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wanton-fox — Ravenpaw and the spider
Published: 2013-03-26 02:59:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 7260; Favourites: 397; Downloads: 22
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- Ravenpaw meets a friendly spider, though he might not see it that way. -Little doodle of Ravenpaw, I have more art to post I need to stop being lazy and post it already haha xD
[Edit] - fixed shading and awkward leg lengths. Thanks to ~Greenfirewolf989 for pointing them out ;D
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That's very Clver Wanton, I'm sure if Ravenpaw were out on his own, a little spider would make him freak. Now I see that you cought the facail experssion quite well and the eyes are straight on the spot; most people tend to struggle with the facailfeatures. Now looking atthe top of his head, the ears seem abnormaly large--even for the style. Not to mentios, I think the curve around too much; the back ear expecaily.
Going to Ravenpaw's body, I can see that you got the fur captured in a spot as if it looks like its about to shake with the black apprentice's body. Butthe belly sees to be lagging. When cats arch, the belly should have a slight ark and I think it should be a little more connected to his hine leg. Going to Ravenpaw's paws (XD) his middle toe seems to be a bit too large on the front paw (closest to you) expecailly.
The last thing attatched to the body subject is his tail.Ascool as it is, it's a bit too low. Genneraly, their tais alos willgo straight up than at an angle though this could also be a chalenge artisitcly, This isn't really one thing thatbugs me so much as to maybe somthing you could keep in mind for next time. JUst the largeness of the tail gives it the illusion it is slightly off proportion.
Now the last thing I shall bring to this is the shading. It isabsolutly aesthetic. I canclearly visualize the direction of the light and the setting it could possibly be in. Dispite that, once again, his tailseems a bit off. While on the body it clearly comes from one dirction, his tailseems to semetrical in the sharing of light. Try doing a bit more brightness to the tail on the closer side to you and less on the further side.
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oops, i forgot to add, You are a great artist wanton. :3
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Well it definitely has a cute feel to it, yet you can sense Ravenpaw's fear in the adorable spider. The shading is nice, but that white patch on his chest should be a bit more darkened since it's kind of under his head\shoulder, therefore should have some shade casting over it :3 Once last thing that's kind of throwing the picture off balance is his front right foreleg, it looks as if its almost floating, but a few minor adjustment's here and there should fix it :3 Still, besides some of those minor mistakes you made a cute picture of Ravenpaw's easily spooked personality e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thanks for the critique! ^^ haha I'll try and amend those ;D
I also though of animating the fur? Yes? / No?
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I think its fine as is, but if you decide to animate it, I would suggest making them 2 different files :3 Cause (in my view) The animated with the fur moving would show off more of ravenpaw's fear, but in the non-animated one, it gives more of a cute feeling to it, since you're not focusing your eyes on moving fur, but the whole entire picture. (like seeing the little spider saying hey o3o)
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I can't blame him. I'd freak out if a spider began talking to me, too.
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That would definitely be me in Ravenpaw's situation
Great picture
Keep up the amazing work!
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You should make a mini animation of Ravenpaw doing this!
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why do so many people give ravenpaw purple eyes!? they are amber! lol
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This is cool! I'm that way about spiders too! XD Great work as always!
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that's exactly how I will feel when I see a spider XD
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Ravenpaw. He is one of my faveorite Warriors cats. Brambleclaw will always be the best, though.
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ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL LOFR ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL so so so so so so so sooooo true...
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Spiders aren't that bad xD haha unless you're a fly
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there scary. there is one in my room and I wont sleep there now.
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Its not letting me critique, so I'll do it here.
Haha, I love the picture-he's all like, AIR LAW GAWSH! The picture is very smooth, and you can clearly see the fear in him. It also shows how anxious and easily scared he can be, and the fact that you personified the spider makes it look as if Ravenpaw understands Spider! 
The impact is good as well, and the picture overall is great. He does look a bit older though, and he is considered small. He is a bit big for him size, well, in MY opinion, he might not seem so big to others. Well anyway, its amazing, the light beaming onto him and the shadow is good. I honestly wish I could draw like you. Oh and by the way-his ears are big and fluffy, that's cute!
I rated this 4 stars, and tell me if you think its fair or unfair.
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Oh thanks! 
I appreciate the critique ^^
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ravenpaw is doing the same this i will be doing if i was him
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seeing a spider isn't that bad, it's the ones you can't find that are scary
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kind of have a fear of spiders any kinds of spiders and someone kill me piz some one in my dorm is diving me loco
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spider: s'up bro?
ravenpaw: GET THE FRICK AWAY FROM ME!!!!!!!!
lol lol lol lol lol
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LOL pore Ravenpaw I love it so funny. XD I thank i might draw him next
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Poor* Im dumb XD
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Poor* XD Im dumb
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