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<<< Page 15 [link]And that's that for Chapter 1!
Hopefully this will provide a nice professional grade to the beginning of the series if I ever look to submit it for publishing. ^V^
Thanks for reading! =3
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Wha-- Those robot birds are kinda similar to White Fire...
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They're almost as big as WF, their claws are sharp as WF's and... well. Oh, you know what I mean!
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Interesting observation! Maybe their design was influenced by White Fire, or perhaps, some other similar creature =3
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Why I get the feeling you're sarcastic?
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No sarcasm, honestly! It really is an astute observation. ^V^
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^v^ Almost more of a teaser chapter, isn't it?
Nice job on this, man! It's been fun watching the new vision of this story unfold!
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It almost makes ya want me to keep going, eh? X3
It's been a pleasure refining this story! ^V^ Thank you!
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You're very welcome! ^v^ And the answer to that question is...yes!
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