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Published: 2008-02-23 18:29:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 215; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 2
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Description One more time is another last request
Each one building upon each other
Seemingly filling up the holes in your heart
Just like another serial killer romaing the streets
Killing more to replace something not there
Pleading for forgiveness of his crimes
Though he's already used his last request
He can never go back now nor later

Just how we view a relationship
You must deal with the imperfections
Just like a rotting and broken ship
To fill up the holes you must try to fix them
But if you use your last request on something selfish
You have to just let your boat sink more
In the vast and neverending ocean
Doesn't that seem familiar?

You take the pain as your reliever
Fill it in your heart till you've had enough
But tell me one more time is worth to have it at all
To bear such heavy weight left on your heart
All the screaming and all the fist fights
Isn't it enough already by being so numb
Sitting in your corner and just crying alone
Can you use your last request wisely now?

So hung over on the edge
That, in fact, you have already fallen
Breaking your body and bones for something so vague
It doesn't make sense when you're trapped on two sides
Trying to do the right thing without making a crime
Just talk to yourself one last time
Going in the past can never solve yourself
Because you already used your last request
Now do you get the picture?

You've made that choice and nobody else
You chosen to be in the state you are in
You shouldn't try to fix what has already been done
The time to correct is where you shall make your stand
But just know this one little fact
Once you go on, you can never turn back
Because the last request is already in the act
The power is in your hands and that is a fact
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Comments: 12

VincentFaust9 [2008-02-26 16:09:09 +0000 UTC]

Very good poem! Words are really, really cool!

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WhiteDivinity In reply to VincentFaust9 [2008-02-27 14:58:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks man =3

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butterflydorienne [2008-02-26 01:59:22 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Well done. And so true!

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WhiteDivinity In reply to butterflydorienne [2008-02-26 04:08:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Dori, that meant alot and yes it is very true ^^

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DeeplyInThought [2008-02-24 18:04:24 +0000 UTC]

really nice and very true!!

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WhiteDivinity In reply to DeeplyInThought [2008-02-25 01:48:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks man ^_^

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DeeplyInThought In reply to WhiteDivinity [2008-02-25 03:00:49 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!

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silentange101 [2008-02-24 00:35:43 +0000 UTC]

Well written, really made me think. This is unique and different too. I wonder what my last request would be...lol...maybe I already know...

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WhiteDivinity In reply to silentange101 [2008-02-25 01:48:23 +0000 UTC]

Hope so <3 x3

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silentange101 In reply to WhiteDivinity [2008-02-25 22:02:00 +0000 UTC]

lol what do you mean you hope so? hmm? lol

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WhiteDivinity In reply to silentange101 [2008-02-26 00:02:32 +0000 UTC]

I mean I hope you did like it ^^

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silentange101 In reply to WhiteDivinity [2008-02-26 18:03:47 +0000 UTC]

oh, i do!

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