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Four of the main characters from my story, Fight Master. Back in January 2018, I created this story and not too long later, I created these characters.(Character Biographies From Left To Right)
Kayla Timberlake: Wears a red-orange top. She is the leader of The American Defense Force, which is a center-winged vigilante resistance movement currently trying to rid America of leftists and rightists before they take over the country and turn it into an oligarchic totalitarian dictatorship. She is mostly angry and determined to save turn America back into a centrist utopia like how it was around a hundred years ago. The story takes place in 2086, so Kayla's aiming for America to be like how it was from the late 1940s to the early 2010s. She says "Wake up, America." a lot in hope to restore America's real centrist patriotism and to recruit more soldiers for The American Defense Force.
Tiffany Madden: Wears a light purple top. She plays video games a lot and really loves it. Two of her favorite video games are Keebler's Cookie Quest and Toddlers at Jackson's House. She is currently fighting to make gaming an enjoyable form of entertainment. Her biggest rival is a radical community of video game nationalists based in Israel called the Nationalist Israeli Gaming Army. They get into beast mode whenever a gaming company doesn't do exactly what they want to and they also believe that all females should be banned from playing video games because they all believe that every single female is a feminist and since they also believe that video games were one of the weapons created by western civilization, they believe that handling such weapons is a man's job and they would never let a poor little old lady (especially their mothers) get their hands on video games because they really care about Eastern women and they protect them a whole lot. Tiffany is also trying to fight to eradicate police brutality against gamers, since cops (especially the SWAT team) have had a history of working as hit men to invade the homes of gamers to abuse them, abuse anybody else in their home including animals, destroy their property, and even killing them in cold blood. Police brutality is ignored by the gaming community except for Tiffany who is angry that nobody cares.
Marlene Nelson: Wears a dark purple top. She is a big fan of movies and TV shows. She enjoys a whole lot of them, but she has a severe hatred for a whole lot more movies. Some of these movies are decades old. A movie she hates is Captain America: Civil War. Her strong hatred towards the movie (which was considered a vintage movie in my story) when she was seven years old and a zit-juicing teen employee of Napoleon's Media (A local geek store) recommended them the movie calling it the Citizen Kane of superhero movies. They rented the movie and Marlene was crying after having a part of her childhood destroyed. The next day, they went to return the movie and Marlene kicked the teenager in the groin and spitted on his face. She now hates Marvel with a passion and says that having your kids looking up to Marvel's superheroes is child abuse. She also hates Disney, especially the Wreck-It Ralph franchise. She claims that Disney is supposed to create timeless movies and that the Wreck-It Ralph franchise is nowhere near timeless, since she doesn't recognize any of the references in the franchise. Some TV shows that she hates are Rick and Morty along with their reboot, Jerry and Django (which is about Jerry Smith and his grandson traveling across the universe to find a way to cure their insanity and depression) and South Park, along with their reboot, The Adventures of PC (which is about PC Principal (called PC in the reboot) arguing and fighting with his arch nemesis, Randy Marsh (called Marsh Man in the reboot)). At Napoleon's Media, she is criticized for her opinions. She has been flipped off, spat on, mooned, and even confronted by petitions to get her banned from Napoleon's Media, which always fail.
Stephanie Lynch: Wears a blue-green top. She has an extremely short temper which developed when she was a little girl who was bullied for her centrist beliefs, causing her to get suspended multiple times every school year for brutally abusing her bullies physically, verbally, socially, emotionally, psychologically, and spiritually. In High School, she somehow obtained a boyfriend, who she fell desperately in love with. Before she could lose her virginity to him, they both were walking home from a date when they were stopped in their tracks by communist extremists who saw that Stephanie's boyfriend was wearing a shirt with a picture of the American flag on it, so they started attacking them. They started relentlessly stabbing Stephanie's boyfriend with knives, katanas, daggers, and machetes. They also tried to rape Stephanie, but she managed to escape before they could rape her and she ran as fast as she could while she left her boyfriend behind as he was gutted like a fish until he was dead. She was traumatized by this and fell into a deep depression. Kayla noticed that she was depressed and she decided to talk to her. After talking to her, Stephanie said that as soon as she got home she was gonna commit suicide but she said she decided not to and she thanked Kayla for saving her life.
