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Published: 2012-07-31 23:59:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 2273; Favourites: 86; Downloads: 7
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Weee finally finished
This took forever Though I'm really happy with how it turned out!
From left to right, top to bottom:
Bluestar, Tigerclaw, Yellowfang, Fireheart, Sandstorm, Dustpelt, Graystripe, Ravenpaw
Enjoy!
(c) Art ~Whiskullb00
(c) Story and characters ("The Erin's") Erin Hunter
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Comments: 19
without even looking at the desription i named all the cats except Dustpelt
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=3 I especially love Graystripe, and Yellowfang
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the lineart is great, i like the small brush you used and the sketchy-ness. i dont see any mistakes involving the lineart.
The shading is ok, i would have suggested using different colors instead of darker monochrome like colors
exp: orange. Shading: Darker orange X Shading: red or red orage (check)
i like the brush you used for the shading but it looks kinda messy in some places
exp: firehearts ear shading just looks like a big smudge
I see no lighting Β At all in this picture
Anatomy wise you seem a bit off in some places
Firehearts back legs are supposed to be...lower and ravenpaw's and bluestar's muzzle seem off. i dont really know how to describe how it is but here are a few pictures
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Bluestars neck should be just a bit longer
Firehearts tail looks like its coming from the bottom of his belly rather than his butt
everyone else seems to be ok
The background looks kinda quick. I would suggest not using brushes but actually doing the grass and trees, i think you could.
Grass is never Perfectly green, at different times of day and weather can change how grass can look. with a very bright blue sky i would suggest using a yellowish shade of grassΒ
[link] Β can you see the hints of yellow? also its best if you refrence pictures of grass and skies
or change the sky, the sky isnt the one shade of blue and the clouds also need some shading/lighting
I dont really know what that brown stuff is in the background also....
The rock looks pretty well done, but i would have suggested putting some lighting on it maybe
[link] Kecleons color theory helps a lot with colors and backgrounds and other stuff ^^
I really like the designs you gave each character, especially graystripe. This picture is pretty well done though, other than the minor mistakes ^0^
sorry if i was too harsh :C
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Oh wow o3o Amazing constructive criticism, Lol, I did notice that fireheart's legs looked weird and his tail. But I didn't really pay attention to the other stuff ;o; Thanks a lot! This will help me improve!
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Very nice work! I like the different brushes you used. Drawing all the individual cats must have been a challenge. I like the variation of poses. Keep it up.
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Haha, I love the little Yellowfang-loaf. And poor Ravenpaw getting the eye from Tigerclaw. Nice work :]
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Thank you for the great comment! ^u^
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Wow! I love the line-art being so neat! And the background!
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