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I own Pizazz thank you very much.A/N: I realize I've made a lot of mistakes in this one, keep in mind, I'm still practicing with the burn and dodge tools on Photoshop and I use a mouse to do it all. I also need to learn how they do that shadow thing again X3
Anyway, here is the finished fruit of my labor, and I hope everyone enjoys ;3 Oh yeah, I have to tell you her story now. (Let me know what you think!)
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When first created, she was meant to be a research, medic, or messenger bot, and would've been so if she hadn't become friends with Chromia. (Unlike other fem-bots, Chromia was built for battle.)
On the day they were asked what they wanted to be by their instructor Jazz, Chromia claimed she would be part of the Elite Guard. Now Sentinel Prime just happened to be there, (to complain to Jazz about something or other), and after hearing this he laughed and stated, "There's no fem-bots in the Elite Guard!"
He then walked off chuckling, and as soon as he was gone, Pizazz had said, "Instructor, if you don't mind, I'd like to switch my career choice."
"Huh? Well shoot, what do you want to be?"
"An Elite Guard."
The other fem-bots thought she was crazy, but Chromia gave her a high five.
As far as her mind and fighting skills went, she was solid, but she lacked one very important key. Strength. Without that, she would be killed in no time. So her body had to be modified for battle.
On the night of her operation, a female Decepticon happened to see her, and unfortunately chose to disguise herself as Pizazz. This spy then did all they could to locate Sentinel, seduce him into taking her to the main HQ, knock him out, and hacking into the Autobot's main computer.
Longarm discovers her, and rather than kill the spy, he lets her get away, and what few Decepticons she had brought along with her create a diversion.
A small battle then occurs, and during it, Pizazz's new body modifications come in handy, especially the mace. And she proves more than worthy of being an Elite Guard along with Chromia.
Thankfully she is not accused of being a spy since she has several witnesses to her surgery. However, her and Chromia are still denied Elite Guardsmen-ship, b/c they are fem-bots, and the incident with Elita-1.
That is, till they are presented with the ultimatum that they can be Elite Guards, but only if they are bonded or at least intend to bond to another Elite Guard, (excluding each other XD). Both reluctantly, very reluctantly, take the offer, but only to help future fem-bots get the chance to join w/o having to be bonded.
And so Chromia is intended for Ironhide (Hee, couldn't let that one slip by!), while Pizazz is intended for Sentinel, since he really grew to like her after the Decepticon thing. She only chose Sentinel b/c Cliffjumper was crazy and Jazz was her instructor.
Phew!! That was a lot. I'll write a more detailed version of this in a fic or something. Along with some images.
Edit I forgot her Elite Guard symbol
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Comments: 39
LunaTsuki-Kouseinou [2008-09-25 00:48:14 +0000 UTC]
omg O: I have to say, I love that green. X3 Heehee I can't wait to get working on this. X3 And I love her story! Makes me even more excited!
Great job, I also love the shading and character detail
*hugs*
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wachey In reply to LunaTsuki-Kouseinou [2008-09-25 07:52:36 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!! I'm glad you like her color and storyline :3 Hope you have fun drawing!!
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wachey In reply to kiananuva12 [2008-09-23 01:39:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!! I'm glad you think so :3
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Ayumi-Kuroda [2008-09-21 14:52:42 +0000 UTC]
Ah, that's... Ah-mazing! -shot- No, I really do like it. Awesome shading, great colours, and the story is interesting.
XD Sentinel. I love Sentinel. And it's funny, because Riot hates his circuits and causes a lot of grief for him in her short time as an Elite Guard scientist. Like, whoah!
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wachey In reply to Ayumi-Kuroda [2008-09-21 15:24:44 +0000 UTC]
Lol, I figure Pizazz would give him grief too, only then she'd have to deal with him afterward, so she learns fast to just avoid him like Jazz often does. There's a reason they're fast sports cars and not monster trucks X3
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Ayumi-Kuroda In reply to wachey [2008-09-21 15:32:58 +0000 UTC]
XD I never thought of it that way. Makes sense.
Ooh, but I do love how everyone deals with Sentinel. He's such a jerk, even Ultra Magnus gets annoyed. Aw, but Ultra Mangus is a bit of a stick in the mud, too.
Riot: I'll kick their transistors from here to Earth! D8< All of them!
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wachey In reply to Ayumi-Kuroda [2008-09-21 15:36:47 +0000 UTC]
Pizazz: *munch munch* Energon goodie? *offers Riot some*
(And I've been misspelling Sentinel's name haven't I?)
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Ayumi-Kuroda In reply to wachey [2008-09-21 15:45:27 +0000 UTC]
Riot: Oh, yes, please! ^___^ -noms-
(Really? Where? I didn't notice.)
