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Published: 2003-10-12 17:35:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 80; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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A tragic phone call:No, no, this is a lie.
You want to be with me, I know you do.
Dont give me your lies!!
I dont want to hear your lies!!
I love you.
I dont want to live without you.
Fine, I guess you just want me to die then?
Okay, when you call me back, I will never answer for you or for anyone.
I am going to hang up now, dont call me back.
Click.
Wandering around her basement looking for her weapon, she finds a gun.
Tears rolling down her cheeks, she knows what she is about to do.
Sitting with the gun pointed to her head, she looks up twards the sky.
The phone rings.
She jumped at the noise of the phone and her hand automatically clentched tight.
Now the phone is ringing non stop due to the fact that she isnt answering.
Now the blood is running down her face from the deep hole in her head.
She is still loved to this day.
She will always be loved and we all know that she didnt mean it.
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Comments: 20
Wow, that piece really got my attention. Great job on the writing...the imagery was really good and then the mood was a nice touch too 
- Deep Impact
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Thank you for the comment.
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And i thought my work is dark. This makes me think so many things that it blurs my mind. What can i say than im really sorry for your loss and that i really like this piece.
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Thanx for the comment, I really appreciate it.
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God, what a depressing piece. This visualises much more clearly your arguement than "Why?" I am sorry for your loss. I have not known someone who has committed suicide, and I bet it is very hard. One of my best friends had a friend who did, it was so strange, the morning it happened, I knew something bad had happened. Call it devine intervention... or whatever, but I felt so bad for the people who have to deal with the loss.
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Ya, it is really hard to deal with something like that. Expecially when she is the one who pierced my bellybutton, I have to live with that the rest of my life and it hurts.
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wow. sad, dude. sad. i love it. especially since i've heard the whole story a couple times (from you and jessy) this is powerful shit. intense!
i liked the part that was her talking on the phone to...Jason...i think thats his name....oh well not important.
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Ya, you have heard the story so you know what the hell I am talking about.
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i know how it feels, i had a couple of friends who killed themselves. You definitely wrote the right words on that poem
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Thanx for the comment. I wrote what I knew about what happened that day. It hurts to keep it inside, so I write about it.
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that's a good way to deal with it
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Next month she will be dead for 1 year, its kinda crazy to think about. Its also crazy to think that no matter how hard I try, I will never forget her name because she is the one who pierced my bellybutton and now I have to live with it the rest of my life.
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i don't think forgetting is a good thing, you must learn to accept it. and i'd be happy to have something permanent about a lost friend, like a piercing or a tattoo, as a reminder of the moments spent together
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Ya, I guess I do understand what you are saying, but it just hurts you know?
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yeah, i've been through it and i know it just terrible
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and what makes it worse, my sister is dating the guy in which my friend killed herself over
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damn, that would deinitely drive me insane
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ya, my sister and her were friends also, but she doesnt even care
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