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whiteknight222 — Couple WIP request
Published: 2009-07-12 23:02:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 609; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 10
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Asked for this request. I hope she likes it I tried my best to emulate her style so her OC's would look good to her. I am getting a challenge for sure drawing all kinds of things, that I wouldn't normally do. If you are still on let me know if this pleases you so I can play with some color.Related content
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They look very cute^^ But the anatomy lacks a bit with this one, maybe it's because you tried someone else's style? Anyhow I think it's a nice drawing, I like how you did the clothes, especially her skirt =3
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This drawing is weird I tried to fix it and it got erased to death LOL......gone.
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=O It's completely gone now?
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Something bad with it it has to be fixed.
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it is now eraser dust LOL.
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lol. Thats good then
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This is soooo awesome!! I love this soo much!!
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You know it as if some hate it and some love it and Idk why LOL. If you loveit maybe you'll love the updated version,cause I'll have to touch it up.
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hehe sure I'll see it. 
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Wow - it's awesome. But I have a few Suggestions. His head is a bit too big. And the girl is supposed to be timid and shy with the guy loving and protecting her. Apart from that It looks awesome.
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Ok I'll rework it umm but a total redraw I'm not sure, I think this has alot of promise if I can fix it up. So you tell me what you'd like to see diffrent and I'll work with you. If you don't tell me I won't know.
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Well, The girl is blind, and timid and shy. The guy is half human and half robot. I didnt say a complete redraw but fixing is nice.
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I'll touch it up the next free chance I get.
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OK then take your time.
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It's his neck dear, I think his head looks fine. I would make his arms a little bigger though. It's how he is standing that bothers me...
Is it profile or frontal?
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3/4 view I love to post WIP but I think I posted this one a little early, Thank you though I'm sure with all the suggestions I'm getting I can turn this around I've done it before :0
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You'll manage, I'm sure.
Flip your pictures horizontally to check for errors in anatomy. 
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Oh yeah forgot that trick.
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Its a handy one it is.
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Cute couple.
I like how his hair hangs down and the caring pose of the two.
I agree with silver6kraid that the girl is very small.
His arm fits the girl size but the shoulder and his head are a bit too big in comparison to her.
Regarding his shoulder the arm would have to be thicker.
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The girl is 9 and the guy is 20 the his forearm bends around her and therfore foreshortens? His head is big though hmmm I'll have to look it over. THanks.
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ah - didn't knew the ages of the two - that explains the difference in height - and then his head is most probably not too big.
She is very feminin for a 9 year old - thats why i guessed she would be much older.
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She's got some curves LOL I have to touch this one up.
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Thank you not quite sure how this one is going tho.
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Well, it's caught my attention. ^^
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it still looks good...kind of disproportionate, and that takes away from the picture, but i think that's just the style...
it would be cool to see in your style also
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Where is there dispoportion I'm tired and I'm having a hard time see it.
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well...and i'm not pretending to be an expert at anatomy or anything...
but his head is too big for his body , and i am not entirely sure, but it looks to me like some part of the girl is too long, either her torso or her legs 
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I think you are right I'll have to look this over.
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Thanks alot it is rather hard.
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you're welcome, and i know how it is
no one can be expected to be perfect on their first try 
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LOL I know not my best I'll fix it though. It's the style transition.
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