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wachey In reply to Ayumi-Kuroda [2008-09-21 15:59:20 +0000 UTC]
Oh, well in the art notes I had put an 'a' instead of an 'e' towards the end, but I fixed it :3
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HikaruNephele [2008-09-21 13:01:28 +0000 UTC]
I like the green, its not that bad. Just... green with envy? Okay, bad pun. But yeah, I like the reflective floor although it points out that her right (viewers left) foot isn't on the ground.
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wachey In reply to HikaruNephele [2008-09-21 15:22:51 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I know, I was too lazy to correct her foot X3 Glad you noticed though, helps keep me on my toes. *wiggles said toes*
And I really like the color green, which is why I stuck to it.
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HikaruNephele In reply to wachey [2008-09-21 15:46:15 +0000 UTC]
Well, my preference isn't green, but that's all good. Of course I noticed the foot. Its just kinda... tilted heh
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Vonny88 [2008-09-21 06:59:28 +0000 UTC]
While, your getting really better at coloring and on top of that, you used a mouse. Very Impressive.
Overall, it came out pretty good.
I see you are starting experiment more with photoshop. That reflection looks cool. Anyways, once agin, good job.
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wachey In reply to Vonny88 [2008-09-21 07:00:55 +0000 UTC]
Thank you my friend!! How's your break going??
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Vonny88 In reply to wachey [2008-09-21 18:46:30 +0000 UTC]
Okay! I've been working on this realistic pic for a while and I'm about to work on it some more today. Hopefully I can finish your pic by the end of the break and start Sylvi's pic.
How has your break been. Any weird things happened to you yet?
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wachey In reply to Vonny88 [2008-09-22 00:05:07 +0000 UTC]
Nope, nothing weird. It's been pretty boring aside from buying action figures X3
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Vonny88 [2008-09-21 06:39:58 +0000 UTC]
The color scheme looks pretty good, but I would darken up the green a little, however it all depends on what type of style you are going for.
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Ayumi-Kuroda [2008-09-21 03:05:21 +0000 UTC]
I like it, but the green is a little...painful? I dunno. It's neon-green, which is pretty bright. Maybe I'd tone it down? Otherwise, I fully approve!
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wachey In reply to Ayumi-Kuroda [2008-09-21 03:13:32 +0000 UTC]
I could say the same about BB and his bright ass yellow. Then again I just hate that color. But I see what you mean. I'll experiment with the green.
The pants being nearly black are okay though, right??
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Ayumi-Kuroda In reply to wachey [2008-09-21 03:15:36 +0000 UTC]
Ah, well, maybe it's just me, then.
Ah, yes. It's good to have some neutral colours to even things out.
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wachey In reply to Ayumi-Kuroda [2008-09-21 03:45:10 +0000 UTC]
Here you go, tell me what you think:
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Ayumi-Kuroda In reply to wachey [2008-09-21 03:50:27 +0000 UTC]
I like the 'Mikey' green (XD) and the yellow-green one, though the third one in the top row is pretty good, too.
There's my
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Ayumi-Kuroda In reply to wachey [2008-09-21 03:58:43 +0000 UTC]
Yes! I love Mikey! Though, Donny's probably my fave.
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wachey In reply to Ayumi-Kuroda [2008-09-21 04:00:20 +0000 UTC]
Ah, Mikey's my fave
Oh, I'm going to try one more color experiment!! So please tell me what you think once it's posted X3
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wachey In reply to Ayumi-Kuroda [2008-09-21 04:03:52 +0000 UTC]
Alright, it's up now. Um, should I have kept the pants black and her torso the same color as her face, or uh...*flails*
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Ayumi-Kuroda In reply to wachey [2008-09-21 04:06:50 +0000 UTC]
Ah, well... Hurr, okay, this is just how I would've done it.
I would've made her face, upper arms, torso, fingers and pants the same colour as her face, or keep her face grey and make everything else that pale green colour. Or make everything black.
And I would've probably spent 3 hours on Photoshop picking out the colour scheme. OTL
There's my suggestion. She looks fine just the way she is, but make what you will of what I said.
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wachey In reply to Ayumi-Kuroda [2008-09-21 04:19:19 +0000 UTC]
Ah okay. Thank you so much!! You were a really big help!!
Btw, figured out who her love interest is yet?
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Ayumi-Kuroda In reply to wachey [2008-09-21 04:26:22 +0000 UTC]
No problem! Glad I could lend a hand.
And, uh...No? OTL
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wachey In reply to Ayumi-Kuroda [2008-09-21 06:42:55 +0000 UTC]
Tis updated!! Story and all
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wachey In reply to Ayumi-Kuroda [2008-09-21 04:49:03 +0000 UTC]
Oh, well I hinted at who in that colored head image...
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