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Published: 2011-08-09 20:55:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 77; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Did you know
That I loved you
Did you know
That I tried
But you push
And you push
And you push
Till a person
Is at his end
He is about to snap
When he does
You push him more
Your miserable
And I pity you
I don't love you
I pity and fear you
Mother.
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Comments: 17

TheSugarRay [2011-08-10 05:26:53 +0000 UTC]

I use to hate my mom. Now I'm just very annoyed at her and live 3 states away.

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Vreddless In reply to TheSugarRay [2011-08-10 19:22:43 +0000 UTC]

o hey its you again =3 wondered when i would see you again! and o gosh that has to suck to live that close to her.

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TheSugarRay In reply to Vreddless [2011-08-10 20:43:28 +0000 UTC]

lol, she's actualy gotten better now that I quit seminary. It is puzzling.

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Vreddless In reply to TheSugarRay [2011-08-10 20:45:21 +0000 UTC]

hm so may i ask a question?

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TheSugarRay In reply to Vreddless [2011-08-10 21:00:34 +0000 UTC]

sup?

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Vreddless In reply to TheSugarRay [2011-08-10 21:24:15 +0000 UTC]

TheSugarRay i honestly dont get it lol

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TheSugarRay In reply to Vreddless [2011-08-10 21:38:58 +0000 UTC]

lol, Whats your goddamned question?

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Vreddless In reply to TheSugarRay [2011-08-10 22:26:31 +0000 UTC]

hahah that was how did you come up with TheSugarRay?

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TheSugarRay In reply to Vreddless [2011-08-10 22:56:15 +0000 UTC]

Let me tell you my friend, it was a girl. As the best stories. In second grade, there was this girl Ashley and she was an adorable tomboy. We were hanging out after school and she suggested I call myself sugarray like the boxer.
Years later, I worked at a cub scout camp. There we had to choose a nickname to have people call us. Up until then I was "CrazyRay" but someone had already taken that name. I remembered the girl from 2nd grade and chose sugarray.

The "the" comes from metal gear solid: snake eater, where all the bosses had a "the" as a part of their code names and I had used it for a few things calling myself "thepope" and silly names like that.

Where did you read TheSugarRay? I was trying to be professional and didn't make that my handle on DA.

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Vreddless In reply to TheSugarRay [2011-08-11 03:26:01 +0000 UTC]

o know that a sort o cool story =3. well it was under your name.

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TheSugarRay In reply to Vreddless [2011-08-11 04:12:01 +0000 UTC]

I can dig it

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TheSugarRay In reply to TheSugarRay [2011-08-10 22:02:57 +0000 UTC]

Is it worth all this effort? Out with it, man.

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TheSugarRay In reply to TheSugarRay [2011-08-10 21:14:21 +0000 UTC]

I'd be offended if you didn't ask a question.

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Ultima-Squirrel [2011-08-10 05:17:40 +0000 UTC]

Powerful! I think you could have more impact if you had "and you push" instead of just "and push". It falls in with the accusative tone. It starts and ends with more childlike wording, but the middle becomes quite harsh. I know it's mostly cathartic, but you've got some good stuff here.

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Vreddless In reply to Ultima-Squirrel [2011-08-10 19:21:16 +0000 UTC]

o thankyou i will make the changes

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SavvyPsycho [2011-08-09 21:39:33 +0000 UTC]

Aw, Trevor, I know how that feels. I hope you feel better, now that you've gotten all of your feelings down on paper!

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Vreddless In reply to SavvyPsycho [2011-08-10 03:55:12 +0000 UTC]

a little

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