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Wasserbienchen — IBAW 98: Searching (Part 1)
Published: 2013-06-24 15:28:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 17490; Favourites: 146; Downloads: 61
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-> NEXT Yes, yes, sorry sorry sorry for the delay.
23 days since my last update? Shame on me OTL
I've had a busy, busy period in life, coupled with some issues, too. Not to mention that this page… *groan* is one of the least interesting and most complicated to draw that I'll probably ever have the honour of presenting you.
I'm very excited for after this page because then the action really picks up.
I promise.
Arc three will get interesting.
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Comments: 102
I love how White and Chili's Darmanitans look distinctively different. If they were side by side I'd definitely be able to tell which is which, which is great!
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The story keeps getting better and more complex as the story and the characters develop. This is very tasteful and provocative.
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Yes! Yes! Yes! I come back to deviantart with a treat!
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Chili's Darmanitan looks a lot different than yours. It looks a little sad like it knows its fate, and yours looks carefree and happy.
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Plus Chili's is quite fat. o.o
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Heey I really love your work.
A totally amazing story and super nice drawings.
I simply love it.
Hoping the next part will be out soon
and keep up the awsome work!
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Thank you very much *bows*
I'm hoping to get done soon, too… OTL But please be patient.
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-geeks over update, reads description, bashes Wass on head with rolled-up newspaper-
This is *not* one of the least interesting pages. I remember you saying that you wished you had given Chili more time for character development earlier, and I wonder if it's for these upcoming scenes? Lenora described him as being the worst of the Striation Trio, and he was a very cold-hearted person in the first battle. His presence around Unova is probably not a good thing for Plasma or our trio.
Also, Chili, you're supposed to wear gray instead of blue and talk with a worried Bianca instead of two people who are easily mistaken for her parents
I'll go back a little later and see if I can spot any of these people in the Plasma meetings, as it is likely they were tagged as Plasma when Lauren was being followed anyway. As for the bottom half, it was fantastic.
I love the little poof of feathers that was Rufflet, as well as Naub's curiosity. Veera wanted to be carried, and the others were skulking around unseen. It's nice to see more personality from the Pokemon, and a more open White as well. I liked seeing N speak with her too, you could tell he really appreciated her concern and her desire to understand, even if he did dodge her question a bit at the end. I mean, he did give her an acceptable answer, but then he did change the topic as well. And we already know that N is very skilled at manipulating people and words.
I can't help but worry for Naub. He's getting a lot of attention, and the page with the Chade... thing left me nervous that Naub will die soon. Darumaka are powerful, but they are also pretty fragile in Nuzlockes. Especially since there is a new fire type around on your "team..." but then again, you have Veera and Champ who are both pure grass types. So maybe I'm just worrying over nothing. Either way, great job as always Wass!
AND NOW I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT PAGE! PHYSICAL ACTION? IN IBAW? BLASPHEMY! *3*
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Ouch! Haha!
Thank you very much as always for the long comment.
C: Was really happy to see it. Have a hug! *hugs*
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when is the next part coming i'M sooo excited
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Sorry, please be patient ^^" Lately, my life has been very busy!
It will take another while.
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ok then but thanx
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This has been a beautiful nuzlocke run. I've enjoyed it immensely and I wish there was more for me to read. I love the spin on team plasma and N, as well as the whole pokemon battle system. This actually ameks a lot more sense than the battling in the game.
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Thank you very much (:
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The funny thing is that I pictured my brothers Character who knows true suffering from team plasma, His name is Gray Zeroman and team Plasma killed his parents. I figure I would tell you this since I thought it could be funny for you, he is similar to N but he wants befriend Pokémon before he catches them. He has three Pokémon each with a grudge against team plasma, they are Hydreigon, Glaceon and Aggron of which all hate the group with a "P" on them because they hurt them deeply in one way or another.
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Even though I know you really don't like it, I think this is a very beautifully drawn page! I love the backgrounds, with the trees and the buildings and the different Pokemon shown here, especially Chili's Darmanitan (it's interesting how different you made him look from Naub). Thank you so much for putting so much effort into this page; I really think it came out beautifully!
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How. How do you do backgrounds and profile shots so well?! Anywho, excellent page.
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Dang when I saw the rufflet I was like "YES! White's gonna get an awesome braivary! ...oh wait, she can't catch pokemon anymore..."
Least interesting? EVERY. PAGE. OF. THIS. IS. AND. ALWAYS. WILL. BE. AMAZING.
Seriously, the philosophy and questions raised are deeper than any action seen, and then you even mix the two!
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Wow! I really love this page - everything about it is just so beautifully drawn and the dialogue is mature and thought provoking. I especially liked how you drew the Rufflet. It's so cute!
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Chili is too hot for his shirt. I hope he "accidentally" loses his shirt during a police-chase scene or something very convenient :3. I know I'm a horrible person >_<
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I can say that I felt the artwork in this part was awesome!
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Those soft, light foresty backgrounds are really beautiful. And I just want to say that I love the way both N and White look in this. Your faces are absolutely beautiful lately.
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Its still gorgeous as always, and i like the way naub is drawn here. Can't explain why tho.
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The backgrounds in this page are freakin gorgeous, just from the colours alone. uvu I love how kinda gentle N looks all the time like yes ur just precious <3
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Ohai Alex :3
Thank you very much ^~^
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Ich bin schon SO gespannt!*___*
Den Dialog fand ich auch sehr interessant. Im Gegensatz zu Pokemon/Tieren beanspruchen Menschen ja auch viele Privillegien für sich und meinen, über ihnen zu stehen. Wenn die Menschen denn schon so viel auf ihren freien Willen und ihre Moral geben, sollten sie sich auch dementsprechend verhalten und ihr Tun nicht mit irgendwelchen Urinstinkten oder Naturgesetzen rechtfertigen.
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oh my god, wass.
how did you do that!? the detail in the background is amazing! the green tinted light, the shading of the leaves... and bedroom eyes N in panel 23
and here all I can do is draw a stick with a thought bubble sticking out of it, color it lime green and shit brown and call it a tree.
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Lime green and shit brown
Colour description win.
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Aw, Naub is so great. And I like how N matches the background.
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Really beautiful lighting, I love that soft green. Really soothing backgrounds! The darumaka in the first couple Chili panels is really fantastic, I forgot how fluffy they were XD I always like when you show the gym leaders as part of a police role. I know we don't see much of him, but I wanted to mention again how much I love Champ's serperior design!
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Nice scenery though! I know it's something you hate (don't we all), but it looks really good here! Nice work on perspective, especially that last panel.
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Is it just me or is N giving the 'bedroom eyes' look in one of those panels?
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Dat stache though.
What town are they at? Didn't they already pass Milstralton, or is that Mistralton? Or Icirrus?
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This is Anville
I am going off plots! *gasp*
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Ohhh, that makes sense.
I think you've been going off plot for quite some time, so I'm not sure what to expect from the story anymore. That's a good thing.
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Were on our way to Viridian city!!! Were on our way were on our way!!!
In other news. Love that sunlight. Its like there actually stepping into the light
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N is slowing becoming more and more attractive. <333
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UH lala,
CHilli's Darumanittan looks so cute XD
awesome BG, Wass, simple but effective
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SIMPLE? ;A; You call that simple?!
*cries in corner*
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Sorry, it's just… xD Those backgrounds took frickin forever… ;w; Nyo~ron…
But it's okay. They're really not that complicated… I just need… more skill I guess. Haha.
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