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Comments: 22
goodboij [2019-02-24 23:41:05 +0000 UTC]
stuff to say about this:
why havent they changed their clothes, did they throw away all but 1 pair?
they all look like clones with different hairstyles
this would look alright if you maybe changed up the clothes and the faces
note: all the stuff on my profile is bad, i used a mouse and photoshop to make them. just saw this and thought it was kinda weird
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WareNetwork2000 In reply to goodboij [2019-02-25 03:25:05 +0000 UTC]
They all look pretty different to me.
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cootgrl In reply to WareNetwork2000 [2019-02-27 03:21:43 +0000 UTC]
Look at it this way: sure, we can tell them apart when they're standing still and we're looking at them close up, but would that still be true if they were all further away, or if they were moving around quickly?
Or, even if I just take my glasses off, then it becomes a lot harder to differentiate between them.
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WareNetwork2000 In reply to cootgrl [2019-02-27 03:33:34 +0000 UTC]
Just giving my characters a basic look to try and get viewers to understand what they look like and how they act.
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cootgrl In reply to WareNetwork2000 [2019-02-28 05:47:45 +0000 UTC]
You know what, sure. maybe it'll make more sense when we can see them in action and we see how this all comes together in the end
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WareNetwork2000 In reply to cootgrl [2019-02-28 23:30:56 +0000 UTC]
I can't wait to see that, too.
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krispy1264 In reply to WareNetwork2000 [2019-02-26 17:52:17 +0000 UTC]
Same clothing type, same hair category (long and messy hair style), same body style, same face, and same expression
Definitely the same.
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krispy1264 In reply to WareNetwork2000 [2019-02-27 04:32:34 +0000 UTC]
I can look with my eyes you know.
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WareNetwork2000 In reply to krispy1264 [2019-02-27 19:53:35 +0000 UTC]
Well, your criticism is actually working. I'm currently working on improving my art style and I'm trying to keep my characters look more unique so they will not look the same. I'm also working on how I should correctly pose my characters. Thanks for all of the criticism that you have gave me.
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krispy1264 In reply to WareNetwork2000 [2019-02-27 20:15:09 +0000 UTC]
Are you sure?
I want to see some? You got a discord account? if so, note me.
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WareNetwork2000 In reply to krispy1264 [2019-02-27 21:08:54 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. I have tried to improve, but I'm drawing less and less because I have lots of schoolwork to do so I can graduate. I'll also note you my Discord account.
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WareNetwork2000 In reply to krispy1264 [2019-02-28 03:02:55 +0000 UTC]
I noted you my Discord account.
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krispy1264 In reply to WareNetwork2000 [2019-03-01 18:14:45 +0000 UTC]
you're going to accept the friend request?
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krispy1264 [2019-01-01 04:10:36 +0000 UTC]
Alrighty here. Here my honest criticism for the designs.
The clothing designs and body type don't vary much at all. It's like you made a cookie cutter design and tried to switch around yet they look bland and unrecognizable. The first three have the same clothing idea, ripped and messed up. Sure it's rebelion like story going in but, at least put some design to them.
If you didn't read that, I'll tell you,
They look unrecognizable and not much varying in design.
I would look at the backstory but it's all purposely weird crap going but in a imcoherient and eye rolling manner to it.
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WareNetwork2000 In reply to krispy1264 [2019-01-01 04:55:37 +0000 UTC]
"But I say unto you, Love your enemies, bless them that curse you, do good to them that hate you, and pray for them which despitefully use you, and persecute you;"
Matthew 5:44
I hope you understand the King James Version.
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krispy1264 In reply to WareNetwork2000 [2019-01-01 12:53:42 +0000 UTC]
It's like youre not taking what I got seriously. You literally are taking that Ryūko Matoi quote seriously are you.
Well,why don't you think about seeing my ocs (go ahead and comment one of them)?
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WareNetwork2000 In reply to krispy1264 [2019-01-01 21:00:03 +0000 UTC]
None of them aren't worth commenting on.
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