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WhiteDivinity — Nothing For Me
Published: 2008-01-21 22:56:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 156; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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Description There's nothing I want that give me what I need
Just pick it up and throw it away
Nothing for me that I want, you just taunt
Take it and just leave me anyways
There's nothing for me
So just take yourself and run away from here
There's never anything for me
Stay away and let me sleep away

How many times do I have to repeat
The things that I say are what I mean
Even though it's tear-breaking
Everything I touch or love just breaks
And it leaves me in a slump
With depression and regretting what I did anyways
There's nothing for me now
So just take everything and run away
There was never anything you could do for me
Just stay away and let me live in the darkness
So I can sleep away

There was nothing for me here
Just full of depth perception of lies and deceit
That I cannot rewind time
And make everything feel the same
So I lie here drenched in sorrow
Trying to forget everything

There's nothing for me now
So just take everything and run away
There was never anything you could for me
Just stay away so I live in the dark
And let myself just drift away
Nothing for me....
The pain just keeps taking my breath away
There was always nothing...
Tears dropping and searing pain!!
There's nothing for me here
Darkness seeping in and killing me!
Never anything here
Just a pile of waste called you and me!
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Comments: 8

sarah-15 [2008-01-26 05:01:06 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is powerful. I love the word choice and I like your writing style. Great work!

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WhiteDivinity In reply to sarah-15 [2008-01-26 05:12:27 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^^

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VincentFaust9 [2008-01-25 13:16:50 +0000 UTC]

Cool? I think it's brilliant!!

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WhiteDivinity In reply to VincentFaust9 [2008-01-25 21:44:55 +0000 UTC]

Really? Awesome

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ElfMuse [2008-01-22 08:59:34 +0000 UTC]

I find it wonderfull lol,the lenght however mostly scares me away lol,but in your case i just keep reading because i know that it stays good or even gets better when you are reading it completely,the emotions that you express are so real.
I must say this is one of my Favorite poem/story from you so i'm adding it to my

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WhiteDivinity In reply to ElfMuse [2008-01-23 03:40:56 +0000 UTC]

I see xD

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british-doll [2008-01-21 23:21:12 +0000 UTC]

It's very well written, and the length here, although in some poetry, makes it hard to read, really is a positive, because it allows you the space and time to tell your whole story. it works very well.
I love the desolation you've managed to convey, the emotion's very clear to the reader.
Good effort

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WhiteDivinity In reply to british-doll [2008-01-22 02:18:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the review xD

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