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Published: 2008-06-17 18:42:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 82; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description The sun stretches lazy rays
across the eastern sky,
lets out a pink-orange-purple yawn,
waits for us to follow it’s lead.
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Comments: 4

oranges101614 [2008-06-22 17:32:32 +0000 UTC]

The sentence fragments (if that's what they're called) are always a nice touch. It speaks for the sun! Telling us that we need to get off our butts.

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vonnyboo7 In reply to oranges101614 [2008-06-22 18:48:36 +0000 UTC]

yup yup!! Thanks!!

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Nimbafuu [2008-06-17 19:39:05 +0000 UTC]

I like it, it's very short and subtle, you notice it more if you read the one you uploaded before this, it's like you're pulling back to a whisper...

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vonnyboo7 In reply to Nimbafuu [2008-06-17 19:49:31 +0000 UTC]

thanks.

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