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I need to try again, I guess... This composition is not working out for meΒRelated content
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Thank you! Another attempt on a bigger surface is definitely on my to-do list. It's a pretty good concept and trying to get it right seems worth it.Β
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Thanks ! I will do another A3 version eventually (like the og one)
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I know nothing about art composition but as the old saying goes, I know what I like and I like this.
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It's definitely off. The entire thing needs to be redone. The design of the character and stuff that surrounds it are pretty decent, though, so the next version probably won't be that different.
Thanks !!Β
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I love it and maybe you could try with the moon more to the right? I'm not good at composition and honestly this looks already very good but if I had to be picky since you feel like it's not working that would be my little suggestion.Β
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I will try again using the A3 format. I think this will solve the issue.
Thank you !
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Maybe you could move the figure a bit to the left to show more of the sky. The picture almost follows the rule of thirds, but it's centered too much to adhere to it. That might be why it looks weird. Love her face though, it's so haunting~ The details are also gorgeous
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Thanks ! I will have to switch back to A3 format to do it properly...
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Ah yeah that'll work!
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Dark,.......mysterious......AND BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Good stuffs!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Maybe with some shading on the flowers/leaves?
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No, the entire thing needs to be done again.Β
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