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Published: 2012-02-20 03:03:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 255; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 1
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I see itIts calling me
Standing out in the snow
Its so dark and cold
But I see it
Calling ever calling
In trance I follow
I walk in wallow
Its so cold
I see it
Calling me
Its in a lake
Hand stretched out
I bend over and begin to shake
Just a bit closer
A bit closer
Closer still
I fall in
And I'm falling
Blackness smothers me
But I don't fight it
Falling
I'm freezing
I don't care
This pain is old
My body is always cold
Blackness smothers the light
All I see is eternal night
I hit something
And I stop falling
I see it
Death calling my name
I go to escape this hell I'm in
I go to die
Drowned alive
In the black lakes
Hate
Fear
Judgment
And Persecution
And so I die
Willingly drowned alive.
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Comments: 7
Ultima-Squirrel [2012-02-23 22:22:35 +0000 UTC]
Nice to see you're still writing, sir! How have you been?
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Vreddless In reply to Ultima-Squirrel [2012-02-29 23:14:39 +0000 UTC]
i have been great thank you for asking =3 your self?
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FlyingFishPeople [2012-02-20 07:01:02 +0000 UTC]
Wow. .o. Powerful.
I like the mental image this gives me, kinda like a dream.
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Vreddless In reply to FlyingFishPeople [2012-02-20 14:45:05 +0000 UTC]
thank you. and ya the mental image is what i was going for, another thank you for letting me know i did it right lol
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FlyingFishPeople In reply to Vreddless [2012-02-20 15:33:41 +0000 UTC]
Ahehe, you're welcome. :3
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