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Description Name: Astrogeddon

Type: Dark/Psychic

Savior Pokemon

Height: 5' 02"

Weight: 136.8 lb

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Here is the legend:

Absols have always been shunned by the human race. They have always been labeled as disaster bringers, bad omens. However, they were always mistaken. Absols only predict natural disasters; they do not bring them. As such, the race of Absols seclude themselves deep within the mountains. They have accepted that they will always be hunted down if they show. However, one Absol wished that he could do something other than simply predicting disasters: he wanted to prevent them from happening at all.

The Absol in question always went down to the human towns near the mountains to warn the inhabitants of the town about the disasters that were going to happen. However, they never listened, and chased him out, thinking that he was going to bring the disaster upon them. Even thought he came to accept that he will always be chased out, he always came back depressed and disheartened, knowing that he could not help the inhabitants. Eventually, he stopped going to the town altogether. From that point onward, he only warned the pokémon in the area about what was to happen.

One night, that particular Absol overhead a conversation saying that the Millenium Comet was going to appear the next day. The Millenium Comet has the power to awaken the sleeping legend, Jirachi, who is known for being able to grant the wishes of whoever finds it. The Absol was flustered. Finally, he had a chance to get his wish granted, even if the chances were low. The next evening, he went to the top of the mountain he lived on and wished for his dream to prevent disasters to come true. He waited for hours, yet nothing had happened. Saddened, he went back down to his home, and waited until tomorrow to try again. Eventually, the week of the Millenium Comet has passed, and Absol’s wish had not been granted. The Absol was broken hearted. Knowing that his last chance at getting his wish had failed, he walked miserably home.

The next day, Absol went to the glacial lake in the mountain. He looked at his reflection in the water. The instant he was going to leave, he sensed that something was going to happen at the lake. He hurried back, and saw nothing wrong. He was confused. Never had an Absol’s prediction been wrong. He turned back to head home, but stopped dead in his tracks once he heard a voice ringing inside his mind.

Do not worry, young Absol. I am simply here to grant you your wish. The Absol instantly knew what it was talking about. He shuddered for a second, then turned around and went to the shore of the lake.

“Who are you? Reveal yourself to me!” He said, somewhat frightened about what was going to happen.

If that is what you wish… From the center of the lake, a ball of light came rising from the depths and appeared before him. In seconds, the ball of light faded and showed a figure with a star-shaped head. The Absol was stunned.

“J-Jirachi…”

With the last light of the orb gone, Jirachi nodded his head. Yes, young one. It is I, Jirachi. I have come here to grant you your wish.

The Absol quivered. He had never thought that he would ever get the chance to fulfill his dream.

“I…I wish for the ability to prevent disasters from happening. I want to help both humans and pokémon from being hurt. Please, fulfill my wish!”

Jirachi closed his eyes. If that is what you wish… They eye on his chest opened up, and the Absol was blasted with a beam of light. Absol instantly began glowing. Another scythe grew out from his forehead on the opposite side of his other scythe. His forehead jewel grew and changed into a four-pointed star. The fur around his neck and chest grew out until it reached his back. Two jewels grew on the back of his paws. The claws on his elbows grew out and formed scythes. His color inverted, changing his face to a bright white and his fur into a deep blue.

Once the evolution was over, Jirachi spoke again. You are now to be called Astrogeddon. Not only do you have the power to predict disasters, but you also have the ability to control them. May the power of the stars guide you to make the right choice. Farewell… With his final words of parting, Jirachi flew off into the sky.

With the power to control disasters, Astrogeddon went down to the people of the nearby town to test his newfound powers. There was going to be a flood of the river nearby, and now that Astrogeddon has the power to prevent it, he raced to where the flood was going to happen.

The town normally has floods once every spring, and the farmers use this to water their crops. However, this one was going to be twice as powerful and destructive. Once Astrogeddon got to the river, he waited until the flood was going to happen. The townspeople saw him coming, and were paralyzed in fear and confusion. Never had they seen a pokémon like this before, and they were wondering if it was a threat or not.

