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Published: 2011-01-20 14:47:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 9576; Favourites: 422; Downloads: 124
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LonelinessI wish it was raining
Because I hate every beautiful day
Everyone's playing outside
Having fun
Enjoying the weather
I hate it
I hate beautiful days
I hate being in a good mood
Just to pretend that everything's okay
I hate
All those fake smiles
All those people pretending to be alright
People being happy
Because I know
That I can't
It's not that I think they're not worth it
But knowing deep inside
That I'll never be like this
That I can't be like this at all
Makes my heart feel like a stone
Lying in my chest
Protesting to beat
It makes me wonder
Are there others?
Just feeling like me?
Just like me?
Alone?
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Comments: 109
Reading your poem reminded me of who I am, how I feel each and everyday. In a way it brought me back to reality.
But it touches my heart all the same. That was a great piece of work you created.
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Thanks ♥
I love it when things I do can touch others so deeply x3
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Thank you for giving me the chance to read you work. 
I do hope you're feeling better.
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A little bit thanks
and you're welcome ♥
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I know the feeling all to well and still am drowning in it. I also wrote something similar, but it became very morbid.
Your poem has a lovely melancholy feel to it, and is written really well. A very beautiful piece.
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Thanks ^^
Did you upload yours as well?
I want to read it ^^
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Actually I just uploaded it now that I found a stopping point in my painting. It's called Always and is in my gallery. ;3
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I'll probably upload sometime in the weekend after I finish a few paintings xP
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I think it's good to know that there are athoers feeling the same way
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i know how you feel sweetie. i've been feeling this way lately.
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I hope that you'll feel better in a little while ^^
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this is a crazy awesome deviation <3
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Yes i feel the same way as you... every day i would try to smile and feel that i'm alright.. i can't....
Hope you're okay...
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I think I'll get through it.
I think smiles are something very important coming from your very inside... and that's why I think pretending to smile from the inside... is not the real thing =S
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I feel like this a lot...im so glad i found this cause it just proves that there are people that feel the same way...thanks fir writing it and posting it here!!
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He wouldn't be having such a hard time if he were insane. Multiple-personality syndrome does wonders for getting rid of loneliness!
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He?
Actually I'm tlaking about myself in this poem...
but still... you're right.. sometimes it'd help =S
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I really think it does! Works for me anyway.
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man, the poem and pic match perfectly. Great job.
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Yeah I thought the same ^^
I'm glad that I found the pic.
I hope it's okay using the it though =S
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Wow what a very powerful poem, one that speaks probably to many and I love how your poem correlates with the image, making the words even more powerful.
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Makes my heart feel like a stone
Lying in my chest
Protesting to beat
i can truly say i love this!
-Laura Andon
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thanks ♥
I thought this would descibe the situation of my heart best
It feels so numb
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really great :] explains how alot of people feel.. thanks ^_^'
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