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Whats-Left-Of-Me — Understanding
Published: 2012-10-24 06:26:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 3833; Favourites: 194; Downloads: 49
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Description Its the small things around me
The little moments, of peace
The smile as we come to know the world;
Dead and cruel

The path we choose
So care free, nothing to loose
One step at a time
Obstacles mean nothing, all is left in sublime

Innocent born into sin
Almost like a test
To see who'll win
Like baby birds from the nest

Its a strange world
Too young, with much experience
So naive to the absurd
In each generation, we see the carnage
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Comments: 9

Olaf68 [2012-11-18 18:40:20 +0000 UTC]

beautiful poem

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Whats-Left-Of-Me In reply to Olaf68 [2012-11-19 16:52:34 +0000 UTC]

^_^ Thank you

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Olaf68 In reply to Whats-Left-Of-Me [2012-11-21 01:43:29 +0000 UTC]

:} you're welcome

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MrFuzzyPants2049 [2012-10-24 17:29:43 +0000 UTC]

I agree, a link to the original would be in order. BUT....

Quit whining. Out of the millions of photos she could have chosen she picked that one. So stop with the asshattery and be happy that someone appreciates their art enough to want to put it to something.

Great poem BTW. If all of you other so called artists can't appreciate someone using your work for something, don't post at all.

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Angelalala923 [2012-10-24 14:05:53 +0000 UTC]

only clicked this for the picture

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mramirez84 [2012-10-24 13:59:34 +0000 UTC]

Fucking awesome

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WaterWizz [2012-10-24 10:59:44 +0000 UTC]

Now, that's what I call a creepy ass picture. Nice poem as well.

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Weenie69 [2012-10-24 10:50:23 +0000 UTC]

cool:3

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mismatching [2012-10-24 10:24:16 +0000 UTC]

This is really good.
I feel the passion in this poem.

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