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Published: 2011-08-18 08:29:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 326; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 1
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Description This emptiness I feel,
The feeling is surreal,
As if my skin is being peeled,
While I am lying awake in a mine field.

The black clouds are overhead,
Even as I just lay awake, in bed,
Imagining a better scene, but waking up dead,
Fore all that was found, was a nightmare in stead.

The darkness drowns me with all its fear,
And ever so slowly my eye weeps a tear,
These friends I used to hold dear,
But now to them, the thought of me seems mere.

Lonely I stand on this dusty old ground,
Misery is the only feeling that is found,
Fore to this fate my soul is bound,
And at the gates of hell, I shall be their hound.
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Comments: 6

CookieBingo [2011-09-01 05:01:45 +0000 UTC]

Ah! I miss school days with you... wait that sounds weird, i meant you know like being around you. Your a very inspirational person and your writing always displays that!

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wasaaa5560 In reply to CookieBingo [2011-09-01 05:03:46 +0000 UTC]

look at my message on fb

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CookieBingo In reply to wasaaa5560 [2011-09-01 05:04:29 +0000 UTC]

Okay

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Distorted-Mirror [2011-08-19 17:28:14 +0000 UTC]

You have really gathered all the central things belonging to emptiness very well, your poet is really true and it is really inspiring like Architecting said x)!

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wasaaa5560 In reply to Distorted-Mirror [2011-08-20 01:08:43 +0000 UTC]

thank u

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Architecting [2011-08-18 08:30:08 +0000 UTC]

Awsome! Really inspiring! I would appreciate your comment on my gallery ^^

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