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Published: 2008-06-19 20:22:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 121; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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Description
Spider fingers grip theframe of nonexistent
windows where you have
planted your pleasure at home.
Wild, red-rimmed eyes search
for a crack where the evils of
your touch can ooze out of this
unwilling lot.
Latches undone, glass broken,
you climb into the forgotten vacancy
of my body, from which you've
been held back too long. You
solder your build to mine. I fear
that separation could leave fatal
damage.
My every sense is impregnated
with you. Musk and wildflowers
writh in my nose, but I can no
longer hold my breath against
you. Peppermint lies frozen on
your tongue. It pops and dances
on my taste buds. Your solid
contours seduce me to mush,
leaving me no strength to push
back. A beast is unleashed into the
hills of my curves that shoots stars
across my bewildered sight. My
name is repeated longingly from
your poisonous honey mouth.
Finally, your pleasure blossoms
into satisfaction; my weakness
drips pitifully off the petals. You
leave my nerves growling with
hunger. I try to shut them up
with food, clothes, movies, music,
but they burn for the presence
of you.
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Comments: 2
SO MUCH SENSORY WHATNOTTEDNESS! I like that. The detail is wonderful...
The only thing I can critique on really is that you add a little more rhythm to your words. Was this another poem where you had to have a certain number of syllables again? But I see you put some thought into some spots, like where you rhymed mush and push.
I like the last stanza a lot. Nice work.
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