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Published: 2012-08-13 09:58:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 5792; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 40
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Continuation and final page of this: [link]Well, here's the last one. Not much of an ending, but I got tired of the story. Let me know if any of you would like to see more comics or not.
Story:
Upon removing the last of the duct tape, Ensen looked at the man that saved him, surprised to see someone around the same age as him. He stared at him for a moment, dumbfounded. Felix grinned, crossing his arms over his chest.
"Well, I better get going. Try to stay out of trouble, okay?" he said. Ensen let out a grimace inwardly. He knew full well that trouble found him, and not the other way around.
"I'll try." he replied anyway. He would try indeed. Felix nodded, then strode to the counter. He winked at Shana with that same grin plastered on his face.
"Make sure to phone the cops, all right Shana?" he said, reading her name-tag. Shana had hearts in her eyes. She was completely taken with this mysterious, heroic stranger. In a daze, the pharmacist grabbed the desk phone quickly.
"All right." she said dreamily. Felix flashes a thumbs up her way, then gave a two-finger salute, and exited the pharmacy. He'd forgotten to buy the extra bandages he'd come for in the first place, but he didn't want to ruin his dramatic exit. Unknown to him, a certain red-haired dominatrix had seen the events unfold, and watched as he left the pharmacy. A devilish smirk spread across her face.
"Fire Blood, huh?"
~End
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Comments: 18
Sometimes it's good to keep the stories short and sweet, keeps interest and doesn't get dulled out. Your characters are a colorful cast 8D
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I always love catching updates in their little adventures and finding out who's suffering what next XD
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Characterization is very important to me.
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The plots do seem very character driven and I do like that a lot. I mean, I do a lot of RPing and that's pretty much how a lot of a sessions work, just characters together having chemistry and seeing how their personalities interact.
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I can't find myself enjoying BDSM stories unless I like the characters. It's tough to find many character-driven BDSM stories though, especially when the males are the ones being dominated.
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Mostly because it's strictly fetish writing out there, so they think that the act alone dictates story (much like how some stories try to carry themselves on things like smut alone), which is a mistake. You still need compelling characters and a general plot to keep interest.
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Ain't that a 4rth wall break you're doing in the ending?
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Atleast it has to be something.
But I am glad that you got a target on Fire blood atleast.
And strangly,I wanna see Felix and Ensen date or something,I don't know why,I am straight,and I always ship pairs of one gender each(one male one female),this is the first time when I want two guys digging thier hands in each others pants.
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Well, sorry to burst your bubble, but I'm only really into hetero pairings. They won't be a couple. I've never been a fan of "Yaoi" or boy-love.
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Same here,that is why I got so shocked myself.
Ehh,atleast dominatrix has one fiesty target,I wounder how you will be able to dominate Felix.
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It's going to take a lot of hard work. That's for sure. He's a tricky one.
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Well,you can always use his fears against him,and maybe some hostage situations and some big treats outa slow him down.Recapture Ensen,then make a deal with Felix that you'll let him go if Felix's takes Ensen's place.But then after you have made it impossible for Felix to escape,you recapture Ensen.And why not add Lane to the mix.
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Well, whatever I do, it will have to wait for awhile.
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Kay.
Good hunting.Remember to tie them up TIGHT!!!
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