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Crushermach3 [2012-05-14 01:59:15 +0000 UTC]

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(Time for Spring cleaning! Well, better late than never.)
(So, what do we have here?)
(Trash... more trash... and JJ's new snowboard!?)
(Interesting. I wonder where she got it?)
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[3 months ago]
(You immobilized me and covered me in plastic.)
(That I can forgive.) {note: Or "I can forgive that." Whichever.}
(But then you put me in a pink dress! YOU TWO WILL PAY FOR THAT!!!)
[And what can you do? You could never handle us both alone.] {Note: The italicized bit is for emphasis and is optional. Seeing as you already have the entire thing italicized though you will probably want it either bold or capitalized.}
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(What the heck!!?)
(Did you forget with whom you were talking?!)
(I never come unprepared.) {Note: "I'd never come here unprepared" or "I came here prepared" are also viable options.}

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