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WhiteDivinity — Ominous Ringing
Published: 2008-05-15 03:09:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 167; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description I have heard an ominous ringing coming from the door.
My heart raced for a split second for unknown reasons;
Curiosity running through my tense veins and arteries.
I crept up from my seat slowly trying not to rush;
My hands pressed on the handles of the chair for support,
I stood tall over the floor and darkness fallen in around me,
Only showing the door and its aura around it.

I walked slowly through the darkness,
Hearing only the sounds of my shoes slap against the floor.
Du-du-du-du-du, the pace of my footsteps was steady.
My eyes were focused on my front door, I kept walking;
Time seemed to slow down more quickly.
The only thing between me and the ominous figure through the window;
A simple designed door with square figures etched into the wood.

My hand seemed to arise from my side by itself;
It could sense the signals driven through my head,
That I needed to open this door and pleasure my curiosity.
The door handle was cold as ice when I gripped around its handle;
I couldn’t hold in the feelings anymore, I swung open the door.

My eyes blinded by the sunlight outside;
The figure, still unrecognizable, until my eyes adjusted;
I heard his voice clear as a bell, if stricken twice.
“Hello sir, I’m here to offer you some products not in stores;
Proven to be worth your time and money if you just listen.”
Then he smiled as me and stared at me with his ungrateful eyes;
Trying to hypnotize me into giving my time up to be corrupted inside,
With his uncanny words and unorthodox reasons.

I was already tired of hearing his filth and slander;
Always tempting and full of propaganda, I slammed the door.
Creeping back slowly to my chair, I could still hear his ominous voice;
“Sir, if you could just give a minute to explain….”
His voice faded out of my mind after those last few words,
As I bent down and slammed down my body against the back of my chair.
“I hate salesmen people coming to my door,” I said to myself in despondency.
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Comments: 6

ryu-son [2008-05-15 21:36:00 +0000 UTC]

Great job! I feel like this sometimes when I get a phone call from a bills-guy. X3

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WhiteDivinity In reply to ryu-son [2008-05-16 01:16:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh noes~! Bill xD

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butterflydorienne [2008-05-15 14:21:13 +0000 UTC]

Oh that was funny. I really like that, how you get the reader so interested in what's going to happen, then boom, it's sales people. xD Great job!

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WhiteDivinity In reply to butterflydorienne [2008-05-16 01:16:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you x333

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ShadoCrytr [2008-05-15 03:53:35 +0000 UTC]

Lol, I liked the build up, and abrupt crash. xD

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WhiteDivinity In reply to ShadoCrytr [2008-05-15 03:57:10 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^______^

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