Eventually, the flood came. The villagers rejoiced upon hearing, yet were silent when they realized that this flood was louder than it usually was. Once it reached the dam, which was built to contain the flood, the water crashed against it with a high power. The dam started to fall apart, and the villagers started panicking. Astrogeddon remained unmoving.

The dam broke apart, and the water came to the villagers at a speed that would certainly kill them all. Knowing that they didn’t have any chance to stop it, they stood still, waiting for the collision of water. Yet it never came.

Astrogeddon raised his paw. An aura covered the paw, and he pointed it at the water. Instantaneously, the water froze in its tracks. The villagers opened their eyes, and were stunned by what happened. The wave stayed exactly the same way it was when it was charging at the humans. Slowly, the water retreated backwards and went back into the dam. The remains of the dam glowed a deep blue and rebuilt itself through the psychic power coming from Astrogeddon. The villagers were silent for a moment, then blasted out in cheer. Knowing that he had done his job, Astrogeddon went back up the mountain, content in knowing that his wish had come true.

Many years passed, and Astrogeddon continued to help the villagers by preventing disaster that befell them. One day, Astrogeddon was bored. He decided to try and find the full extent of his power. He climbed down to the ocean nearby. Using his psychic powers, he pushed the water 500 meters backward. He then proceeded to push the water forward, creating a wave about as big as a tsunami. The wave was heading towards him, gaining more power the closer it came. Astrogeddon was contempt in knowing that he had such power. With a second’s pause, he was shocked out of his skin. He had just created a tsunami heading straight towards the town. Hesitantly, he tried to stop the wave from getting closer, however it only increased the power of the wave. He began to panic. The wave was only 30 meters away, and there was no way he could stop it at this point without causing damage. He ran to the highest peak of the mountains, which was the only place that the tsunami will not hit. Then he realized that all of the villagers were still in their homes, completely oblivious to the wave heading towards them. He used his powers to teleport everyone to the peak. It worked, yet not everybody in the town was present. He turned around to teleport everyone else up to the peak, only to realize it was too late. The tsunami had already passed through the town. Even if he were to teleport them up, there was no way to save them, since they have already died. The villagers began to rejoice, except for a few. Those few told them to stop. Once they all calmed down, they began to tell the villagers that Astrogeddon was the one that created the wave that destroyed their town, and that they were witnesses to the event. Everyone then began to charge at him. Astrogeddon teleported away. He has never been seen since then.

Some say that he simply traveled to another land and protect them. Others say that he beamed up into the heavens, protecting those in danger from the stars.It is said that only the people that want to help the world like Astrogeddon once did will ever be able to see him.

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Ability:

Storm Predict: When Astrogeddon is on the field, a random weather condition will occur. In addition, Astrogeddon will not feel the effects of the weather condition

Star's Aura: Astrogeddon's signature move, World's End, only takes two turns to recharge instead of three, but only if Astrogeddon is holding the Stellar Orb

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Move set:

Psychic
Night Slash
Psycho Cut
World's End


Signature Move: World's End

PP: 10
Attack: 200
Accuracy: --
Type: Dark
Category: Special

The user summons all natural disasters to attack the opponent. Has a 30% chance of causing any status effect. the user must recharge 3 turns.

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HP: 100
Attack: 160
Defense: 100
Special Attack: 180
Special Defence: 100
Speed: 60

Overall: 700

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Dex Entry: It has the power to create and control natural disasters. It has secluded itself from humans and pokemon. Only the pure of heart can be able to see it.

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alright, so this is my entry for 's contest. it is the legendary evolution of Absol. i hope you like it!

EDIT: i saw a mishap in the legend, and i got rid of it. nothing other than that

EDIT 2: i changed the second ability. Auto-Detect seemed a little too cheap.
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Comments: 28

Yami-Pokegirl [2013-08-11 18:22:27 +0000 UTC]

Wow a good Job~

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StargazerBird [2013-02-03 16:21:07 +0000 UTC]

Could I use this as an evolution to my rp character?

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Vulcan-flare86 In reply to StargazerBird [2013-02-09 18:19:57 +0000 UTC]

I suppose so. I don't even use it anymore, but credit would be duly appreciated.

