an act and now hates her with a burning passion (though she actually fell in love with him, aww.. and continues to pursue him agressively).
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Awwaahah
that is horribly amusing....of course not to justin though xD
Aww the poor lady demon xD
of course is she were to be a succubus she would find a way to have her fun.....
o3o....
wait...
/smacked for dirty thoughts\
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hahaha x3
don't worry, she'll eventually find someone for herself who returns her feelings x3
(which makes that like the fifth..? character I talked about so far? lets see.. we have justin, the devil, mr cat, that girl, that guy, another important girl and mr devil's right hand (the last two weren't mentioned so far) and another girl) and that's basically it for the characters.
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OHMYGOD THAT CAT CREATURE IS ADRABLE I WANT ONE DB!!!!!!!
i lubbs him cB
"no you creepy shit" aww that is cruel LOL
i forgot wha you said his name was 8C
but mr angry pants is HAWT LOL
and those gun/blades LOL
BULLETS BWAAHAAAAAA you are lacking 'em
eeee i hope you draw more xD
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