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Weirdeh — Miniature Waterfall
Published: 2010-08-07 18:48:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 730; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 17
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Very proud of this <3I used some tips I found on =griffsnuff 's BG tutorial
And it really helped <3
Feel free to use, but give me credit and don't take off the signature.
PLEASE CRIT!!
Dont ask why theres a random banana in the corner xDD
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Comments: 33
ASFSKBVDVUGVUIS I can see why you're proud of this. <3
GOOD STUFF: The reflections on the water and the details and drops of dew on the leaves are made of EPIC WIN. I saw those ripples next to the lily pads, which helped make your little pond look even more realistic. The shading has a very nice, natural look to it, and the colors go well with each other. This piece makes my eyes happy. That water looks so wonderful because the reflections and ripples are so accurate and detailed.
BAD STUFF: What's with the blank, tan-colored space up there at the top? I WANT MOAR DETAILS. MOOOAAARR. That log/branch thing in the lower right corner looks a little wonky, I think you went a bit overboard with the blue/green/white/yellow shading and highlights. The rocks deserve some more detail and next time, try making the waterfall look more realistic. It should branch off in more directions and flow through the cracks and crevices of the rocks. Lastly, those purple lilies are a bit off. I think they're rather squashed-looking.
This is a wonderful piece overall, it's pleasing to the eye and very detailed. I love it and I hope that helps you in the future.
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Aww thanks!!
This helps me a lot :3
lol yes the flowers are really messed up xD
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You're welcome. 
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I'd recommend a wacom bamboo tablet, i dont really know any others, and thats what i have and i really like mine.
mine is small but you can get larger sizes
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Comment Crit!!
Cons:
usually a water fall like this would fall inbetween some cracks not going over the rocks them selves, You probibly shouldve added more white and motion to where the waters meet, The lillypads were a good idea but the flowers usually are more fanned out liek here: [link] , there should be more moss on the log and rocks,
Pros:3
The reflections in water are very good!! ^-^ The leaves on the rocks are beautiful:3, The whole picture has very good movement, I like how the shadowing looks in the picture, not like a line art, very nice
Hope i helped:3
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Thank you so much!!
Yes I know the flowers fail >n>
but thank you
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your welcoem X3 I like to do crits!
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Oh wow i love the colors you choose for this ^^ <33
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thank you ^^
i hope i can get as good at making backgrounds as you :3
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wow! i really love the feeling to this picture! It's warm, nice, and full of life! I've actually been planning on drawing something similar to this, again in the warm feeling type picture. Check it out of you want
I only have a sketch so far,
but anyways this is an automatic *favz and sets as desktop background (lol, no seriously ^3^)*
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thanks!!
It was going to be the moonpool from warriors at first (if u read that series) but i decided not xD
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kool ^D^
I have read warriors but I can't really remember what the moon pool is,
I've only read to the second book in TNP, so maybe I just haven't read it yet
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yeah the moonpool is in the 3rd series
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IT BURNSSSS! YOUR AWESOMENESS!
/covers eyes/
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Awesome work ^w^ the banana gives this picture emotion XD
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thanks!!
Yes bananas are so emotional
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wow this is really beautiful! It gives off a peaceful, relaxing aura 
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Thanks!! Thats what I was going for (:
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