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I am a scientist;Pinning down ideas
like butterflies
preserving them in
their fragile beauty
as I take away their freedom,
their life.
I am a parasite;
sucking the soul out
of music and leaving it
a hollow shell
that plays like
the noisy silence in
my ears.
I am a thief;
taking what is not mine,
the world around me,
and pouring it into
a mould that
I claim is
my own.
I am a blasphemer;
playing God in a
sacred place, changing
the world to my
liking when the orchestra
is not under my
conduction.
I am a liar;
selling false havens
to lonely runaways,
giving them a glimpse
of a world more glamorous,
more fantastic than their own,
smiling as I snatch it
from under their noses
while they thank me
for my crime.
I am a slave;
hanging in a
leeching relationship
with the language I choose,
caving to its rules
when I draw in
smears of its
blood.
I am a writer β
these are my vices.
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Comments: 171
MuttMix [2015-01-25 23:28:59 +0000 UTC]
Been a while since I've seen some decent poetry.
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wei-en In reply to MuttMix [2015-01-26 09:38:22 +0000 UTC]
I'm honoured that you would deem this as decent.
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KingTouchstone [2015-01-25 21:53:47 +0000 UTC]
Its great when your profession gets featured alongside parasites, thieves, blasphemers, liers and slaves. I feel truly honored.Β
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wei-en In reply to KingTouchstone [2015-01-26 09:40:28 +0000 UTC]
Don't we all? A profession is a profession, it puts food on the table. Those kinds of things matter less.
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TheWarOfTheRing In reply to KingTouchstone [2015-01-26 03:40:27 +0000 UTC]
(Imagine the applause emoticon, which I was unable to find, is here)
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Enritten [2015-01-25 19:46:34 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for this writing. it's a piece of great work to me. you're not too bad
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EternalRise [2015-01-25 17:50:21 +0000 UTC]
This. Is beautiful. I love the imagery, and the fact this fits with every type of writer. Poet, storytellers, songwriter, doesn't matter.
Well done!
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Nothing2Say1 [2015-01-25 16:07:28 +0000 UTC]
Easily relate for the writer in us all ^_^
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LightningCatH [2015-01-25 13:45:17 +0000 UTC]
I think anyone who writes can easily relate with this ;A;
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wei-en In reply to LightningCatH [2015-01-26 09:43:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you I'm glad you feel that way.
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SmyliArt In reply to ??? [2015-01-25 13:22:44 +0000 UTC]
Yes, that it very accurate.
Everytime you take something you believe is perfect and try to form it into literature, it feeld like you soil it by your attempt to write it down.
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Sweetie-Chars In reply to ??? [2015-01-25 12:48:13 +0000 UTC]
This is wonderful and accurate.
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wei-en In reply to mintiemiu [2015-01-25 11:14:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad that you do
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Fictasy In reply to ??? [2015-01-21 17:34:16 +0000 UTC]
This is an amazing view on our art. Very impressive.
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wei-en In reply to amelinefer [2014-01-21 01:40:28 +0000 UTC]
But is madness being a writer?
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amelinefer In reply to wei-en [2014-01-21 02:32:27 +0000 UTC]
Well, I quote Balzac: The fool and the writer are the ones who see an abyss and fall over.
I happen to be both
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AN0N7M0U5 In reply to ??? [2013-10-05 13:07:03 +0000 UTC]
wow.
Would you maybe check out my writing? I really need some critics. I'm a young Dutch writer who likes to take risks, so I decided to write a book in English... Just put the first page up. Please check it out.
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wei-en In reply to AN0N7M0U5 [2013-10-08 08:24:21 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm afraid that I have too much on my hands right now to give you helpful feedback on your work, but I had a look and it's not too bad at all Here are some links to groups that you can submit your works to for feedback, though!Β groups.deviantart.com/?qh=&β¦
It's great to join some communities like this, in order to develop your writing.Β
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Devin-Trinidad In reply to ??? [2013-03-20 00:07:46 +0000 UTC]
I am a musician;
I string words together
Creating a peaceful melody
That changes,
That teaches,
That inspires
As it holds my audience in deep rapture.
I'm pretty sure that I ruined the flow, but I tried my best. By the way, I loved the piece and you're free verse style!
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wei-en In reply to Devin-Trinidad [2013-03-20 08:36:15 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha no worries, it's wonderful!
Thank you very much!
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nounouisawesome In reply to ??? [2013-02-27 02:50:19 +0000 UTC]
beautiful it almost made me cry.
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wei-en In reply to nounouisawesome [2013-02-27 03:28:26 +0000 UTC]
;_; Thank you for your kind words!
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