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Published: 2012-01-06 11:26:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 105549; Favourites: 388; Downloads: 22
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Description I am a scientist;
Pinning down ideas
like butterflies
preserving them in
their fragile beauty
as I take away their freedom,
their life.

I am a parasite;
sucking the soul out
of music and leaving it
a hollow shell
that plays like
the noisy silence in
my ears.

I am a thief;
taking what is not mine,
the world around me,
and pouring it into
a mould that
I claim is
my own.

I am a blasphemer;
playing God in a
sacred place, changing
the world to my
liking when the orchestra
is not under my
conduction.

I am a liar;
selling false havens
to lonely runaways,
giving them a glimpse
of a world more glamorous,
more fantastic than their own,
smiling as I snatch it
from under their noses
while they thank me
for my crime.

I am a slave;
hanging in a
leeching relationship
with the language I choose,
caving to its rules
when I draw in
smears of its
blood.

I am a writer –
these are my vices.
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Comments: 171

wei-en In reply to ??? [2012-01-07 03:19:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! Personally, I was blown away when I woke up this morning to so many messages...I thought that the subject might provoke some interest, but I didn't expect so much support...

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crazi-4-muffinz In reply to ??? [2012-01-06 23:18:54 +0000 UTC]

its beautiful <3

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wei-en In reply to crazi-4-muffinz [2012-01-07 00:26:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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crazi-4-muffinz In reply to wei-en [2012-01-07 01:00:04 +0000 UTC]

your very welcome

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Velvet-Angst In reply to ??? [2012-01-06 22:18:29 +0000 UTC]

I positively loved this work. The repeating motif at the beginning of each stanza ties the whole thing together and presents so much more than a poem, but a portrait, a biography about the writer. This work is really phenomenal, I can't stress it enough how much I like this. The flow of it is very pleasing. I like to read it because it seems to slither around on my tongue, like something I can't quite grasp but know is there.

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wei-en In reply to Velvet-Angst [2012-01-07 00:25:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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LittleFishPenguin95 In reply to ??? [2012-01-06 21:59:32 +0000 UTC]

Love this

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wei-en In reply to LittleFishPenguin95 [2012-01-07 00:24:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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LittleFishPenguin95 In reply to wei-en [2012-01-07 00:52:24 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome

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Xaathel In reply to ??? [2012-01-06 20:13:34 +0000 UTC]

Yet another good one. Similes and metaphors abound but don't get confusing, that's hard to do.

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wei-en In reply to Xaathel [2012-01-07 00:24:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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MewTheNinjaKitty In reply to ??? [2012-01-06 17:04:24 +0000 UTC]

Perfection.
This is amazing.

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wei-en In reply to MewTheNinjaKitty [2012-01-07 00:24:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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JMToledo In reply to ??? [2012-01-06 16:59:43 +0000 UTC]

An awesome look into what it means to be a writer. Well done.

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wei-en In reply to JMToledo [2012-01-07 00:23:53 +0000 UTC]

Aha, I somtimes have a pessimistic perspective of life.

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Daydreaming-Aurora In reply to ??? [2012-01-06 14:55:18 +0000 UTC]

This is just gorgeous. Such talent!

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wei-en In reply to Daydreaming-Aurora [2012-01-07 00:23:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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WritingObsessed In reply to ??? [2012-01-06 11:59:11 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful. i just had to go back and read it again. i love it

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wei-en In reply to WritingObsessed [2012-01-06 12:03:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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X-Prodigy-X In reply to ??? [2012-01-06 11:28:56 +0000 UTC]

Such a natural rhythm, perfectly constructed on the page. You use of language is excellent too

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wei-en In reply to X-Prodigy-X [2012-01-06 11:59:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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