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Vuurstern β Put your records on, tell me your favourite song
Published: 2014-08-20 19:48:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 1446; Favourites: 97; Downloads: 0
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For some reason it feels like forever ago since I drew these two together even though it hasn't been? Weird. But I decided to draw them anyway.And Griwi , I started this before your drawing, while you were eating to be precise, so yea, it has nothing to do with it
I wanted Bienie to be all affectionately stroking against Griwi as she walked by or something, I guess this is close enough xD
Nya. OTP art.
I hope you like it
Made with deviantART muro .
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Hmm, I don't know about the poses xD I was actually really satisfied with how those turned out, and she's supposed to be walking by kinda? But yea maybe they are bad, I don't know.
And yea, I really have to improve on backgrounds.
Thank you! And thanks for critiquing :'3
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I'm not really sure, they just seemed the slightest bit awkward to me. But all in all it's fine, ahaha x3
No problem, it's my pleasure~
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(this is only my second time critiquing, so please bear with me!)
First off, I'll start with the positives of this drawing! The shading is very good- simple but effective. It also isn't overdone, and it goes really well with this piece. The pose is also really good- I think you got the affectionate look down pat!
One thing that bothers me though is Bienie's eye shape/placement compared to her other eye. Her right brown eye is very circular towards the top and goes out toward her cheek more than her left eye. Her left eye is flatter and not so round, which looks off compared to her brown eye. I would suggest moving her left eye up more, making it wider, and making it have a rounded top so it would 'match' the other eye more.
I'm not the greatest at explain things, so I did quickly edited both eyes to try to show what I'm talking about:
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(I forgot to move her eyebrow over, but it should be more over the eye like in your actual drawing.)
I hope this is okay and will help you in the future! Other than the eye placement, this is a really good piece of art c:
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Haha, I can definitely see what you mean with the eye placement - I always have a habit of giving them expressions with uneven eyes, and nowadays I guess I don't even think of fixing eyes with different shapes anymore because I'm so used to giving Bienie one wide open and one squinted eye. I should pay more attention to that, either to making them even or make it obvious they're supposed to be uneven (while I cannot remember if that was the case for this drawing...)
Either way, thank you!
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Okay, I understand! <3
and no problem haha
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You two are perfect together :3 soooo cuteΒ Β
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Ffff, thanks c:
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np :3 hey girl to girl i dumped my ex the 1st of August and i cant sop thinking of him...what should i do to get him off my mind
btw love da artΒ
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Hmm... Why did you dump him? :0
Thanks ^^
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he treated me like a ghostΒ
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Ohh :c That's not good...
Hmm, you should give yourself time to get over him, but also distract yourself. Go outside, practice your hobbies, meet up with friends maybe?
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that could work, I'm seeing my girl friends soon this week.
what i do sometime is if i can get my feelings out is to just draw them, so do i think i could give that a shotΒ
and the thing that is kill me in side is that i was told that he like another girl that iv'e see around my school and he said he didn't like me that way anymore
i wounder is i should go about out with my other ex that still loves me
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That's good!
Vent art can help, I'd give that a shot too. ^^
Yea... that always hurts :C But sadly not much you can do about it... would've been better if he told you himself though.
Do you mean, go out with him again, But do YOU want that or do you just want to be in a relationship again? Why did that relationship end in the first place?
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no no with my other ex not the one i just dumped. my 1ft ex is a sweet heart and truly talks to me, even though we r not dating. i really dont know why i dumped him...i just sick of men treating me like nothing i guess
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I know you didn't mean the one you just dumped, it's your decision really. Just don't date him because you want a relationship again, you really have to mean it xD
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ik and i get told that a lot. But i guess i'll stay single tell i know i meat the one for me :3
anyway thx for the helpΒ
i best head to bed it 4 am here x3
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I see! Good luck
No problem xD And goodnight!
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night my friend
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I can't help but think Bienie has something on the back of the head and Griwi just noticed it
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Now do comment on this.
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ok sorry
I adore this
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the faces
Griwi's expression
and the poses and yourlinesandtheshadingejdhteudfhkjgv
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I love dis okay
and I love youΒ
and omg thank you
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Ffffffffff c:
Thanks dear <3
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I'm glad you think so
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I'm glad <3
And I love you too
and you're welcome OwO
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How do you even draw?!?!?!?!!!??!
HOOOOWWWW?!?!?!?!!!!!!?
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With Muro and a tablet pen owo
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AHHHH ITS SO CUTE yayy I seriously love Bienie's design x3
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rr I know the song you're referencing but I can't put my finger on the title...
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"Put your records on" by Corinne Bailey Rae? ;D
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awww so fucken cute how did u circle and then only color whats inside of it that would be helpful XD
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no problem buut how did u do that thing where you circled it then only colored whats inside of it
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I made a layer underneath the lines, then coloured that with the brush tool ^^
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hmm got to fgure out how to do that XD
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well what program do u use
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For this drawing? deviantART muro owo
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I still don't get how u can make the lines so strait and curvy when I do it the are so wobbly and crocked
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I feel like mine are often too wobbly and I hate it xD But practice is all you can do!
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well urs don't look wobbly they look perfect
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aaawwwww!!!! you two are so cute! if i could have a relationship i would want mine to be like you twos ;v;
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Well ours isn't perfect, no one's is 
And thanks ^^
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