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Published: 2003-09-24 01:14:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 72; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 39
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Why do you think that keeping me away from the joys of life is good for me?You dont even know who I am.
Just get over yourself.
You only make me depressed.
I know what you are doing,slowly killing me from the inside out.
You laugh as you stare at my lifeless body.
I am very much alive, but full of hate and unhappiness.
Only thinking of the day when I will die and be free from your evil chains in which you call disapline.
You hit me, bruise me, scar me, make me bleed.
What pleasure do you get from that?
Are you happy to see the hurtful tears pour from my eyes?
Do you like it when you hear my cries of pain??
Just tell me this, you sit and stare for amusment as I bleed on the floor which has become my permanent sanctuary, but what happens when I fight back and the floor becomes your unholy hell?
Who will be happy then?
Who will be free from pain and agony?
I will laugh when you beg me to forgive you.
All I will feel twards you more hatred than you will ever know.
So just keep this in mind, if you think I hate you know, just think about how much I hate I will have for you when you lie on the floor begging for forgiveness.
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Comments: 2
ALPSMAC [2003-10-12 23:11:31 +0000 UTC]
Intresting concept, but kinda vengefull don't-cha think? Why not just get rid of the guy? I generally like dark poetry, but you have to convince me that there is more drive for revenge back there... to make the hurt and the pain stand out. This, to me, comes off like Hamlet... I can see Hamlet's point of view, but I am convinced that he was insane. Rationalise your anger, and focus it into more effective invective. All of this, of course, is purely opinion... but it is how I read poetry. To me, if you are gonna go get wet in the darker sides of the mind, then you gotta go swimming there.
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Volcom-Chick In reply to ALPSMAC [2003-10-13 21:37:39 +0000 UTC]
Ya, I understand what you mean.
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