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StargazerBird In reply to Vulcan-flare86 [2013-02-10 00:09:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^-^ Just wondering, do you rp? Maybe we can rp sometime

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DoomAnts [2010-07-29 01:40:10 +0000 UTC]

Wow! he's amazing! I wish it was on pokémon...

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Eriistrations [2009-10-04 20:40:17 +0000 UTC]

This evolved form is beautiful, I love its design a whole lot!

Also the story was great too c:

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Vulcan-flare86 In reply to Eriistrations [2009-10-04 22:16:48 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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Eriistrations In reply to Vulcan-flare86 [2009-10-04 22:30:26 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome c:

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ELMO-kibafangirl11 [2009-10-01 06:33:35 +0000 UTC]

i think that this is definately the best absol evo that i've seen so far, well done!

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Vulcan-flare86 In reply to ELMO-kibafangirl11 [2009-10-04 22:16:25 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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ELMO-kibafangirl11 In reply to Vulcan-flare86 [2009-10-05 15:04:32 +0000 UTC]

dim problem XD it is really quite a nice picture too~

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Dew32 [2009-09-29 02:09:49 +0000 UTC]

I think you did a great job on the legendary and the background story!

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Vulcan-flare86 In reply to Dew32 [2009-09-30 00:27:04 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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Tisserovehicks [2009-09-27 05:21:02 +0000 UTC]


woah!
you did a great job on this, but i swear i wouldn't want to see this pokemon, i hate having the the of the world ending/ being hit by an apocalypse attack. that'd be crazy! but it's a good pokemon so it wouldn't really forcefully attack would it?


but nice job on this/great! i hope you win with this entry and rarely do i find an interest in a fakemon

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Vulcan-flare86 In reply to Tisserovehicks [2009-09-30 00:26:55 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

well, technically he CAN create the end of the world, but he's more of a savior than a doombringer. kinda like how Absol are thought to be bad omens when they're only trying to help.

but yes, apocalypse attack would be awesome to animate. lD and he is good, so he only uses it in the most extreme dangers.

i hope i do too...

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Tisserovehicks In reply to Vulcan-flare86 [2009-09-30 00:42:08 +0000 UTC]

what lvl do you find it with those stats? 30? 50?

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Vulcan-flare86 In reply to Tisserovehicks [2009-09-30 03:00:39 +0000 UTC]

umm...they're just basic stats...it's kinda hard to explain...

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Tisserovehicks In reply to Vulcan-flare86 [2009-09-30 22:37:08 +0000 UTC]

yeah but im just questioning for what lvl of it.
it can't be as basic as lvl 1- unless you mean by like how much that stat goes up compared to the others

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Vulcan-flare86 In reply to Tisserovehicks [2009-09-30 23:00:32 +0000 UTC]

oh, it's found in the wild at level 75.

but the stat thig is hard to explain. it's kinda like you said, but...

eh, just look up "Base Values"

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Tisserovehicks In reply to Vulcan-flare86 [2009-09-30 23:03:25 +0000 UTC]

k

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Tisserovehicks In reply to Vulcan-flare86 [2009-09-30 00:41:17 +0000 UTC]

i can tell that now once i read it, but this is a poke-....fakemon that if i saw i would mistake it as a bad one just by the appearance
i would be the one to mistake and attack it if i didn't know what it was.

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Vulcan-flare86 In reply to Tisserovehicks [2009-09-30 03:00:54 +0000 UTC]

lol i would too lD;

same

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Tisserovehicks In reply to Vulcan-flare86 [2009-09-30 22:35:29 +0000 UTC]

heheh

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MKFG120 [2009-09-26 23:37:37 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME!

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Vulcan-flare86 In reply to MKFG120 [2009-09-27 03:02:37 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU!!

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MKFG120 In reply to Vulcan-flare86 [2009-09-27 17:55:09 +0000 UTC]

NP! ;D

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Music-lovinFox [2009-09-26 20:42:55 +0000 UTC]

Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet. o:

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Vulcan-flare86 In reply to Music-lovinFox [2009-09-26 20:44:07 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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